Rishta. part 21 PG 27 - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
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In present RaYa are get connected through sweet little Pihu and in past also their was always a connection string between them but now with presence of each other in around they are coming from their painful sorrow
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 11


Past life:

Priya pick up the call of ritika's BF.

Bf- hey riti where are you? Kab se wait kar raha hun tumhara, call bhi kab se kar raha hun why don't you pick up?

Priya- take a breath man mujhe bhi kuch bolne ka muka doo.

Bf- where is riti is she ok?

Priya- she is ok actually she is in clg till busy in practical class, she was msg u, i thik that was not recd u.

Bf- ok when she came from clg plz told her that i called her.

Priya- but what ur name.

Bf- mobile par id hai.

Priya- choco cake ye id hai.

Bf- tum ho kon, with irritated tone.

Priya- jiske baare me puch rahe ho usski room met, koi problem hai.

Bf- tum unkonw person se itna baat kar rahi ye hi problem hai.

Priya cut the call with angry.

Past end.

Again priya's phn ring she pickup the call.

Priya- hello... again no responce from other side n next move cut the call.

Vik- kya hua?

Priya- phir se blank call, aj pure din 5th time call tha.

Vik- 5 baar hua aur tu mujhe ab bol rahi hai.

Priya- blank call hi toh hai, tension na lo aap.

Vik- give me ur phn.

Priya- but bhai.

Vik little angry with protect tone- phn.

Priya give her mobi to him, vik take it & he exchange her sim card with his personal sim.

Priya asked him supringly- bhai sim kiu change kiya.

Vik- aise hi.

Priya- aap na bahot jaada over protective hote jaa rahe ho.

Vik- hun over protective kuch problem hai tujhe.

Priya- haan hai.

Vik- konsi?

Priya- neha & nuts call karegi toh.

Vik- toh dono ko bol dunga ke iss number par call kare ab khush, mai jaa raha hun niche thoda walk karke aata hun.

Priya- sure! Bhai mai bhi sab kam khatam karke aata hun.

Vik- ok.

Vik came on ground n diled that number he take from priya's last call.

Someone pickup the call n vik go to say hello before, he said.

He- hello priya kaisi ho.

Vik only listen that voice he didn't say anything n only listen what he say.

He- bhul gayi mujhe! Itne jaldi kaise mera awaz bhul sakti ho! Humare wo pal, humare wo pyare pal, priya r u listen to me, mai wapas aa raha hun, jaldi! Tumhare saath wo saare pal bitane, phir se, bye my love, meet we soon n he cut the call.

Vik think- how can that possible, how can he free from jail, how could that possible, what should i do now, if priya knows all about these, what she will react, oh god now what should i do now! N got jerked by someone, he secared n look at that person, that's priya.

Vik little concern voice- u ok.

Priya- i m ok but what about u, how much time i called u but u lost some where, kaha par ho.

Vik- kya baat hai.

Priya- look at once ur watch.

Vik look once n say- sorry it's to late.

Priya- chalo jaldi kal subhe late hoga aur kuch nahi.

Vik- haan chalo aata hun.

Priya went from there n vik again deep think.

At mid-night, priya's phn ring, she pick up the call.

Priya- hello.

He- hey it's me.

Priya little distubring that sentence.

He again- hello priya it's me ram.

Priya take relife breath n say- ram n she check the time n asked.

Priya- itni raat ko call sab thik toh hai na.

Ram- wo actually peehu not well ghar par call kiya tha but maa punjab gayi hai aur peehu ko jab bhukhar aata hai yaa usse thoda sa bhi kuch lag jaata hai toh usse dadi, i mean maa ki jarurt hoti hai, maa toh ghar par nahi hai aur neha bhi nahi hai aur mai peehu ke paas bhi jaata hun toh she started crying.

Priya- why r u expain? Peehu bimar hai itna bhi bol dete toh bhi chalta, door open rakhna mai abhi aati hun waha par.

Ram- ok thankyou.

Peehu called him- papa dadi ko call karo na, in irritated voice.

Priya- relxe ram mai wah par aati hun, u don't worry.

Ram- ok n cut the call.

Priya go to vik's room n find vik still awake.

Priya- aap sooye nahi abhi tak aap theek toh hai.

Vik asked her worried- r u ok?

Priya- yaa i m fine mai toh bas ye baatane aayi thi ki mai peehu ke paas jaa rahi hun, she not well ram ka call aaya tha.

Vik- ok mai doc ko phn karta hun.

Priya- ummm! Mai check karti hun, phir!

Vik- ok.

Priya- aap abhi tak sooye nahi.

Vik- wo nind nahi aa rahi hai aur kuch nahi.

Priya- ok book read kijiye, u will feel sleepy.

Vik give her assured smile, she smile back, but she know very well that anything wrong with him, she entered in ram's home, she found him in kitchen, she asked him his back to her.

Priya- kya kar rahe hai aap yaha.

Ram little secared n he face to her- i secared yaar.

Priya- sorry! Peehu.

Ram- aandar hai usske room me.

Priya- phir aap yaha par.

Ram- wo peehu ko soup banna ke de raha hun dinner kiya lekin thodi der baad yaha par aane ke baad sab kuch.

Priya- uss time kiu nahi bola itna sab kuch hone ke baad.

Ram- i thought it's normal but after 12 she feel fever.

Priya- doc hai aap.

Ram- haan.

Priya- kya doc hai aap.

Ram- nahi!

Priya- aap bahar aayie kitchen se aur peehu koi badi bacchi nahi hai jo aap usse soup baanake de rahe ho, khichdi baanti hun, thoda sa khayegi toh she feel good.

Ram- ok n ram came out from kitchen, priya make khichdi for peehu n came in peehu's room.

Priya- hey priness how r u?

Peehu in crying tone- fever hai mujhe.

Priya seat beside her- uss me rone wali konsi baat hai.

Peehu- see my all body warm.

Priya give her side hug n kissed on forehead- so what.

Peehu- aapko pata hai maine vomit bhi ki.

Priya- tumhare petu ko khaana pasand nahi aaya aur kuch nahi.

Peehu's eye's still in tears.

Priya wiped her tears n said- bukhar humen kiu aata hai pata hai.

Peehu asking by her eye brows up.

Priya- coz hum aapni saari wishes puri kar sake by love once person.

Ram- aisa bhi hota hai n ram enterd in room with khichdi plate in his hand.

Priya- haan aapko nahi pata.

Ram- mujhe toh pehli baar pata chala n he seat on chair near by her bed.

Peehu- aapne baanai.

Ram look at priya, priya bilnked her eyes n give him look that say yes to her.

Ram- haan aap teast karke batao kaise baani hai.

Peehu take one spoon of khichdi n eat n say- aapne nahi baanai.

Ram- arrye maine baanai hai n he look at priya.

Peehu- 100% priya aunty ne baanayi hai.

Ram little amezed- tumhe kaise pata chala.

Peehu- pata nahi.

Priya- very smart n smile.

Peehu- aapko mumma hai.


Continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update sis continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely part n love peehu n priya bond n waiting for more rayapi moment
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi..
I have been a fellow reader of ur ff 'Tum mile' and today come across this ff 'Rishta' of Urs...

I just loved this ...different plot...so eager to read the subsequent parts.

Each and every character was entwined in such a way that they are beautifully connected.
All characters, be it the awesome foursome ram, priya, vikram and neha or nutz with them, then the cutie pihu, ritika all connected in one or other way to each other and adding meaning to story...

Priya hving a horrible past with her marriage life and the trauma she is in, so sad to see her like tht...and now ram coming in as the only hope with little princess pihu to get priya out of tht bad memories and priya-pihu scenes are too cute, Rayape scene started now, eager to read more scenes of them and hw priya slowly learns to live again too..

Priya being gync and connected to ram thru ritika delivery and bringing in pihu to this world is wht i culd guess

But many still unanswered, ritika and sahil luv, then ram and ritika being together,then tht unknown caller, is he priya's hubby, bck again to haunt her..

Eager to know answers to all these and read further updates...

Pls update soon..
Edited by LuvSSever - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Superb update.
Story is progressing well.
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
More of meeting between Pihu and Priya made them more close to each other and with this RaYa too spend some time.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
so sweet Priya n pihu. pl write more scenes of these two. thanks for pm pl continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
nice part...
loved pihu priya bonding...
contd sooon
thanx for update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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part 11
omg this update has raised many new questions in mind like how Shahil Ritika got separated how Ram come into their picture... what happen to Shahil then... who us Priya's ex... why he wants to get back but one thing only I liked in this was Priya & Peehu's bonding getting so well awesome... I liked Vik's protective nature too for Priya it really nice to see such amazing story would like to read more soon... plZ update next soon...

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