FF: My Rainbow In The Rain, Chap 4 on Pg 10 - Page 6

Originally posted by: vaidharbhi95

Love this !!

Modern realistic vibes of busy working people chilling during weekends !!

I love how every one is settled career wise . So Pri is a heart surgeon hmmm hope she has cure to Ram' dil ki dhadkkan moments which may cm soon..

Heera Vedu n her pink torture cracks me up 🤣

I literally imagine that playing in front of me .. Poor Ramuuu!!

Can't wait for Ram to know that Pri is his genie ...

Wanted to visualize RaYa differently here but they are similar you know? Ram is still the same goofy person but instead of a successful businessman, he is a celebrity photographer. Whereas Priya is a surgeon here. In the show Ram is chaotic and Priya super organized but here its a role reversal. Regardless she is a badass like Priya 1.0 with a dash of humour and fun 😎 I prefer to keep it a little realistic. Of course its fiction and you can take creative liberties but at the end of the day, they are characters who belong in a real world. They have their daily routines, a job and people they interact with. I wish I could write a story which only focused on two people but unfortunately I cannot Vedu's role kinda ends here? So you won't get to see more of her 😆 But a bigger dhamaka will happen soon coz of what happened in this chapter 😆 Ram will find out about Pri being her genie later but he will be the first one to find out 😉 Thanks for reading dear 🤗

Wow, what an update. Loved it! I thoroughly enjoyed RaYa nokjhok. And Ram decided to make Priya his fake wife to avoid Vedika 🤣 Just loved their sarcastic dialogues. I think Priya is gonna skin Ram alive for this, after Vedika leaves. 🤣 Update soon ❤️

Loving it....❤❤waiting for more.....thanks for tagging.

loved the chapter and how wholesome it felt. love all the friendships 🥺 Bri, Vik and Ram along with the budding friendship between Bri and Pri🥰❤️

Ram and Priya’s fight was too much fun to read🤣they went from almost making up to fighting again hahaha

Little baby Zara🥺❤️ I have a feeling that when Ram comes to see the hospital for his project, he’s also going to feel a bond towards her🥺❤️ i think priya sees herself in little Zara. i hope the little baby gets well🥺❤️

had too much fun reading the part with Vedu🤣🤣and everyone getting petrified of her. Ram really thought Priya was going to play to his tunes and say what he wanted🤣 He really said wife not even girlfriend 😭🤣

I’m super excited for when he goes to her hospital🥹🥰❤️ and starts to work on the project. that’s probably going to bring them closer 🥹❤️🥰

Cant to wait for the next😍🌈❤️

Apologies for coming late to the party..but I'm glad I waited to read this at leisure.

Your story is fresh, interesting, engaging! Your Ram & Pri are different and so real, yet retain the essence of the OG pair, so I can still very easily imagine them in the universe you have created. Kudos to you!! ❤️

Please do not even think of giving up on this story 😊

Aww I waited to read and catch up together. It was so much fun reading about their childhood and the prologue was really interesting and made me invested to see how we get to that point as well.

I like how you have both Ram and Priya different family set up and for the time reading the name Meera in regards to Balh2 didn't make me angry. So thank you for making it happen

It was such a refreshing take to see Ram and Priya as kids and I really loved reading it Mandy. I am glad that I got two more chapters to catch up this weekend.

I loved reading this FF so far and I hope you were able to complete it as well.

This chapter was so much fun! But I'll have to say my favourite part was the last one. The entire chapter seemed to be the buildup for this moment.

Priya is still pissed at Ram because of his dog and poor Ram can't understand why Priya wouldn't leave this behind already. And on this, I side with both of them. Haha. These friends hanging out, making Priya a part of their group without making her feel like an outsider was probably the most wholesome part of this chapter.

I'm still a bit lost at the hospital part, but I'm looking forward to reading what more unveils and how it helps bring Priya and Ram closer.

And then comes my favourite part with Vedika. Not sure why she's come back but it's obvious that she's going to be a nuisance to Ram. Plus, I hope we get to see some of Ram and his mom's interactions too. That's something I've been eager to read from the beginning of this fic.

Amazing chapter once again! ❤️

Mannnnn!

This update was so Niceeeee🤣

The ending...Ooofff! 🤣🤣

I liked how you explained about all characters through different scenes here. So Kunal is the one who isn't with the group anymore😭...I really like Kunal yaar🥺

Imaging Vedika coming back to Ram in her Pink Avatar ... gosh! I can't stop ROFLing!

Originally posted by: tournesol

Wow, what an update. Loved it! I thoroughly enjoyed RaYa nokjhok. And Ram decided to make Priya his fake wife to avoid Vedika 🤣 Just loved their sarcastic dialogues. I think Priya is gonna skin Ram alive for this, after Vedika leaves. 🤣 Update soon ❤️

Glad u liked it 😃 Priya will give him a hard time over it and you will know how 😆 Things will get worse for Ram in the upcoming chapters. Will try to update tomo.

Originally posted by: tumhiho

loved the chapter and how wholesome it felt. love all the friendships 🥺 Bri, Vik and Ram along with the budding friendship between Bri and Pri🥰❤️ Aww thanks dear 😳

Ram and Priya’s fight was too much fun to read🤣they went from almost making up to fighting again hahaha This will continue for some more time 😆

Little baby Zara🥺❤️ I have a feeling that when Ram comes to see the hospital for his project, he’s also going to feel a bond towards her🥺❤️ i think priya sees herself in little Zara. i hope the little baby gets well🥺❤️ U guessed it right! Ram will meet Zara in the next update 😊

had too much fun reading the part with Vedu🤣🤣and everyone getting petrified of her. Ram really thought Priya was going to play to his tunes and say what he wanted🤣 He really said wife not even girlfriend 😭🤣 Calling her a wife will turn out to be a nightmare for him soon 😆

I’m super excited for when he goes to her hospital🥹🥰❤️ and starts to work on the project. that’s probably going to bring them closer 🥹❤️🥰 U need to wait and watch for that 😳

Cant to wait for the next😍🌈❤️ Thanks for the lovely comment dear 😊

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