FF: My Rainbow In The Rain, Chap 4 on Pg 10 - Page 10

Originally posted by: Metamorphosis

Thanks for taking a moment to share your thoughts on what most of them assume to be fillers but as a writer, its important for me to build a universe where every character has a role to play and I can't make it all about RaYa and use the rest as props.

No problem. I can understand that strong supporting characters make a story better. So, do give them proper justice too. Just make sure to not derail the main plot. If you can strike a proper balance between the main characters and their equation with the supporting ones, it would be an incredible storytelling. So, good luck with that. :) Supporting characters need to have depth, else they will be reduced to props and the story will get monotonous 😊 As you rightly said, balance is the key.

I am glad u like Vedika coz she is the most hated vamp in the show. She is absurd in her own way and I cannot show the main character's ex as a vamp or a villain coz what it will it make them for having fallen for them in the past? Idiots? But well I don't like having her as a potential love interest in the future. Hence gave it a funny

Wow, how many vamps are there on the show? You're very wise in not showing her as a romantic rival for Priya or a complete bad guy here. Kudos. Too many 😆 Your ex needn't be a vamp or a villain, even if you don't part on a pleasant note. They can simply cease to be a part of your life.

Ram and Priya never really got along and they were trying to be civil for the sake of Brinda. Priya agreed to tag along only for Bri's sake and as of now, she has no feelings for Ram.

It shows Priya and Brinda are becoming very good friends with each other. I really do hope you explore their friendship too in the future, whatever their future holds in regards to Ram and Priya's love. Priya and soon even Sara will have a good bond with Brinda and gang 😊

Thanks again for liking Sara Priya convo. I like to include light hearted moments to establish the main character's bonds with other characters too. For Ram, Priya was nothing short of magic and the child in him kept her memory alive. About how or why Priya broke his heart, its a long way to go till we get there.

Yes! I read you guys' conversations in the EDT (I stalk it sometimes 😅😅) and realized y'all don't like Sara very much on the show. I feel here she'll make up for her incompetence on the show and maybe help them unite. I know I'm thinking of something too far, but there's no harm in hoping, is it? ;) Sara is hopeless in the show in the sense she doesn't do anything to help the leads 😆 But here hopefully she will play her part and contribute to the story 😊

About Ram, yes, he's a sweetheart. I love how the characters in your fic are like us everyday folks but still carry a strong aura that is similar to their original selves on the show. Like, Ram is sensitive and Priya is strong-headed. Hm, looks like we'll have to wait for them fall in love. 'kay! Hopefully I can retain their essence till the end 😳 Thanks for the appreciation dear, I can relate to characters that are real and flawed.

Haha, don't worry. I will continue to read your fic as long as you write. And hopefully you will finish this one. I hope so too but the show is pissing me off 😆

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Originally posted by: BlurredLines

Chapter two was really so cute 😆. Vedika antics were really so cool especially when she decided Ram looked too white and marched towards him to give a make up lift for our poor boy 🤣. I was bit sad it turned to be a dream 😆.

Loved Ram and Priya first encounter thanks to Whisky. Looking forward to more snatching tricks from Whisky .

I am really loving the story you are creating with the characters and I know they are bound to get their path crossed because of Bri again and I am excited for it.

Loved the chapter Mandy and can't wait to catch up ❤️

Glad you liked Vedu here 😆 She is funny but I didn wanna make her obnoxious. Vedu unfortunately has limited space in terms of the story but she will play an instrumental part in the story.

Whiskey's antics will extend to more than snatching phones 😉 Thanks for reading it dear ❤️

Originally posted by: Berrygoat

Loving the storyline.......and the characters build up..........

Sincerely hope u continue this, it has all the ingredients for a fiery beautiful love story!!!!

Thanks dear 😊 I wanted to write something with my own characters but retaining the essence of RaYa 1.0 😳

Originally posted by: BlurredLines

Chapter 3.

As always it was too good Mandy ❤️🤗. And no it didn't feel as a filler and I love how you are setting up the character in this world and explaining their connections to each other. I guessed from last update about Kunal and it is pretty sad to get it confirmed now. Glad u liked it Nita ❤️ I am still skeptical about this story coz its not a hard core romantic story but its got a bit of humour and emotions too with a touch of a fairy tale here. Very few might like it and some might find it silly. Of course there are times when I feel it might be a bit silly but there was a time when I wrote stories on dark themes and I am still surprised I could think of a light hearted one 😆

Priya and Ram were delightful together be it their taunting or fighting mode. Especially when Priya held his hand for support. I am loving their journey for now. RaYa's bickering won't end here 😆A big dhamaka will happen in chap 5 which I might post tomo hopefully and this will change their lives forever 😉

Ram Kapoor and his ex is a lovely story too. Vedu is back and our Ram got himself a fake wife wishing for divorce. 😆 Vedu won't be around for long though. So don't get attached to her 😆

Bri and Vikrant were interesting on their own. Can't wait for Adi and Sara to join them as well. Sara will soon be in Mumbai and they will get to meet Adi too 😊

Loved the update Mandy. Thank you for bringing in such wonderful characters each with a depth of their own ❤️ Thanks for liking it dear, motivates me to write 😳

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Originally posted by: Nashathebest

Loving the story! Continue soon.

If possible, Please post it on wattpad too! Thanks

When I wrote this story first on MaNan I posted in wattpad but my account is locked for some reason Will post it here though 😊 Once its over I might create a new account and move it to wattpad.