Raya SS :Some Day..we will be Raya forever REMOVED

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Dhinchank
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Posted: 8 years ago

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Wow... Very different start..

Waiting for Mr.X and Priyadarshini s first convo...

Please continue soon..

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Posted: 8 years ago

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avoided such person who made you annoyed with stupid talks any way...
I m loving this story to but is this is continuation of first part as both looking different so plz clear in next n for sure I m loving it do post next soon will be waiting...

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aanchal

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Interesting plus intriguing from start to end of this part.

A pampered and fav child of her baba Priya want to be everything perfect for her father but seems didn't get mother's love.

A new entry may be of hero and seems he is bit shocked to see her in front of his eyes.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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different concept. nice start. pl continue.
would love to read next update.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hey, Rayaland aka dhristi is sweet girl n didnt want to hurt u so pls forgive her i know her personally and she loves your posts a lot and always share them on whatsapp platform...loved the story tho eagerly waiting for next part...

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sandhya

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Wow... Interesting

Loved it

Ohh so the man knew Priya

Waiting for the next part

Update soon...

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just got to know the person you were talking abt is non other then Drishti so want to say something to you might be she said soemting to you in wrong way but her inteantion was never wrong ahe nevwr wanted to hurt you so plz forgive her & accept her apology she just put her view on your story & as readers we have right to praise & criticise the story as our view it's just matter of point of view it's not necessary everyone point of view is same might what is wrong for her is right for you...
so just wants to request you plz forgot the past & forgive her too she never meant to hurt you at is sweet girl always friendly & heart warming... so plz forgot the past move on & start with fresh no use of keeping hurt & pain in heart so be happy & be friends now...
hope I don't hurt anyone with my words if yes then sorry for that... stay blessed be happy...

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just got to know the person you were talking abt is non other then Drishti so want to say something to you might be she said soemting to you in wrong way but her inteantion was never wrong ahe nevwr wanted to hurt you so plz forgive her & accept her apology she just put her view on your story & as readers we have right to praise & criticise the story as our view it's just matter of point of view it's not necessary everyone point of view is same might what is wrong for her is right for you...
so just wants to request you plz forgot the past & forgive her too she never meant to hurt you at is sweet girl always friendly & heart warming... so plz forgot the past move on & start with fresh no use of keeping hurt & pain in heart so be happy & be friends now...
hope I don't hurt anyone with my words if yes then sorry for that... stay blessed be happy...

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Writersblock

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Armyna
Hey, Rayaland aka dhristi is sweet girl n didnt want to hurt u so pls forgive her i know her personally and she loves your posts a lot and always share them on whatsapp platform...loved the story tho eagerly waiting for next part...

1st of all So Sorry But How do u Know i Talked ABout Rayaland I never Mention anywhere 2nd Thing if You Know Then How come You Know rayaland when You Juts have one Comment that Too in my Post Anyways She Rayaland or whatever her name didn't want to hurt me Then why she commented she could simply ignore the Story and Move Forward but No She Did comment and then she Argued me In Inbox over what she wanted She didnt not Raya as Queen and King so what should i do Make Them Begger and Rotten around them on Street and Let them consummate on Road Side 😕

Anyways Thats doesnt bother me anymore

Thank You for reading story and Sorry for Not Accepting her Apology Hope u understand My Point of View 😛

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