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Hi,

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Hi dear,

Now started reading SS, the 'decision' i hv read already and commented, thts the first work i read of urs..

The next i read now is 'Falling in Love With Enemy'..

Hmm.. u too like 24 writers, hold the reason for enemity to be revealed much later..not revealed soon, each time diary was opened to read by vikram, i was thinking ok let me know their enemity reason from this, from this, like tht, but it contained only Raya path towards their luv story...

And only finally revealed and both vikram, priya separated from Ram due to same scam which was caused by Rajat...

Nice story, nicely written, as always apart from Raya , i loved neha and vik..neha was as bold and witty as ever... vik, the same caring person for his loved ones..

And rajat being villain in urs... ok ..dont know why but felt aaram reading him as villain..😆

In actual show wasnt impressed much with him though he was shown as a genuine one side lover,was it due to sameer or Raya,Rashi magic dont know...😆

And the last part, pakka in Ur style...calm,composed raya solved their differences by sitting together😲😆 and last had some funny moments too with nisha in picture..

Good one, enjoyed reading it to the fullest...

And one more thing, u made the priya here doesnt knw cooking, where balh priya too good at it...hota hai ..😆

Thank you
Haan Rajat kisi ka fav nhi hai siwaye ek ke 🤣 if she comes acoss this line she will kill me 😆
Mystery pehle thodi na reveal karte hai 😉
I am firm believer thatveverything can be sorted out by talking, I dont know other ways of sorting problems 😆

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Hi,

I read the SS 'Tere Ishq Mai'...

Finest one , beautifully written along with ur collection of shayaris...

U indeed hv a beautiful collection naseem..👏👍🏼

It was very nicely written enhanced with those poetry, i wanted to comment on each part,

But already for each story i am bugging u with a lenghty comment, each part wuld be more to tk..😆.

Both present and past ,mingled so well in each part, present and Fb both written well joining the simalirities between instances and along with those poetic lines,its even more beautiful..

I thought of quoting some poetic lines that so well suited the situation, but couldnt stick to one,since all lines suited very well whereever its used..

Good to see an friendly bond between Raya till end..

Their friendship and love was good to see... priya handled ram well... first her love, vulnerableness and then his reciprocation to herbpatience, love and friendship was very smooth..

And shruthi priya bond was also so good to see..i luved their togetherness...

I loved ur writing more in this story, its too good and hooked me till end...

But raya love confession, thts it😆 , but fine finally they are together and final scenes are cute...

Usually in all Raya stories, my mind automatically imagine Rashi everywhere..

But in this story, all the parts of priya in FB reminds me of you😆, dont know why but it looked like urself though i dont knw u fully...😆...all tht fun bindass but innocent attitude with little carelessness and childishness..

Oh now i finished all except FF's ... :) let me start ff now

Thanks a lot 😳
I love poetry...easiest way to say deep emotions or feelings within few words 😳
Is it so? I mean it reminded of me? I need to read this one...quiet possible as I mostly includes my traits in my characters 😆 sometimes I feel I hv multiple personality disorder 🤣

FF toh senseless hai 😆 Ekta ki tarha drag kiye hai 😆 good luck 😆

Originally posted by: peeyara

Thank you
Haan Rajat kisi ka fav nhi hai siwaye ek ke 🤣 if she comes acoss this line she will kill me 😆
Mystery pehle thodi na reveal karte hai 😉
I am firm believer thatveverything can be sorted out by talking, I dont know other ways of sorting problems 😆

Originally posted by: peeyara

Thanks a lot 😳
I love poetry...easiest way to say deep emotions or feelings within few words 😳
Is it so? I mean it reminded of me? I need to read this one...quiet possible as I mostly includes my traits in my characters 😆 sometimes I feel I hv multiple personality disorder 🤣

FF toh senseless hai 😆 Ekta ki tarha drag kiye hai 😆 good luck 😆

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

I know whom u are talking abt...i came to know tht in ur cid thread..😆

I think u girlz always pull her leg by bringing in Rajat...

May be she too not a fan of him...

S he wasnt my fav too...

S by talking u can solve or extend.😆.. its my experience..lol...

U gotta now 😆 haan we tease her to death but she is responsible for iy :P
Wo apni har story mai Rajat ko role deti thi so we teased k Rajjo is ur fav 😆

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

S i love it too..even in songs,its the lyrics tht attracts me most, i will first only look for lyrics..

S you shuld read the FB scenes and for me it looks like that priya has ur traits,

Ofcourse she will be hving, its ur creation and u r the writer

Ekta ki tarah😕 ..

R u sure, anyways i will read it,😆, i trust u first and i trust none can stretch senselessly like ekta😆

Same here...lyrics matters most n that is the reason i hardly like any new songs...old songs r gud 😆

I will read it...after reading FFs let me aapka trust barkarar hai ya nhin 😆
All i can say is comedy of errors hai ff mai esply in prem kahani one 😆

Originally posted by: peeyara

Same here...lyrics matters most n that is the reason i hardly like any new songs...old songs r gud 😆

I will read it...after reading FFs let me aapka trust barkarar hai ya nhin 😆
All i can say is comedy of errors hai ff mai esply in prem kahani one 😆

Originally posted by: peeyara

U gotta now 😆 haan we tease her to death but she is responsible for iy :P
Wo apni har story mai Rajat ko role deti thi so we teased k Rajjo is ur fav 😆

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Oh she too has written stories...grt😊

But anyways its not fair yaar to tease her this much if she is not his fan ..but its between u friends,in frienship teasing and pulling allowed 😆...

I think anyone who has been raya or balh fan cannot be a rajjo fan unless they r sameer fan...😆

Yes she too has written wonderful stories...i will search n give u links 😆
She dont mind...she is really sweet but we love teasing her 😉 sirf "grr n angry smiley"