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Posted: 3 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

Sid has the boy boy that might go good vibe🤣 Also, Kabir keh gaye, "kal kare so aaj kar, aaj kare so ab" So jaldi jaldi post karo😍😌

Oh how much I want shubham and sid to sudharofy yaar 😫

I've got vivas till Wednesday.. padhte hue jaan ja rahi hai... next week it is 😔👉👈

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Posted: 3 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: SereneRainstorm

Oh how much I want shubham and sid to sudharofy yaar 😫

I've got vivas till Wednesday.. padhte hue jaan ja rahi hai... next week it is 😔👉👈

Awwie🥲 Good luck😍🔥

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Posted: 3 years ago
#73
You have brilliantly penned it down. I always thought Shashi was very cold and calculative but you have taken him to a totally new level. Please do consider writing more on Priya’s trauma and how everyone around her deals with it if you feel inspired to write more on it. Thank you.
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Posted: 3 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Shivpriya6

You have brilliantly penned it down. I always thought Shashi was very cold and calculative but you have taken him to a totally new level. Please do consider writing more on Priya’s trauma and how everyone around her deals with it if you feel inspired to write more on it. Thank you.

Thank you so much 🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago
#75

One of the most thrilling stories I have read in years! You did an amazing job with this, honey. This will always be in top of my list of favorite dark stories 🤗


Do write more ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#76

I liked the first part very much, and enjoyed the second, even though I somehow guessed what was going to happen. Now let me stalk your other fic.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Mangs1303

I liked the first part very much, and enjoyed the second, even though I somehow guessed what was going to happen. Now let me stalk your other fic.

Stalk😳 should I be worried ?🙈 kidding, hope you find everything you read that I wrote worth your time🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Serpensortia

One of the most thrilling stories I have read in years! You did an amazing job with this, honey. This will always be in top of my list of favorite dark stories 🤗


Do write more ❤️

You making me blush☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#79

Aww Meri Shibu. I read it earlier today but couldn't find the time to respond back as I would have wanted until now. As you are well aware of my lack of ITV knowledge. Everything about this show is new to me but still you got me invested in this characters with your writing.


The way you penned up Priya was delightful to read. A character you can root for. Also Shashi character was perfect to root against as well. But in a way you get his twisted perception too. He was a character who has depth and not just well I am a villian now, kind of guy.


While writing relatable and yet strong Protoganists is hard, writing characters like Shashi is the most hardest aspect in my POV and you did it brilliantly Meri Shibu.


As always you are a wonderful writer Meri Shibu. I really liked reading this two shot. . May check your others soon, now that you got me invested in this characters😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: BlurredLines

Aww Meri Shibu. I read it earlier today but couldn't find the time to respond back as I would have wanted until now. As you are well aware of my lack of ITV knowledge. Everything about this show is new to me but still you got me invested in this characters with your writing.


The way you penned up Priya was delightful to read. A character you can root for. Also Shashi character was perfect to root against as well. But in a way you get his twisted perception too. He was a character who has depth and not just well I am a villian now, kind of guy.


While writing relatable and yet strong Protoganists is hard, writing characters like Shashi is the most hardest aspect in my POV and you did it brilliantly Meri Shibu.


As always you are a wonderful writer Meri Shibu. I really liked reading this two shot. . May check your others soon, now that you got me invested in this characters😉

Aww... Thanks jaani🙈 yeah, Shashi is messed up big time, so writing him was a total train wreck🤦‍♀️

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