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'nahi abhi thodi Der pehle

soyi hai, iss liye call kiya' he said on phn.


'injected karna pada aj' she
asked in worried.


'haan' he said in sad tone.

'now she ok or not' she also
worried.


'haan, abhi kaha na she is
sleeping now' he said.


'can i came there now, waise
bhi yaha par mai naa rahungi toh bhi chalega, yaha par preeti hai' she said.


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'don't get tension yaar she
is ok now n mostly injected kiya hai, abhi subhe hi aankhein khulegi, aur usse
yaad bhi nahi rahega ki usse kya hua tha, aur waise bhi tum subhe aa hi rahi
ho' he said.


'yaa phir bhi tension hoti hai but don't

worry, Maine baat ki hai doctor se, i hope he said yes to treat her' she said.


'i hope too' he said.


'she take her dinner or not'
she asked.


'no, sab kuch aisa hi tha, jab
door open kiya tab dekha, she was hide her under the dining table, i was go
near there, but today she didn't identify me n my voice too, thanks to you, Jo
tumhari voice se, uss time tum ne call nahi kiya hota toh, i don't know what to
do that time, thanks' he said.


'shut up yaar she is like my sister and also

my besti too' she said.


'yaah, when will that doctor came' he asked.


'came after 3days, after his daughter exam
over' she said.


'ok n thanks once again, love

you' he said.


'love you too and take care of her i will came
on morning, bye t.c, she said.

'haan bye t.c, and called end.


3 days later.

next part after comments


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Different story..
Interesting.
Waiting for next part.
Thanks for pm.
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thanks for pm. pl continue
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Seems someone is being treated but the big quest is who is he and she and talking about whom.
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Part 1

'bhai you are the best bhai in these world' n she pulled his cheeks.

'don't pulled my cheeks, i hate it', he said.

'yaa i know that now plz called neha 3din se baat nahi ki hai aapne, khaana bhi thik se nahi khaa rahi hai', she said.

'how did you know about her', he asked her.

'humare contacts dur-dur tak hai', she say everything with proud tone.

'kaise pata chala sab kuch ye toh bata priya', he said.

Priya- wo kya hai na vik bro n she signal him through finger came near her.

She said- secret hai.

Vik- yaar baata na.

Priya- bola na secret hai.

Vik- tu aur tera secret!

Ab mai nikalta hun, shaam ko milte hai aur haan kal shaam ko doctor ke saath appointment hai.

Priya with irritated- phir se new doc bhai.

Vik- haan phir se, ab chup kar aur aram kar book padhte na rahiyo.

Priya- plz call to neha.

Vik- haan karta hun, tu bas jaada soch mat ok.

Priya- hmm bye tc.

Vik left to his way.

At hospital, man talked with girl.

Men- coffee pee le phn jarur aayega usske liye aapna khaana peena chodne ki koi zarurat nahi hai.

Neha little shouted- shut up ok, he is my fiance tumhare jaisa bilkul nahi hai, unromantic' she starched the word unromantic.

Man- what do u mean teri behen se puchna chahiye tha mai kitna romantic tha.

Neha- hwww kitna jhoot bolta hai ye insan, ritika always complain to me that u was unromantic jab dekho wo physiology ki books padhte rehete the.

Ram- shiii kitne gande the tum, hum dono ki bedroom tak ki baatein tum dono share karte the.

Neha- i m not shame less person ok.

Ram- arguing last 1hour we both are only arguing, how could viky handle you, Jesus.

Neha- jiju.

Ram- boliye saali ji.

Neha- don't called me sali ji, here right now plz.

Ram- accha ye topic baad me discuss karte hai pehle ye baata mujhe yaha par kiu bulaya, wo bhi tere hospital.

Neha- 2 wajah hai.

Ram- konsi! Bol.

Neha- ek toh new patient hai.

Ram cut her between- u know that very well that i m not treat any kind of patient after ritika's died.

Neha- i know but its for me coz that patient its viky's sis, she was victim of harassment for unwanted relation by her husband, he was treating her like a animal everyday mentally torture, 2years she was suffering from all, yeh sab vikram London gaya tha usse milne tab pata chala bahot kuch karne ke baad jaa kar priya ko nayi zindagi mili hai lekin wo sab kuch itna asan nahi hai, ye toh tum acchi tarah se jaante ho tum ek doctor ho, wo bhi psychiatrist.

Ram- lekin neha ye ye sab nahi, mujhe se nahi hoga.

Neha- i was promise to viky yaar, ki tum priya ko treat karoge.

Ram- why don't you understand, mai psychiatric sirf ritika ke liye baana wo chahti thi ke mai.

Neha cut him middle- Di ne ye toh nahi kaha tha ke mai kabhi na rahungi toh tum doctor ki job karna chod dena.

Ram- aisa nahi hai, ritika was my strength.

Neha- plz ram yaar, haan bol doo viky ka tension dur hoga agar tu haan bolega.

Ram- sorry.

Neha- ram Di ko jaa kar 3 saal pure huey hai aur tum wahi par ho.

Ram- plz neha ab tu mat start kar waha par maa, yaha par tu.

Neha- ab kya kiya aunty ne.

Ram- din me 1000 baar bolti hai shaadi karle aage baadh jaa.

Neha cut him middle- she is right.

Ram- itna aasan nahi hai aage badhna, ritika ki best yaad hai mere paas.

Neha- yahi baat hai tumhare paas best yaad hai ritika ki aur priya ke paas wo yaad hai Jo shayad zindagi bhar picha nahi chodegi wo zindagi bhar wahi gandi aur ghatiya yaadein lekar jeeyegi, ek din aisa aayega jab wo khud ko khatam bhi karegi na to bas wo sab lekar.

Ram casually said- tu kiu itna emotional ho rahi hai aur waise bhi duniya me bahot saare doctor hai mere alawa, wo sab mujhse better hai.

'wo sab better hai lekin unnki sab ka yahi kehna hai, wo kabhi thik nahi hogi, jaise humesha aadhi raat me nind se uthna, chikhna, chillna, kabhi kabhi toh out of control, phn ki ring sunkar itna darna ke, behosh! Sab se badi baat toh ye hai, wo ganda insan usske khayalo se bahar aana dur priya ka darna, darr kar bed ke nicche ya kahi aisi jagah chuppna jaaha par usse koi dekh na sake, aapko ye sab mazak lag raha hai ye baat alag hai aur iss duniya me aap se bhi best doctor hai lekin wo doctor sir aur sirf priya ko medicine dekar thik kar sakte hai naa ke wo pehle wali priya laa kar de sakte hai, she was almost dead', all said by vik with teary eyes, he controlled himself n said, 'don't worry neha only suggested me that she with talked with u, she did, n u denial don't worry mai koi aur doctor dhundunga, thanks for ur time n he turned to neha.

Vik- shaam ko ghar chalo dimag khaaya hai subhe se call karo, call karo karke.

Neha- ooo my baccha kitna accha hai.

Vik- call kiya tha tumhe.

Neha- nahi toh.

Vik- kaise pata chala.

'maine bola', girl voice.

Vik- kiu karti hai, junior doctor hai junior ki tarah nahi reh sakti.

Girl- kya karu aadat se majbur hun aur dosti ki hai, so nibha rahi hun.

Neha- nuts you are too much.

Nuts- i m! Dr.viky how is priya.

Vik- she is ok, ok.

Nuts- then today night jungle book pakka.

Vik- no kal thoda bahar jaana hai n he took one file on table.

Continue soon

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totally a different concept. mast writing. thanks for pm. mast story.
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Different story...
Read both parts together ...
Thanks for pm and please continue.
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Love to read something about awesome foursome and Nuts seem to be very close withe but as Neha said Ram should treat Priya so she can come out form darkness and it will surely make Vikram at ease.
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sister...!!!! hats off!!! really...amazing... yaar...abhi marathi me hi bolta hu...kay lihlays...wah chabuk ekdum chabuk...kadak...mala watla tu D3 sarkha kai tari karshil...toh supriya ani kaivalya cha trck...but u proved me wrong...a strong story line!! so ram is already married so as priya...!! she had a bitter past and ram to lost his wife...soo this two will meet for a good reason...hope ram will agree to treat her! :-) really worth reading... next soon plzzz
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Part 2

Vik- no kal thoda bahar jaana hai n he took one file on table.

Same time one sister came inform to neha n vik to there patients conditions, they both leave for that, nuts look that file n said- ye file toh, ye Dr.vik bhi na, she took that file on desk of neha n leave that place.

Ram thinking something n he take that file in his hand n started to read the history of her.

At evening, vik, neha n nuts reached apartment.

Priya open the door, saw two ladies in front of her, she got surprise.

Nuts hugged her, priya hugged her back, after Brock the hugged.

Priya to neha- sab sort hua.

Vik- naa bol ke konsi mujhe rahat milti.

Neha- hwww see priya, how rude he is.

Vik- konsa rude hun kal se balloon baana rakha tha muh.

Priya- bhai sach me aap rude bol rahe ho.

Nuts- rude game hua hai toh kya hum movie dekh sakte hai.

Priya- konsi!

Neha excited- jungle book.

Priya little shouted- noo.

Neha n nuts- yes.

Priya- its means go be a rock to night.

They three shouting- wooo.

Vik irritated- oye girls dheere shout karna, warna sab humein society se bahar phekh denge.

Neha- A dr.shergil aaj agar tune daata na to tumhe aaj bahar sona padega.

Vik gave irritated look n say- do what ever you want.

At city hospital, ram reading priya's file.

Ram- itna sab kuch hua hai iss ke saath, kya karna chahta hai, bol, he talked with him self, kuch samjha nahi aa raha hai, she already damage herself 85% Jo 15% baaki hai usse tu thik kar sakta hai, neha ne thik baatya tha Dr.vik ko, mai thik kar sakta hun, n he starched his forehead- what to do, lu ye case haath me, lekin tu neha se kya bolega most important wo vikram ussne bhi toh, ok stop arguing case leta hun lekin doctor baankar nahi ek insan baankar, issey 2 baatein hogi ek toh ghar se dur rahunga aur dusri baat kuch waqt peehu ke saath.

At apartment, three girls watching movie, with shouting, vik got irritated about that n he shouting.

Vik- why are u shouting n how much u all shouting.

Sometime door bell ring.

Vik- ab mai door nahi open karne wala.

Priya- you seat, i check, shayad secretary hoga.

She open the door, man's back to her.

Priya asked- yes, he turned. 'hi', he said n smiled.

Priya- hii, who are you?

Man- ram, your new neabiour.

Vik asked- kon hai priya.

Priya little scared n said- bhai aap plz yaha par aayie.

Vikram came there, and he saw him n say something but ram said in hurry.

Ram- hii, my name is ram, your new neabiour.

Vik- hii n priya went from there vik asked him.

Vik- why are you came here.

Ram- i know you are mad on me, but plz listen to me once.

Vik- bolo n he folded his hand by his chest.

Ram- yaha par nahi, kahi par chalo, n vik go with him.

Neha asked to priya- kon tha.

Priya- koi new neabiour tha.

Nuts- new neabiour wo bhi yaha par.

Priya- haan.

Nuts- koi hot ladka hai kya.

Priya shockingly- nuts.

Nuts- thodi si flirting.

Priya- mai soone jaa rahi hun.

Neha- itne jaldi.

Priya- haan wo aaj thodi si thakkan mehesus ho rahi hai.

Neha- you ok.

Priya didn't say anything.

Neha to nuts- TV off kar.

Nuts off the TV.

Neha forward her hand to priya, she hold her hand n neha drag her to seat, she seat, neha asked her.

Neha- kya hua.

Priya- kuch nahi bas darr gayi, wo Maine door open kiya tab kuch yaad aaya.

Neha- kya yaad aaya, asking serious tone.

Priya- jab wo insan drink kar ke aata tha tab, some bad flash came in front of my eyes n my leg started shivering n her eyes filed with tears.

Nuts- hey don't cry yaar.

Priya- 1 saal hogaya waha se nikal kar yaha par aayi hun lekin wo yaadien nahi mit rahi hai, sab kuch bhai kar rahi hai lekin kuch nahi ho raha kabhi-kabhi lagta hai khud ko khatam kar dun lekin, aisa kiya toh wo insan jeet jaayega, mai iss darr ko mitana chahti hun.

Neha- you will priya.

Nuts- ek tujhe baat bolu.

Priya's eyes still in tears- kya.

Neha- ye naya BF dhund rahi hai.

Priya- what! pagal hai kya nuts tu kitna BF badlegi.

Here at corridor, vikram n ram talked.

Ram- see i know tum bahot jaada gusse me ho abhi lekin Maine saari case study ki hai, i m sorry Maine bahot jaada casually liya uss time, lekin saari history padhne ke baad mujhe aisa laga ke mujhe ye case handle karna chahiye kiu, kis liye ye baat mai tumhe baad me baataunga jab priya puri taraha se thik ho jaayegi.

Vik- tum ye sab neha kehe rahi hai, issliye kar rahe ho ya.

Ram cut him middle- mai ye sab iss liye kar raha hun kiu ki mujh par kisi ke ehsan hai kisi ke, bas usse kum karna chahta hun, tum aisa samjh na ki tumhe ek nay dost aur ek naya neabiour mila hai.

Vik- kis baat ka ehsan.

Ram- your sister was gaynalostic.

Vik- haan at London hospital, after that she got married that person, then she leave that job n ye sab ho gaya.

Ram- toh yahi kafi hai.

Vik- tumhara reason kuch bhi ho lekin priya ko kuch nahi.

Ram cut him middle- kuch nahi hoga trust me, everything will be fine soon, bas mere liye ek kam karo.

Vik- kya bolo.

Ram- meri beti bhi mere saath rahegi most important yaha par koi bhi nahi hai Jo usske saath.

Vik- usske liye kisi ki zarurat bhi nahi hai.

Ram- wo kiu.

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