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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Look Who is here

Nobita the famous cartoon

OK So starting from PART 1

Ram kissed Esha


Anyways Ab to kar diya kaun rok sakta hai


Part 2

Love the Priya's simplicity and Ram's care
all Scene are Good

Now Devil esha At Ram's Home

Waitng for Next


PS :Where The hell is PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

RaYa first meeting at breakfast table was so nice. AK introduced her but usually Niharika has attitude but seem Ram liked her. Their small outing of Mumbai darshan making Ram to like the Priya company but now wat twist it will bring in RaYa life to see Esha at his house. Dear u are writing very nice progress is very good. Continue soon.

thaaank you sooo much anchal di for analyzing so deeply 😃 😃 👏 thank you for the wonderful comment 😊 😳 will try to update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Beautiful update...
Ram Priya's 1st meet was good at BF table
both njoyed their chotusa mumbai darshan..
very nice... pls continue sooon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1
awww that's really new start of RaYa Ram is in love with someone else where Priya has lost her parents all alone Mumbai came here with AK... Nik is gonna be fun to read abt her... but hated Esha here why Ram is doing what is not with his heart... well moving for next to read. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2
what to say it's too good so Ram is attracting towards Priya hope it's his love n nothing else but what will happen to Esha she have no fault in this she just simply loves Ram n wants him only then why this to be happen to her... well I really want you to continue this story it's really good Pl listen to my request n plz continue thus soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey dear plz continue this we r waiting from so long plz consider our request...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: leena04


hey dear plz continue this we r waiting from so long plz consider our request...

hi dear I will continue this ss from June in my vacations, thanks for the lovely feedback.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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read both parts in a go!! wow wow wow! superb yaar really amazing.. :-) maja aagaya... nice start ...plzzz next jaldi...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Chapter# 3

Sorry guys for being so late. I was very much busy with my studies and all. Thank you for the support it kept me motivated. Your support is needed in next chapters too. Please ignore grammatical and typing mistakes. Once again big Thank you to you all.

Recap :

Ram looked at esha and she looked back with huge smile.

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Ram looked totally blank he thought Esha has disclosed the truth of their relationship. Ram wanted to tell about all this by himself he didn't want anyone else to tell about it to his parents, he wondered how they must have felt to know about his secret affair with daughter of his mom's best friend and the girl who is his business partner.

Ak : ab tum dono wahin khade raho gay ya andar bhi aao gay.

Ram and priya entered together. Ram totally avoid to look at Esha he simply greeted everyone and sat beside his father. Priya sat on single sofa that was next to ram.

Niharika : Ram this is not fair you don't share anything about your life with us now beta, tum bade hogaye ek business empire sambhaltay ho lekin iska matlab ye nahi k tum hum se itni bade baatien share karna hi chod do.

Ak : time banana padta hai tum se humien kum se kum aesi umeed nahi thi.

Ram : Maa I know apko kaisa lag raha hai but trust me main apko khud batana chahta tha lekin khabi time hi nahi mila.

Ram : sorry papa I am really sorry. Ab apko jab pata chal hi chukka hai so agay jo bhi ap chahen gay sab waese hi hoga sab arrangements apki marzi se hongay( he all said this looking downwards).

Mrs. Desai( esha's mom) : Ram tum to aesay react kar rahe ho jaisay hum ne tumhara kesi se k sath affair pakad lia ho.

Ram : (immediately looks at her and his parents) mat... matlab?

AK : aree humien to abhi pata chala jab Esha ne btaya tumhari Desai group k sath business partnership ki kal 5th anniversary hai.

Ram : oh God oh acha ye baat... haa wo mein( smiled happily) sorry papa mein to khud bhul gaya tha.

Niharika : C'mon ram it's a big day tomorrow I think we should throw some grand party for this

Esha : of course aunty ye ram to na kal khudi apne friends k sath party kar leta aur hum mein se kesi k sath bhi celebrate karna important nahi samjhta.

Ak : haan bikul inn 5 panch saalon mein dono companies ko kafi profit milay hain so should definitely celebrate.

Ram : yes why not (looks at Esha mischievously) actually thanks to Esha who have been supportive in every matter so celebration to banta hai.

Ak : waese ram tu kya socha kya puch rahe thay hum teray se?

Ram : Ah nothing dad kuch nahi.

Ak : so kal sham ki party ki arrangements mein karunga aur party yahin kapoor mansion mein ho g.

All agreed to this

AK : lo inn baton mein hum Priya ko toh bhul hi gaye

Mrs. Desai isse mileye ye hai Priya meray ek buhat achay dost Sudhir unki beti hai. She is very diligent girl and abhi parso hi ayi hai mumbai.

Mrs. Desai and Priya had casual introduction.

Suddenly Esha she said Ram can I have few words with you actually aj mein tumhare office ayi thi lekin pata chala tum aj office hi nahi aye so I need to discuss few official things with you.

Ak : aree bachon office ka kaam office mein ghar mein office k matters ko nahi latay. Waese ram tu ne abhi tak priya ko apna ghar nahi dikhaya. Aur esha aur ram tum dono invites ki list bhi decide kar lo.

Ram : ah yea dad, okay come Priya.

Three of them were going upstairs when Esha said

Esha : oh so ye thi tumhari guest Ram? ( she looks at priya from tip to toe and thinks isse achay kapde to meri maid phenti hai).

Ram : Yea waese to tum logon ka apas mein introduction neechay ho chukka but phir bhi Priya this is Esha my very old friend and business partner, aur Esha she is Priya, she loves reading books and inko road side wali kulfi kafi pasand hai( looks at priya and smile)

Priya too smile hearing him.

Esha : wow kafi jaan gaye ho ek din mein Apni iss guest ko.

Ram understood Esha was not In good mood. However he remained very cool and calm and showed priya few rooms when he was about to enter his room Esha immediately said : priya will you don't mind can you excuse us for few moments. Ram didn't like they way Esha said this straight a way.

Priya : yea sure, actually mein thak gayi hun I need to fresh n up.

She was about to leave when Ram said : It was nice meeting to you Miss Priya and smiles.

Priya : Same here Mr. kapoor( smiles and leave).

Esha : what the hell ram you were ignoring me for that ugly girl!

When priya left Esha literally pushed ram in his room and shouted

Ram ; first of all she is not ugly she is pretty, second I wasnt ignoring you baby I was stuck there, papa asked me to take her for outing I didn't even wanted to go with her.

Esha : Shut up ram, you were not even answering my calls.

Ram : so baby how could I talk to you in front of a stranger

Ram comes closure to her took her in his arms and said

Ram : I know you must have been really hurt, baby I promise to make it up to you tomorrow.

Esha ; tomorrow kaisay kal to party hai na

Ram : so what party sham to kuch ghanton mein katam ho jaye g saari raat to nahi chalay g na( tightens his embrace)

Esha : I love you, I hate it when you ignore me for someone else( buried her face in his chest)

Ram : (laughs a little) I know my love but sometimes we should understand the situation too.

Esha moves her face too kiss him but Ram stops her

Ram : oh hello madam ye mera ghar humara private suite nahi please control your hormones( laughs)

Esha ( hits on his chest) Stupid!

Ram ; chalo everyone is waiting.

Esha : Ram please aj humare parents sath hain kya humko aj bta nahi saktay humare bare mein.

Ram : Esha I promise kal sabko humare iss rishte ka pata chal jaye ga ab humien zyda intezar karne ki zarurat nahi hai buhat jald aap Mrs. Kapoor banne wali hain be ready for that.

Esha : ( Exclaimed happily) WHATT? Are you serious??

Ram : yes baby now I really want you to be with me forever and nuzzles her neck

Esha : wait wait wait abhi Suite ki baat kaun kar raha tha hmmm??

Both laughed and kissed eachother before leaving the room.


Edited by bubbleneetu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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first!! and plz add me in ur pm list

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