Raya SS :Some Day..we will be Raya forever REMOVED - Page 4

Originally posted by: lovelysakshi

Wow... Interesting

Loved it

Ohh so the man knew Priya

Waiting for the next part

Update soon...

Originally posted by: leena04

just got to know the person you were talking abt is non other then Drishti so want to say something to you might be she said soemting to you in wrong way but her inteantion was never wrong ahe nevwr wanted to hurt you so plz forgive her & accept her apology she just put her view on your story & as readers we have right to praise & criticise the story as our view it's just matter of point of view it's not necessary everyone point of view is same might what is wrong for her is right for you...
so just wants to request you plz forgot the past & forgive her too she never meant to hurt you at is sweet girl always friendly & heart warming... so plz forgot the past move on & start with fresh no use of keeping hurt & pain in heart so be happy & be friends now...
hope I don't hurt anyone with my words if yes then sorry for that... stay blessed be happy...

Originally posted by: Writersblock

Quoting This Line as i have to Tell Everyone here my Point of View

as readers we have right to praise & criticise the story as our view it's just matter of point of view it's not necessary everyone point of view is same might what is wrong for her is right for you...

As Reader You can Criticize as I mentioned in my post i love That Type of comment Who Encourage me to Learn from my mistakes But as reader You can Only Criticize nor you want the Story what You want and If You want only one Thing Then why cant You write your own and Feel Happy That You got your story by your own She Told me Clearly That She Doesn't want Queen and King in The Story she wants Modern Raya So what i do now Make Them Wear Sleeveless Blouse and Evening Gown in 1000BC plus she Said It will be Boar and She doesnt want to read Boar Story

Leena di I am growing up via Reading Your Story i have Respect You Alot but SOrry To Say when Someone Clearly told me That She/he doesnt want to read My Story so Simply can Avoid Reading and commenting and Move Forward But No she commented then She argued over me in Inbox Not even This One of Friend Aman/Janilover who was my 1st Friend on IF is Now Not Talking or commenting on My Story 😭

He advised me to move forward as he himself faced so much Criticism when he posted his 1st Story not only this he told me that he moved all his Story to Blog Because of This reason But This girl Twisted my word and Told Janilover that dont bad mouth About her I mean Seriously when did i mention Rayaland in Janilover's Message Never and He never mention anyone name

He Got furious and He Is Not even replying to my any Mail/Tweet/PM/Whatsapp Message he is Furious Because of this Girl 😭

I dont wanted to write this OS on her But Its High Time for everyone to know how Cruel she was with me 😭

and So Sorry you think my tone is Rude or anything

Originally posted by: Writersblock

Quoting This Line as i have to Tell Everyone here my Point of View

as readers we have right to praise & criticise the story as our view it's just matter of point of view it's not necessary everyone point of view is same might what is wrong for her is right for you...

As Reader You canCriticizeas I mentioned in my post i love That Type of comment Who Encourage me to Learn from my mistakes But as reader You can OnlyCriticizenor you want the Story what You want and If You want only one Thing Then why cant You write your own and Feel Happy That You got your story by your own She Told me Clearly That She Doesn't want Queen and King in The Story she wants Modern Raya So what i do now Make Them WearSleevelessBlouse and Evening Gown in 1000BC plus she Said It will be Boar and She doesnt want to read Boar Story

Leena di I am growing up via Reading Your Story i have Respect You Alot but SOrry To Say when Someone Clearly told me That She/he doesnt want to read My Story so Simply can Avoid Reading and commenting and Move Forward But No she commented then She argued over me in Inbox Not even This One of Friend Aman/Janilover who was my 1st Friend on IF is Now Not Talking or commenting on My Story😭

He advised me to move forward as he himself faced so muchCriticism when he posted his 1st Story not only this he told me that he moved all his Story to Blog Because of This reason But This girl Twisted my word and Told Janilover that dont bad mouth About her I meanSeriously when did i mention Rayaland in Janilover's Message Never and He never mention anyone name

He Got furious and He Is Not even replying to my any Mail/Tweet/PM/Whatsapp Message he is Furious Because of this Girl😭

I dont wanted to write this OS on her But Its High Time for everyone to know how Cruel she was with me😭

and So Sorry you think my tone is Rude or anything

Originally posted by: Rayaland

thank u leena di but writerblock aap jo bhi ho all knew this janilover n myself had small arguement in the grp so mostly all knows about it n i told about him cos u knew janilover n he too knows me so mujhe laga usne bola hoga n i said many times sorry now i m tired n i forgot also that topic but y did u mention in 1st post about me that i felt bad n u dont know how i m n u r rude to everyone n u hv no patience to listen to anyone okk dont ever say anything to leena di or any other member here on forum n once again i m saying i hv not discourage arre kaisi writer ho i cant even gv suggestion as a reader maine sirf prologue se andaza lagaya but u could hv said aap phele 2 ya 3 update read karo then u gv ur option but u too all my aplogy n everything in negative now i ll never comment on ur story or going to read it n u want to know how i m then ask sandhaya di n leena di n also mostly all the members then u say anything about me

Originally posted by: Rayaland

thank u leena di but writerblock aap jo bhi ho all knew this janilover n myself had small arguement in the grp so mostly all knows about it n i told about him cos u knew janilover n he too knows me so mujhe laga usne bola hoga n i said many times sorry now i m tired n i forgot also that topic but y did u mention in 1st post about me that i felt bad n u dont know how i m n u r rude to everyone n u hv no patience to listen to anyone okk dont ever say anything to leena di or any other member here on forum n once again i m saying i hv not discourage arre kaisi writer ho i cant even gv suggestion as a reader maine sirf prologue se andaza lagaya but u could hv said aap phele 2 ya 3 update read karo then u gv ur option but u too all my aplogy n everything in negative now i ll never comment on ur story or going to read it n u want to know how i m then ask sandhaya di n leena di n also mostly all the members then u say anything about me

Originally posted by: leena04

ok now I heard you both & I feel things are going out of hands now so plz I request you both leave each other alone see in life we are many bad ppl & good ppl sometime we realized there is some good thing in them & some times not so plz don't hurt each other more with words this life is for love nd if that is not at least give each other peace of mind I know there is very much misunderstanding happen between you but this is not the way to blame each other all the time every person have right to do what the think is right just keep in mind that what ever you do or say is not hurting anyone as life is very small so love & forgive everyone don't punish the culprits just give them forgiveness & take lesson from it so in future no one will be able to hurt like that again... always remember giving forgiveness always kitten your heart & gives positive energy to your body & life no use to stretching such argument which is leading no where else hurting the other person more just closed this topic in life & move on if you can't stand front of each other just avoid some times it's batter then fighting over unused issue so forgive each other & move in life to do more batter work them blaming & fighting with each other...

sorry once again if I said too much or hurt anyone my inteantion was just to stop this fight only plz forgive if I sound rude...

Originally posted by: Writersblock

Thank You di for Your words and I am Here to inform That i cant write in Such Negative Atmosphere so I am leaving this Story here i had a Beautiful Plot In Mind and Its Ruined before Starting I Already Stopped at 1st as i Know That Person wont Stop and ruined my Story But getting comments from Sandhya di and Your PM encouraged me alot But Loosing friends Like Dhin and Jani i cant Afford

Sorry If my single word Hurt You

Bye