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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
Nice part
Priya Pihu bonded very well
Vikram is tensed...worried for Priya
thanks for PM
continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 12

Pee- aapko mumma hai.

Priya- hai but yaha par nahi hai.

Pee- mujhe nahi hai wo aj hoti toh, mujhe bhukhar kiu aata hai ye baat mujhe unnhone baataya hota.

Ram eyes filed with tears.

Priya asked her- u missed ur mumma.

Pee- missed nahi karti, coz dadi aur papa aise hone nahi dete, they both are the best.

Ram- pakka u missed today mumma na.

Pee- no papa aaj dadi nahi thi lekin dadi ki jagah priya aunty thi.

Ram- Thank you priya.

Priya took plam on peehu's cheeks n say- peehu ke liye kuch bhi, ab chalo jaldi khatam karo aur medicin lo n sleep.

Peehu making face- kadvi lagti hai.

Priya- kal tera fav. Wala BF milega, soch lo tumhe kya karna hai.

Pee- okk pakka.

Ram look at both n smile on peehu's face after priya's came when she was in fever, he look at his mobile wallpaper n make a decision on face expression n leave to kitchen.

Sometime later priya came there with empty plate n say.

Priya- mai nikalti hun, peehu ne dawai khaa li hai aur soo bhi gayi hai don't worry she will be fine soon, if anything else with her please call me.

Ram- thanks for everything.

Priya- sirf peehu ke liye iss me thanks wali koi baat nahi hai.

Ram- iss baat ke liye nahi.

Priya- phir kis baat ke liye.

Ram- bahot raat hui hai, hum kal baat kar sakte hai.

Priya- abhi baat kar sakte hai please.

Ram- but.

Priya cut him middle- please kuch puchna hai.

Ram- ok coffee.

Priya- thanks but I don't want.

Ram- ok abhi aata hun.



Past:


Priya n riti at hostel, riti ready to go for party.

Priya asked her- kahi jaa rahi ho.

Riti- haan aj raat nahi hun kal subha aaungi, please key humari jagah chupaa kar jaana.

Priya- haan lekin ek baat baatao, itna tyar ho kar kaha par jaa rahi ho bday party hai na.

Riti- haan lekin mera nahi BF ka.

Priya- ohh.

Riti- raat ko daarna mana hai.

Priya- shut up yaar, kabhi kabhi ho jaata hai.

Riti- theek hai aapna khayal rakhna aur please bhoot wale serial mat dekhna aaj mai nahi hun.

Priya- itna care n concern diabites ho jaayegi mujhe.

Riti came near her- kya karu teri jaisi room met ho toh wo bhi manjur hai.

Priya- dost toh tu mujhe banti nahi, na hi meri dushman.

Riti- hum dono ka course khatam hone ke baad hum dono india toh jarur jaayenge lekin alag alag cities me aur kabhi milne toh nahi wale hai.

Priya- tu ye sab abhi kiu soch rahi hai wo toh feture hai.

Riti- dur ki soch bolte hai so abhi ke liye room met hi theek hai.

Priya- itna toh pakka hai mai tumhe nahi bhulungi.

Riti- meri taraf se toh itna hai ke tumhe mai jarur miss karungi coz of n she stop in middle.

Priya curious to listen her anwer - coz of.

Riti- coz of kuch nahi mai nikalti hun bye take care.

At corner of road, ram waiting for her with his bike.

Riti came their- hi buddy, chale.

Ram- haan chalte hai lekin waha se wapas kab aana hai ye toh bolo.

Riti- mai kal subha aana wali hun aur tu.

Ram little care- kal subhe.

Riti- don't worry sahil will drop me.

Ram- ya I know but.

Riti cut him middle- don't worry ram he is with me.

Ram- ok as u wish, I will drop u there but u will msg me when u reach ur hostel.

Riti- ok boss.

Ram- chal ab baith, Riti seat back n they both went for there way.



Present:


Priya wondering there books shelf n talking with herself.

Priya- not bad phsology books nice, collection.

Ram came there with coffee mug, she look back n say.

Priya- tum pagalon ke doctor ho kya.

Ram- kiu.

Priya- ho toh please mera tretment karo mujhe pagal hone se bacchao.

Ram- means.

Priya- kuch nahi phir kabhi bata dungi.

Ram- ok tum kuch bata rahi thi.

Priya little doubt on her statement- hum kabhi mile hai kya, inn kuch 4 ya 5 years pehle.

Ram in mind- sach baata du ya nahi, nahi baataya toh bhi problem ho sakti hai, how can she face about Riti's dead I Think tretment ke mutabik she face the truth, issey hi pata chalega how much she bear the truth issey aage ka step mai le sakta hun.

Priya brock his thoughts- hey where are u lost, if u don't want.

Ram cut her middle- dr. Priya we both are met 4 n half year ago on the birth of peehu.

Priya little confused- peehu ke time.

Ram- yes.

Priya- seriously.

Ram- haan tumhari wajah se peehu aaj iss duniya me hai.

Priya- hold on I did not get what u say.

Ram- accident case yaad hai tumhe, complicate delivery yaad hai.

Priya- Riti... Ritika..

Ram's eyes filed with tears n he smile- yes.

Priya- how could be possible, delivery complicate thi lekin itni bhi nahi thi ke wo... n her voice choked n tears rolled down.

Ram- I know that was.

Priya- I m sorry agar mai uss time waha se nahi jaati toh ye sab nahi hota.

Ram- no no its not your foult when peehu was born she was stayble but blooding ki wajah se she was in coma then ek saal baad she was... peehu kaisi dikhti hai ye baat bhi usse pata nahi hai even she don't know that she have a baby girl n he smile.

Priya- sorry uss din agar meri personal resone ki wajah se mai nahi gayi hoti toh aj Riti...

Ram- saare doctor's ne case complicate hai bolke hath upar kiye the but u did a good job aur peehu ko uss sab situation se tumne bachaya iss liye Thank you aaj tumhari wajah se peehu meri zindagi me hai, Riti ki ek yaad ke saath mere saath ek boundle of joy hai.

Priya- phir bhi sorry mai Riti ko bachha nahi payi.

Ram- why are u say sorry its not ur foult aur waise bhi itne saal se mai tumhe dhund raha tha sirf Thank you bolne ke liye.

Priya wiped her tears- phir bhi dil me ek baat humesha rahegi I cant save Riti if I was there, mai kuch kar pati.

Ram- its ok.

Priya- ye sab kaise.

Ram told her Past.


Past:


Ram driving.

Ram- Riti Thank you.

Riti- for what?



Continue soon

Edited by Arpipatil - 8 years ago
iluvusakshi thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
ritika is Rams.wife
ohh.. good writing.
thanks for pm. pl continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Superb arpita n hope raya pass aa jaye all thanks to pihu now waiting for next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
nice part...
hope by this revelation they become friends.
waiting for next
contd soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Very nice part Arpita.
Waiting for Ram's past.
Thanks for pm.
Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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part 12
so my guess was right it was Priya who saved Pihu good interesting but how did Riti meet with accident??? n now i doubt do really Pihu is Riti & Ram's kid or there is some other story behind this???? well yeh toh will know only with further updates... happy Ram didn't lie to Priya he said truth n now waiting for to know that plz update next part soon...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Hi ...
Nice update dear..when i saw your tum mile update, i was waiting for you to update this,.
I was eager to read this update..
Nice one this update is...


As always priya-pihu bond, loving it.
And Ram - priya convo..good they are heading to next stage i think, from strangers and neighbours, i think this conversation might end them up in start of a new friendship.

Now priya knew tht peehu is ritika's daughter,so the attachment would be more.
Progress of story is good..

In past wht happened to sahil-ritika relationship , how ram came into picture..And hw accident happened.

In present, now knowing Ram's truth, hw priya going to react, what transformation she would go thru,
Will additional guilt of not saving ritika too will add up..

I am eager to read all this...waiting for next update.. :)

And Thanks for the pm.



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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Thanks for PM arpita
Loving the flow of story..Priya got to know about Ritika's death
sahil is confusing matlab his role...will be waiting for next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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finally Ram disclosed a bit of her Past..
but why she is so vulnerable sometimes..wanna know..
story is going good and so interesting
Thank u dear for ur pm

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