ss: behadh... Chapter:3... page5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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My darling Urvi di(duzZvi) wishing you a very vey happy
birthday. Mein ny ye aj issi liye post kia kyun k meray pehlay write up ko post karna k liye iss say
zyda memorable day ho hi nahi sakta. You are the most funniest, loveliest and
fastum fast bolnay wali girl. Bus abb iss say zyda tareef mein nahi kar sakti
(lol). Love you di :-) thank you for everything. God bless you :*


SS:
"Behadh"


Chapter:1


Ram( bulky and cute)is a Business Tycoon lives with his parents Amarnath Kapoor and
niharika kapoor( niharika same in style as she was in balh but slight grey
haired), in mumbai.


Priya is simple graduate lives with her Maasi in jaipur,she
lost her parents at the age of 16.


Ram is an apple of an eye of his mother Niharika, she
believes that her son is the most high profile standard guy,he only deserves the
best. He is her pride. Niharika is very status conscious lady and likes to show
off. Whereas Amarnath is very down to earth. Ram is very obedient son,his age
is 40 he is Raymond( the perfect man), loves his parents a lot.


Priya Sharma 32 very simple and innocent (unmarried). She
teaches in an ordinary school. Priya is daughter of amarnath's old f

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nobita ... finally ...😉

first of all thank u sooo much ... u really made my
birthday special ...first a surprise on WA ..then here😉



fastum fast bolne wali ladki

ab meri kya galti agar tujhe dheere dheere samajh aata hai to ...

Now coming to write up ...




fab write up 👏👏👏... something different ... loving the story ...ram not golu here 😆😆...esha track ko jaldi khatm kr diyo 😡 ..thn my raya together ...now update jaldi jaldi ... n pm bhejna ...😉

Once again thanks a ton darling ...




ab dekh kya rhi hai 😆...jaldiii se next part update kr ... waiting ...



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb noreeta great work plsss continue soon[
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wowww. beautiful writing. pl continue. and ha one more thing. its a request. plzz be regular in updating the story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you so much all, for the comments, your feedback really means a lot 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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mujse bas hasi aarahi hai ... Saach m !!!
its good to see you are writting now ... missing you in group
do continue soon ... :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SakshianSneh

mujse bas hasi aarahi hai ... Saach m !!!
its good to see you are writting now ... missing you in group
do continue soon ... :D

lol 😆 sneh I cannot stop laughing after reading your comment...purani baatien yaad ah gayien... I missing you all so much yaaar 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey dear I am well surprise to see you write
You are written very good using imagination
But can't imagine Ram with anyone other than Priya and it's shocking that he like Esha and want to marry but still not convinced himself too.
AK is so sweet but as usual his dream to see RaYa married will be intetupted by Niharika.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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pl continue. mujhe pm karna next time.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful story with nice start...
but cant tolerate the news ram loves isha n going to marry with her...
pls continue sooon...

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