FF: My Rainbow In The Rain, Chap 4 on Pg 10 - Page 8

Beautiful loved it 😍

You took my pink cloud away😭 I'm glad🤣

Loved the hospital scenes with Pinky Promises

And atleast Ram can see Priya as more of a human than just an agitated opponent with her last lines here.

I love each chapter as you keep throwing them so please do continue to write😳

The readership going down is due to the show's afterleap effect of less people visiting the forum & Also the looming news of show going off-air. That doesn't suggest that you don't have people who understand your characters...also you can continue on Wattpad if it helps you🤗

Is Priya talking'bt her Mom when she talks of heartbreak? I'd love to see the expressions on both faces when Ram & Priya get the gist of the "Genie" incident

Hey! You cannot think of abandoning this story. Please don't.

Although, so far, I've loved all of the chapters in this fic, this one has captured my heart like no other. ❤️💕

It's a chapter that had all of the emotions in varying degree. From humour to the sibling/cousins' banters, Ram and Brinda's conversation about his genie, and then the last part came up a bit too unexpectedly. I mean, unexpectedly in the way the emotions were written here.

So, I'll start from the beginning. Vedika and her departure. Damn, you've written her really well. In her short appearance, the woman has definitely become one of my favorites. The kind of humor and absurdity she brings in the story is wonderful!

You can't really blame Priya for being mad at Ram, can you? But I find it really sweet that she agreed to go with the plan at Brinda's insistence. I'm assuming it was only because Bri asked her to, and not because Priya had developed some kind of soft corner for Ram.

Both the conversation between Ram and Bri, and Priya and Sara again had their own amusing, sweet flavour to them. Ram still remembers that one memory from two decades ago, something that did change him. I'd really like to know if that meeting with Priya had any lasting impact on his personality. And then Priya noticing Ram could be a model.. It just made me laugh in a good way. xD Something is probably going on there too, but she doesn't realize yet. And that makes me even more curious as well as sad about what she might have done to break his heart. 😭 😭

And what better way to bring them closer than the purest creatures on the earth — little kids. It's for the first time Priya showed signs of vulnerability in her and Ram quickly noticed it too.

> or if she had accidentally opened up a part of her that she had locked away.

This makes me feel Ram would be the first of the two to fall in love. He'll see her side that needs love and protection. I hope she does too.

Amazing chapter. Please write more soon. ❤️

Originally posted by: vaidharbhi95

Aaahaa, Heera Vedu and her pinky tantrums packed off. Great!!! 🤣

Ramu never forgot his genie. Him having his genie's butterfly clip and his gang considering it fantasy is just so cute . Wondering if Pri remembers anything and has a token of remembrance too.. I should wait for this part to unravel 😋

I find it difficult to imagine Priya as a surgeon somehow.. Mind is conditioned to see her as teacher. But I wanted to see her making some progress in her career in the show. Like finishing her PhD etc. Instead girl has ended up being Kaidi 😅

But Ram as a fashion photographer suits him a lot !! I m too tired of ITV ML being Ambani .

Ram and Priya coming together for a good cause and him discovering a soft and vulnerable side of Pri through Zara is endearing 🥰

Excited for the genie secret to unfold !!🤩

Is Vedu really gone? You need to wait and watch 😉 For a child who had been lonely for a long time, little Priya became the sunshine in his life, giving him hope that his wishes will be fulfilled. Which is why Ram held onto that memory. Priya was a carefree child who did masti all the time. So will she remember the incident? Or will something trigger it? Again you need to wait and watch 😉

Priya will be a masterni, teacher or not 😆 Coz even here, she will take Ram's class time to time 😎 I am tired of seeing all ML being businessman of the year in every other TV show 😵 I have seldom liked shows with that pattern 😆 The MLs I liked have been doctors, actors and in one case a vampire 🤣 So fashion photographer felt apt here.

Thanks for the lovely feedback dear 🤗

Originally posted by: tournesol

Lovely update ❤️

I almost felt bad for Vedu when she asked Ram to give his marriage a chance, until I read that she liked to be his fantasy who he would never attain. This Vedu is as nuts as the show's Vedu (but in a different way), and I love how you have written her 😆

However, the actual woman of Ram's fantasy is Priya/Genie. I am excited about how this part unravels further. My guess is that Vedu might tell Ram's mom about Ram's wife, causing his mom to reach out to him. And that's how Genie might fulfil another wish.

Ram has very fond memories of the 'Genie' incident, I would love to read how Priya remembers it. I wonder what Priya meant about heartbreak over broken promises. Did she face the heartbreak too? Ram never breaks a heart, which means he might keep Zara's promise.

Thanks for tagging. Looking forward to the next chapter 🤗

Thanks Tiara 🤗 Vedu is a nutcase for sure but she isn't all that bad here 😆 About Niharika, you will know in the next update 😉 Not gonna confirm or deny your guesses but good one for sure 😉 TBH Priya has no memories of the incident coz it was a routine for her. She used to do masti all the time 😃 Thanks for the lovely feedback dear ❤️

Originally posted by: LoveMyself_sri

Wow so so interesting

Thank you ❤️

Originally posted by: mysterious-soul

Woww.. It's amazing.. Please continue soon. 😊

Thank you 😳 Will update it next week.

Originally posted by: Jvraj

Beautiful loved it 😍

Thank you ❤️

Originally posted by: SONIA441

You took my pink cloud away😭 I'm glad🤣

Loved the hospital scenes with Pinky Promises

And atleast Ram can see Priya as more of a human than just an agitated opponent with her last lines here.

I love each chapter as you keep throwing them so please do continue to write😳

The readership going down is due to the show's afterleap effect of less people visiting the forum & Also the looming news of show going off-air. That doesn't suggest that you don't have people who understand your characters...also you can continue on Wattpad if it helps you🤗

Is Priya talking'bt her Mom when she talks of heartbreak? I'd love to see the expressions on both faces when Ram & Priya get the gist of the "Genie" incident

Awww, I didn realise anyone will be sad to see Vedu go 🤣 But she will do a big dhamaka next 😆 Or will be responsible for that. I will continue to write so long as I still have readers and thanks for sticking around, it motivates me 🤗

You will know why Priya feels bitter about promises in the next update. About the genie incident, there is a long way to go for that coz if I make RaYa realise that now, there won't be anything to tell 😉 Thanks for the lovely feedback 🤗

Originally posted by: Metamorphosis

Hey! You cannot think of abandoning this story. Please don't. I will continue it as long as readers are still interested and thanks for sticking around 😃

Although, so far, I've loved all of the chapters in this fic, this one has captured my heart like no other. ❤️💕 Glad you liked this 😳

It's a chapter that had all of the emotions in varying degree. From humour to the sibling/cousins' banters, Ram and Brinda's conversation about his genie, and then the last part came up a bit too unexpectedly. I mean, unexpectedly in the way the emotions were written here. Thanks for taking a moment to share your thoughts on what most of them assume to be fillers but as a writer, its important for me to build a universe where every character has a role to play and I can't make it all about RaYa and use the rest as props.

So, I'll start from the beginning. Vedika and her departure. Damn, you've written her really well. In her short appearance, the woman has definitely become one of my favorites. The kind of humor and absurdity she brings in the story is wonderful! I am glad u like Vedika coz she is the most hated vamp in the show 😆 She is absurd in her own way and I cannot show the main character's ex as a vamp or a villain coz what it will it make them for having fallen for them in the past? Idiots? 😆 But well I don't like having her as a potential love interest in the future. Hence gave it a funny angle.

You can't really blame Priya for being mad at Ram, can you? But I find it really sweet that she agreed to go with the plan at Brinda's insistence. I'm assuming it was only because Bri asked her to, and not because Priya had developed some kind of soft corner for Ram. Ram and Priya never really got along and they were trying to be civil for the sake of Brinda. Priya agreed to tag along only for Bri's sake and as of now, she has no feelings for Ram.

Both the conversation between Ram and Bri, and Priya and Sara again had their own amusing, sweet flavour to them. Ram still remembers that one memory from two decades ago, something that did change him. I'd really like to know if that meeting with Priya had any lasting impact on his personality. And then Priya noticing Ram could be a model.. It just made me laugh in a good way. xD Something is probably going on there too, but she doesn't realize yet. And that makes me even more curious as well as sad about what she might have done to break his heart. 😭 😭 Thanks again for liking Sara Priya convo. I like to include light hearted moments to establish the main character's bonds with other characters too. For Ram, Priya was nothing short of magic and the child in him kept her memory alive. About how or why Priya broke his heart, its a long way to go till we get there.

And what better way to bring them closer than the purest creatures on the earth — little kids. It's for the first time Priya showed signs of vulnerability in her and Ram quickly noticed it too. Ram here is a compassionate and sensitive person. He can pick up the vibe better than most.

> or if she had accidentally opened up a part of her that she had locked away.

This makes me feel Ram would be the first of the two to fall in love. He'll see her side that needs love and protection. I hope she does too. Will it be him or Priya? 😉 I am not gonna give that away so soon 😆

Amazing chapter. Please write more soon. ❤️ Thanks for the lovely comment 🤗 U made my day!

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