FF: My Rainbow In The Rain, Chap 4 on Pg 10 - Page 9

Originally posted by: Sonia.himk

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Beautiful update...❤I'm not the kind who can write long posts but a heartfelt request not to discontinue this one....its so beautifully written🥰🥰 n a different version of whatever I've read on the forum ...so please continue it ❤❤.Waiting eagerly for.the next part.

Originally posted by: Pooja1973

Beautiful update...❤I'm not the kind who can write long posts but a heartfelt request not to discontinue this one....its so beautifully written🥰🥰 n a different version of whatever I've read on the forum ...so please continue it ❤❤.Waiting eagerly for.the next part.

Thanks dear 🤗 I am thankful to u guys for giving it a shot and I know since it is an AU, it might not be easy to envision a story set in a different environment given we have seen the show for a long time. I am happy you loved it ❤️

super cute update🥰❤️

Priya actually going to the airport with them to drop off Vedika was the cutest 😂 you’ve got yourself a loyal fake wife, Ram🤣

I really did like that there were no hard feelings between Ram and Vedika, it was just that he didn’t like her like that and he somewhere feels bad for using her to spite his mom also.

I liked what Bri told Priya that he doesn’t like to break anyones heart❤️

Then him remembering their meet cute😭🥹🥰 that was so adorable and Bri teasing him about it and telling him it was destiny 😭❤️

they really do give off soulmate energy, dont they🥰 now they’re in the same hospital too😍❤️

loved ram at the hospital and him getting the kids toys🥺🥺 and special one for Zara baby❤️ And then Priya saving the day by threatening the kids🤣

Priya felt so protective over Zara🥺 Through that argument/conversation, Ram got to see more of Priya. I hope he does come back often to see Zara like he promised because Priya is right, the little girl would wait for him🥺❤️

I’m excited to see how everything is going to unfold😍 cant wait for the next one as always❤️

Thanks for taking a moment to share your thoughts on what most of them assume to be fillers but as a writer, its important for me to build a universe where every character has a role to play and I can't make it all about RaYa and use the rest as props.

No problem. I can understand that strong supporting characters make a story better. So, do give them proper justice too. Just make sure to not derail the main plot. If you can strike a proper balance between the main characters and their equation with the supporting ones, it would be an incredible storytelling. So, good luck with that. :)

I am glad u like Vedika coz she is the most hated vamp in the show. She is absurd in her own way and I cannot show the main character's ex as a vamp or a villain coz what it will it make them for having fallen for them in the past? Idiots? But well I don't like having her as a potential love interest in the future. Hence gave it a funny

Wow, how many vamps are there on the show? You're very wise in not showing her as a romantic rival for Priya or a complete bad guy here. Kudos.

Ram and Priya never really got along and they were trying to be civil for the sake of Brinda. Priya agreed to tag along only for Bri's sake and as of now, she has no feelings for Ram.

It shows Priya and Brinda are becoming very good friends with each other. I really do hope you explore their friendship too in the future, whatever their future holds in regards to Ram and Priya's love.

Thanks again for liking Sara Priya convo. I like to include light hearted moments to establish the main character's bonds with other characters too. For Ram, Priya was nothing short of magic and the child in him kept her memory alive. About how or why Priya broke his heart, its a long way to go till we get there.

Yes! I read you guys' conversations in the EDT (I stalk it sometimes 😅😅) and realized y'all don't like Sara very much on the show. I feel here she'll make up for her incompetence on the show and maybe help them unite. I know I'm thinking of something too far, but there's no harm in hoping, is it? ;)

About Ram, yes, he's a sweetheart. I love how the characters in your fic are like us everyday folks but still carry a strong aura that is similar to their original selves on the show. Like, Ram is sensitive and Priya is strong-headed. Hm, looks like we'll have to wait for them fall in love. 'kay!

Haha, don't worry. I will continue to read your fic as long as you write. And hopefully you will finish this one.

Chapter two was really so cute 😆. Vedika antics were really so cool especially when she decided Ram looked too white and marched towards him to give a make up lift for our poor boy 🤣. I was bit sad it turned to be a dream 😆.

Loved Ram and Priya first encounter thanks to Whisky. Looking forward to more snatching tricks from Whisky .

I am really loving the story you are creating with the characters and I know they are bound to get their path crossed because of Bri again and I am excited for it.

Loved the chapter Mandy and can't wait to catch up ❤️

Loving the storyline.......and the characters build up..........

Sincerely hope u continue this, it has all the ingredients for a fiery beautiful love story!!!!

Chapter 3.

As always it was too good Mandy ❤️🤗. And no it didn't feel as a filler and I love how you are setting up the character in this world and explaining their connections to each other. I guessed from last update about Kunal and it is pretty sad to get it confirmed now.

Priya and Ram were delightful together be it their taunting or fighting mode. Especially when Priya held his hand for support. I am loving their journey for now.

Ram Kapoor and his ex is a lovely story too. Vedu is back and our Ram got himself a fake wife wishing for divorce. 😆.

Bri and Vikrant were interesting on their own. Can't wait for Adi and Sara to join them as well.

Loved the update Mandy. Thank you for bringing in such wonderful characters each with a depth of their own ❤️

Originally posted by: tumhiho

super cute update🥰❤️

Priya actually going to the airport with them to drop off Vedika was the cutest 😂 you’ve got yourself a loyal fake wife, Ram🤣 The loyalty was borne out of sympathy for Ram's friends TBH 😆

I really did like that there were no hard feelings between Ram and Vedika, it was just that he didn’t like her like that and he somewhere feels bad for using her to spite his mom also. Ram is a very compassionate person here much like in the show. But I hope a tad bit more sensible than the one in the show too 😆

I liked what Bri told Priya that he doesn’t like to break anyones heart❤️ This character though goofy has a heart of gold and I hope you will like him in the upcoming chapters too ❤️

Then him remembering their meet cute😭🥹🥰 that was so adorable and Bri teasing him about it and telling him it was destiny 😭❤️ Bri was pulling his leg but little does she know that destiny is already at work here 😉

they really do give off soulmate energy, dont they🥰 now they’re in the same hospital too😍❤️

loved ram at the hospital and him getting the kids toys🥺🥺 and special one for Zara baby❤️ And then Priya saving the day by threatening the kids🤣 I couldn't let go of Priya's Masterni traits now, could I? 😆

Priya felt so protective over Zara🥺 Through that argument/conversation, Ram got to see more of Priya. I hope he does come back often to see Zara like he promised because Priya is right, the little girl would wait for him🥺❤️ Ram will not break his promise 😃

I’m excited to see how everything is going to unfold😍 cant wait for the next one as always❤️ thanks for the lovely comment dear 🤗

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