FF: My Rainbow In The Rain, Chap 4 on Pg 10 - Page 2

I love the fresh concept & different characters of our PriRa here❤️

They sound absolutely ADORABLE as kids & this way we got to live their childhood with them too😳

Niharika the OG is back & I'll cleanse my mind of Nandini, so thanks for that

The Prologue & the Chapters seems a universe apart so it would be a great read into their journey

Please continue the Series - I would love to read this😎 & Thanks for tagging me❤️

Hey, there!

I'm not a follower of BALH2, but often visit the forum, because the current track reminds me of my favorite show. And going by the looks of it, you guys aren't happy about the track either. Anyway, that's how I came across your story, and gave it a read. I'm familiar with the main characters' names and a bit with the plot (because mom watches it), but not entirely. So, I don't know which character is your own and which one is from the show. 🙈🙈

The prologue was interesting! So, Priya broke Ram's heart for some reason. They've known each other since their childhood. Did they meet after this incident in the first chapter as kids? So many questions!

Ram and Priya are both entirely opposite to each other. Ram is somber, quiet, and soft, someone who takes things to his heart. You can't blame him for thinking his mom doesn't love him. That's not how you treat your child. 💔

Priya on the other hand is, well, a chalta phirta bullet train. Never sitting quiet, never letting anything dampening her spirit. They're perfectly balanced, as all things should be. 🤭🤭

Also, you based the first chapter in Dehradun. Is this from the show or you had some thing else in mind? I'm asking this because I'm from Dehradun too. ;)

>Just that I don't wish to waste either mine or your time with a story not many are interested to read.

I'd like to comment on a bit here. It's okay if you don't have many readers. If you want to tell a story, do it by all means, regardless of how many people are reading it. I know it sounds easier said than done, but if you finish the story, it'll be your accomplishment. And that would be a good thing in itself. I'm saying this because I've also written when there were hardly any readers for our show. And now that fandom is almost dead, I do write nonetheless. So, don't think about wasting time. You aren't wasting yours for sure.

Do let me know whenever you post the next chapter please. I'm curious to see where this story goes.

Originally posted by: tumhiho

aww little piu and ram🥺♥️

felt really sad for baby ram who just wanted his mumma at the event🥺 He’s missing out on that love and care that he sees all his friends getting from their mothers, i liked that priya told him he will get it all back one day from his mother 🥺♥️ their little team up was so cute to read🥰😍

Piu is one firecracker for sure 😂😂 “his head was hot so i thought some ice cream would cool it” i was giggling 🤭

Piu and Mimi are ♥️🥺 i have a feeling ram is also gonna be a favorite of Mimi’s one day🥳

and that third wish 👀 that’s gonna be quite interesting to see what he’s gonna ask her for 🥰☺️

Loved the first chapter!! Love your attention to detail, it makes a really fun read. Thank you for this cute first chap😍 cant wait to see what’s a ahead 💕

Thanks for the lovely comment dear 🤗 coming to Ram, yes he has missed out on his mother’s love but Niharika here is a good mother. Just that her priorities changed owing to circumstances around her. Ram will be Mimi’s ladla wait and watch. Coming to third wish there’s still a long way to go for that.

Thanks for the appreciation, means a lot 🤗

Originally posted by: SONIA441

I love the fresh concept & different characters of our PriRa here❤️

They sound absolutely ADORABLE as kids & this way we got to live their childhood with them too😳

Niharika the OG is back & I'll cleanse my mind of Nandini, so thanks for that

The Prologue & the Chapters seems a universe apart so it would be a great read into their journey

Please continue the Series - I would love to read this😎 & Thanks for tagging me❤️

Thanks dear 🤗 only the first chapter is set in their childhood. It will shift back to the present day in the next. And a no-spoiler spoiler 😆 - they do not meet again after that competition until the next chapter and obviously they don’t remember their past encounter. Coming to their journey, there will be ups and downs but all in all it will be a fun filled ride. Thanks for reading 🤗

Originally posted by: Metamorphosis

Hey, there!

I'm not a follower of BALH2, but often visit the forum, because the current track reminds me of my favorite show. And going by the looks of it, you guys aren't happy about the track either. Anyway, that's how I came across your story, and gave it a read. I'm familiar with the main characters' names and a bit with the plot (because mom watches it), but not entirely. So, I don't know which character is your own and which one is from the show. 🙈🙈 Thanks dear for giving my story a try 🤗 Well you can read this as a story of its own without any connection to the show. My fan fictions are my own stories and they seldom have anything to do with the show.

The prologue was interesting! So, Priya broke Ram's heart for some reason. They've known each other since their childhood. Did they meet after this incident in the first chapter as kids? So many questions! No, they do not meet post their first encounter as kids till the next chapter which shifts to the present day.

Ram and Priya are both entirely opposite to each other. Ram is somber, quiet, and soft, someone who takes things to his heart. You can't blame him for thinking his mom doesn't love him. That's not how you treat your child. 💔 Ram is not quiet per say but he is a soft hearted person and that aspect of his will not change 😳 and as for Niharika, she is not a bad mother but you will get to know her POV in later chapters.

Priya on the other hand is, well, a chalta phirta bullet train. Never sitting quiet, never letting anything dampening her spirit. They're perfectly balanced, as all things should be. 🤭🤭 Priya as an adult will be more like how she is in the show before leap - practical and a little skeptical (not to an extent like she is in the show) but she is fiesty.

Also, you based the first chapter in Dehradun. Is this from the show or you had some thing else in mind? I'm asking this because I'm from Dehradun too. ;) No dear I am not from Dehradun but would love to visit that place sometime 😊 you are from Dehradun? Great! If I need details about the place for my story then I know who to bug 😉 The story will shift to Mumbai in present day.

>Just that I don't wish to waste either mine or your time with a story not many are interested to read.

I'd like to comment on a bit here. It's okay if you don't have many readers. If you want to tell a story, do it by all means, regardless of how many people are reading it. I know it sounds easier said than done, but if you finish the story, it'll be your accomplishment. And that would be a good thing in itself. I'm saying this because I've also written when there were hardly any readers for our show. And now that fandom is almost dead, I do write nonetheless. So, don't think about wasting time. You aren't wasting yours for sure. Response does matter at the end of the day. If no one is interested to read, for whom will you write? But I have been wanting to tell this story for long. I have had several ideas but for some reason, this is the most dear to me. I want to finish it this time.

Do let me know whenever you post the next chapter please. I'm curious to see where this story goes. Will tag you when I post my next chapter.

My comments in blue

Originally posted by: Metamorphosis

Niharika is not a bad mother by any means but u will get to know her side of the story soon. About RaYa in the prologue, you need to wait for that 😊

As for this story, I have been trying to write this for years now. But somehow it didn't work out with other ITV couples. Hope I can take it to conclusion with RaYa ❤️ The show is going to get over soon but depends on whether the members of the forum will still be interested or not.

Hi Mandy, liking the concept of this story of yours.

In the prologue, I thought Piu was Pihu but I quickly realised that it's Priya lol

Is Niharika based on S1 or is she really a nice person in here?

Chottu Ram and Priya are so cute!

Awesome start👏

Originally posted by: Hero_Coconut

Hi Mandy, liking the concept of this story of yours.

In the prologue, I thought Piu was Pihu but I quickly realised that it's Priya lol

Is Niharika based on S1 or is she really a nice person in here?

Chottu Ram and Priya are so cute!

Awesome start👏

Hey there 😃 glad to see u and thank you for checking out my story 🤗 Miss chatting with you and others in the forum. I know it was only for a brief while but had lots of fun. Wish you guys would come back at least to bash the current track 😆 I am enjoying it coz of Pihu these days.

Oh yes, I know but what can be the short form for Priya? 😆 I thought of Priyu and it didn make sense, so went with Piu. One of my classmates was called Piu at home. Niharika here is nothing like the one in the show. She is a nice person and you will get to know her side of the story as the story progresses. To be honest, it was a coincidence. I was not thinking of S1 at all. This story was originally written on MaNan (I couldn't complete it though) and the mother's name was Nyonika. I didn want to call her Nandini (u know y 😆) so went with Nikarika. When Dazzle pointed this out, I was like O Teri 🤣 So Niharika it is but u will like this one, I promise 😊

Hi Mandy,

First of all, thank you for tagging. It means a lot 🤗

You have written so beautifully. ❤️ I am reading it for the second time before replying to you, this time with a clear head, not being too emotional for RaYa.

Yet, I am overwhelmed by the intensity of your writing, especially after watching today's episode, where the situation was somewhat similar (not exactly though. But Priya thought Ram was moving on and Ram didn't know what he wanted). You have expressed Priya's thoughts so beautifully. 👏 Somehow, the image of little Ram and a working mother Niharika made me think of PKDH's Adi and Avantika. I think mainly because Nakuul played both characters of Ram S2 and Aditya.

The meet between little Priya and little Ram was so sweet. (At first, I mistakenly thought they were childhood buddies) Priya turned genie for Ram, but Ram didn't know what he wanted, and he was only a kid. It's quite realistic, because often we adults don't know what we would wish for if a genie appeared out of nowhere to grant us anything.

Waiting for the next chapter, whenever you update. 🤗 The FF title indeed reminded me of the AdiYa SS that you had written.

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

Hey there 😃 glad to see u and thank you for checking out my story 🤗 Miss chatting with you and others in the forum. I know it was only for a brief while but had lots of fun. Wish you guys would come back at least to bash the current track 😆 I am enjoying it coz of Pihu these days.

Oh yes, I know but what can be the short form for Priya? 😆 I thought of Priyu and it didn make sense, so went with Piu. One of my classmates was called Piu at home. Niharika here is nothing like the one in the show. She is a nice person and you will get to know her side of the story as the story progresses. To be honest, it was a coincidence. I was not thinking of S1 at all. This story was originally written on MaNan (I couldn't complete it though) and the mother's name was Nyonika. I didn want to call her Nandini (u know y 😆) so went with Nikarika. When Dazzle pointed this out, I was like O Teri 🤣 So Niharika it is but u will like this one, I promise 😊

Awww dear🤗 you joined us at BALH lowest phase and I'm sorry we didn't stick around. I miss the Golden Days of BALH too. I've had so much fun in this forum! I'll never forget what it has given me.

Sadly, I lived this show and loved it so much that I felt like giving it a try with the leap but unfortunately the few scenes I saw didn't pull me back as the show is still not delivering like the initial episodes. I check the forum for the lovely fanfictions like yours. They are keeping the characters alive for me.

I've passed the sadness, anger and mockery phases and now I don't have or feel anything for the show. Joining EDT would only kill the interest of those who are watching and want to discuss it.

I'm looking forward to your story. You write beautifully ❤️