SS: Part 5 - 'Decision' updated on pg:17 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi! Thank you for waiting for so long for update of a boring story 😆 (if u hv not waited, no thanks 🤣 kisi aur ke kaam aayega 😳)

Confusions and Changes

Early in the morning, Ram comes to his room and finds Priya sleeping peacefully. He keeps staring at her lovingly for few minutes and then starts packing his stuff breaking Priya's sleep.

"What are you doing Mr Kapoor?", Priya asks sleepily.

"Packing our bags", Ram replies

"Our bags????Why???", Priya sits up with a jolt.

"Our means yours and mine", Ram answers.

"I understand that but kyu kar rahe hai aap aisa", Priya questions him

"Can't you understand a simple thing Priya...We are leaving this home and going far away", Ram was irritated

"Ek min ek min...you mean we will leave our kids behind and go away", Priya questioned again

"We both, you and I, are moving out of this home, leaving behind our kids...for sometime...aur kuch puchna hai", Ram sternly replied

"Ram we can't...Pihu needs you, abhi wo thik se nahi soch rahi hai but she needs you, your support...don't do this", Priya tried to explain

"What do you want me to do? Let you go...alone", Ram questioned

"Yes...let me go", Priya answered

"I need you by my side Priya", Ram countered

"Pls dont make it difficult...Pihu meri koi baat nahi sunegi but you can help her out, she trusts you, loves you...wo samjhegi aapki baat ko", Priya reasoned

Ram wanted to unheard what all Priya said but he can't. Somewhere, down the line, he understood and knew what Priya saying was right. At this point, if there was someone, who could help Pihu, it was him. He hated this but can't disobey his wife and wrong his own child.

"Tum mujhse dur jaana chahti ho...Fine...jao", Ram stormed out of the room angrily.

Priya could not stop the tears flowing out of her eyes. She knew she was doing wrong with her husband but she was helpless. The mother inside her overpowered the wife. How much may a child hurt the mother, a mother can never wrong her.

Priya and Natasha came down in the hall with the bags and they were shocked to see Pari, Kush, Myra waiting for them with their bags.

"Tum log kahin jarahe ho?...yeh bags", Priya asked them hoping they are not coming with her.

"Hum aapke saath chal rahe hai Priya Angel", Kush crushed her hope.

"But why?", Priya questioned, "Papa ko bilkul accha nahi lagega"

"We want to stay with you mom", Myra answered

"Hum aapke bagair nhi reh sakte and don't worry papa ko bura nahi lagega", Pari added

Priya was feeling helpless, she could neither take them with her as Ram will be definitely upset nor she can deny them. She knew Pari and Myra do not want to separate from her.

"Priya kya soch rahi ho? Let them come", Natasha was explaining when Priya interrupted her, "but Mr Kapoor"

"Bhai ko hum explain kardenge...abhi gussa hai wo, gussa shant hoga toh thik hojayenge", Natasha convinced Priya.

Pihu was witnessing all this from upstairs, she was trying to remain cold and indifferent to the drama that was going on but her heart...it was aching, it was weakening her decision. She couldn't see her mother going away from her...once again...because of her, her selfish mistakes. She sprang down the stairs and hugged Priya tightly startling everyone.

"Mom don't leave me alone...papa bhi mujhse naraz hai, sammy bhi mujhse baat nahi kar raha hai, i am alone...please don't go", Pihu sobbed. Priya patted her back, wiped her tears and with teary eyes, "i won't leave my princess alone". She hugged her back.

Pihu smiled faintly and went back to her room. Priya was little taken aback with what happened. She was not expecting Pihu to stop her but then she knew her daughter was ruled by emotions just like her father and was impulsive while taking decisions.

Priya was thinking about all that happened few minutes ago. On one side she was happy that somewhere her little princess is alive in Pihu, all that she needs is to bring back her princess and other side she was sad about her princess's heart break. She was trying to figure out how to help her daughter.

Ram went to office without meeting Priya infact he kept avoiding her numerous calls. He didn't answer her single call or message sending a clear message that he is angry on her.

Pari and Myra were happy that their mother won't be leaving and Pihu won't keep any such condition in future also as promised. They wanted to go out with Pihu to set her mood but she refused. They were feeling helpless as their every trick to cheer up Pihu was going vain.

Ram came late from office and after changing clothes he went to study. Priya was irked with him for ignoring her but she cannot blame him as he had every right to be angry with her but she is his wife at least he can listen her apology and explanation. She barged in study to confront him.
"tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?", Ram was indifferent.
"mai aapse wahin sawal karu toh?", Priya questioned him back
"tumhe kya fark padta hai ", Ram scoffed
"Mr Kapoor I know meri galti hai but try to understand", Priya started her explanation
" I dont need any explanations...tum mujhse dur jaana chahti thi toh ab aisa hi hoga, mai tumse dur hi rahunga", Ram cuts her
"Ram please understand na...okay, I am sorry par mai kya karti Pihu ", Priya was reasoning out again to be cut in middle by her husband, "tumhe sabki fikr hoti Priya siwaye mere...mai toh tumhari list mai sabse last aata hoon"
"aisa nhi hai Mr Kapoor...meri baat toh suniye", Priya pleaded
"mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai...I need to rest please tum jao yahan se", Ram asks her to leave
Priya knew its waste to speak to him when he is angry, how much she may try to explain he won't understand. She left from there by making mental note to speak in the morning. This little conversation, though not good and pleasant one, cleared that her husband is just angry not upset and she certainly know how to handle her husband's anger.

Priya peeped in Pihu's room and was feeling helpless to see her daughter crying. She went in the room, wiped her tears, hugged her and went away. She couldn't utter a word to console her. She was afraid if Pihu takes out something else out of her talks.

Priya slept with two things in her head: She has to calm down her husband as she needs him most to bring their daughter back and she will speak to Pihu anyhow without worrying about results. She has to bring happiness back in her family and make it Family no.1 again.

Ram loved the attention his wife was giving him and greed bowed the seed in his mind to keep pretending for long time. He planned to take his Rockstar out for dinner so that she has a change. With these thoughts, he drifted to sleep.

Pihu still could not come to terms that Sammy does not love her. He loves that Suhani and she cannot bear that girl...not for Priya, not for anyone. For her sanity, Suhani have to go from her home and she will see to it.

p.s. Waiting for HONEST Opinions 😳

p.s.s Jo hv included 2 scenes of RaYa for you ...share it with Sandy too warna gussa hojayegi wo 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
I'm first...and how are you?
It's too good an update yaar.
Please pm me and continue.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for updating jaldi. thanks for pm. I so love this ram when he is jhut muth ka angry with Priya. now Priya will manao her golu husband. pl include this scene ha. plz.
pihu KO akkal aa gayi itni jaldi..oo Terri. chalo achi baat hai.
next update jaldi Karna.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update hope priya ll manofy ram n raya ll handle pihu n make her understand about love n trust now waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update... ram is pretending to be angry to gain priya attention...
contd soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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abhi bhi flood me ho?
rote rote mere anshu bhi sukh hai..

writing to superb hai .specially the last portion where everyone engrossed in their thought..
its so natural..
and waise bhi I am not waiting for next. as mujhe pata hai koi faida to hai nehi..😆

thank u for ur pm.
Hope u r ok now
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update..
akhir peehu ko pata chala woh apni parents ko alag kr nhi sakti..
priya ram ko manane ki koshish kr rhi h but he is pretending like angry...
waiting for next par...thnx for the pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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as always super ❤️ 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i like the way pari and myra stood by their mother...
ye writers ko ise ideas kyun nhi aaye..!!😕

pihu apologizing...though not completely...
atleast she asked priya to stay back..!!!

aur yaha miya ruthe hain...
ab wat do we get next...

priya manofying ram...😳
or
priya making pihu understand..!!!😆

sorry for being late...
bit busy...!!!!😆








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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww itni serious story Naseem ki 😆
Mujhse itne emotions and sensibility handle nhi Ho paa rhi 😆 😆
Btw ,logically chal rha hai Jo har family k maa baap try karte hai apne bacchoan ko protect Karna,na hi aisi solution dhundte hai Jisse ki samasya ka samadhaan na ho. Aur wo Zyada kathin ho suljhaane k liye .
Waise Mujhe bahot irritating laga tha ki Priya jaisi maa bhi Kapoor mansion chodi thi, ram Priya ki sensibility as a parents nhi dikhayi thi serial me , they were just acting as egoist individuals ,Jo dekhna chahta tha koun kisse Zyada pyar Karta hai ,and they wanted a proof for it even after years of their pure and sacred bond.
But accha hai kahi kahi Peehu me wo choti Peehu wali sabke liye sochnewali Peehu zinda thi, ussko thodi si chingari dene ka kaam Raya ko Karni hogi ,n u trying the same, I liked it.
Agar Peehu chahti hai usski mom usse hi Zyada pyar karein toh Priya should give that na hi Suhani ko Zyada importance de , koi bhi bachcha ye nhi chahega, change Kitna bhi bada kyun na Ho , Priya should be trying this and take away Peehu's insecurities.

Kaafi cute tha Raya ki fight 😆 dono ki soch and abhi dono ko ek dusre ki attention chahiye . 😉

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