RaYa SS :Kaho na Pyar Hai part 13updated on page 18 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice one
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read last 2 parts both were superb plss pm me yaar n title mein update karo ki part n pgs
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Read all the parts in one go
loved it...Its very beautiful story
please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Now Ashwin is out if jail due to his father power. Hope Amarnath able to unite Ram Priya in a marriage knot soon before that jerk could do more harm to RaYa.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rayaland

Read last 2 parts both were superb plss pm me yaar n title mein update karo ki part n pgs


Actually i dont know how to do that but ii will mention which part on which page
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LovingRaYa

Now Ashwin is out if jail due to his father power. Hope Amarnath able to unite Ram Priya in a marriage knot soon before that jerk could do more harm to RaYa.


lets see what happen
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello frnds i am back with next update hope you will like this.

PART 7

Ram is resting in his room when krishna ji enter and sit beside him she keep her hand on his forehead feeling touch he open his eyes and smile a bit.
Ram : Maa, ek baat puchu apse.
Krishna ji : ha puchu na..
Ram : aap mujhse naraj ho kya.
Krishna ji : kis liye,
Ram : vo mene aise achanak se shadi krne ke liye bola.
Krishan ji : ek baat bta tu priya se pyar to karta hai na????
Ram : mujhe nahi pta maa mein priya se pyar karta hu ya nahi bas me use khush dekhna chatha hu mein nahi chatha koi usko hurt kre.ab aap batao kya aap hurt ho.
Krishna ji : sach bolu toh mujhe bilkul bura ni lga tere ase bolne s ekyuki shadi to tujhe karni hi thi abhi nahi to thode time baad aur fir mera beta apni life e settle hone wala hai vo bhi aisi ladki se jo us se bhaut pyar karti hai.
ram : ek min maa,mein nahi janta priya mere liye kuch feel karti bhi hai ya nahi.mujhe to ye bhi nahi pta vo is shadi ke liye ha bhi karegi ya nahi.
Krishna ji : smile.
Ram : kya hua why r u smiling.
Krishna ji : ruffle his hairs,vo isliye kyuki me janti hu priya tumse pyar karti hai.
Ram :apko kaise pta.
Krishna ji : vo isliye kyuki hospital me jb hum log tumhari shadi ke bare me baat kar rhe the to usko acha ni lag rha tha kyukia usko malum hi nahi tha ki vo hi meri hone wali bahu hai.
Ram : (exicetly)acha aisa hai.wah
Krshna ji : bas bas aab jaldi se rest kr aur thik ho ja pta hai na tere papa ne kya shart rakhi agar tujhe priya se shadi karni hai toh..
Ram : ha maa pta hai vaise is condition ke bna shadi nahi ho sakti .
Krishna ji : nahi beta tujhe ab responsible hona hoga kon ladki chaegi ki uska pati kuch kaam hi na karta ho.Uski bhi respect honi chaiye society me aur me janti hu mera beta ye kr sakta hai Priya ke liye hi sahi.
Ram : ha maa karna toh hoga hi.
Krishna ji leave,
Ram : himmself.acha toh madam ko mjhse pyar hai,ab dekho me kya karta hu.
Days passes and ram recover today he go to college after many days,
Ram : Hiii frnds kiase ho sab mere bina.
Vikram : (happily)ohh Ram ...and hug him ab thik h tu ??
Ram : jaisa hu tere samne hu.Acha sun neha aur pariya kha h.
Vikram : yahi hoge kahi u know na girls and their talks.
Ram : ha acha sun na mujhe tujhe kuch batana hai but promise kar tu kisi ko nahi batega.
Vikram : aisa kya h bol.
Ram : first promise me.
Vikram : ok promise baba.
Ram : vo tu janta hai na mene papa se bola hai mujhe shadi karni hai.
Vikram : ha toh
Ram : toh vo ladki pta hai kon hai.
Vikram : nahi...
Ram : (closing his eyes) slowly priya.
Vikram : Kya???????
Ram : yes.
Vikram : but she dosent tell us.
Ram : arrey she dosent know na i want to marry her papa ne condition rakhi hai ki first i have to pass in this clss and then learn office work.
Vikram : ohhh nice...
Ram : sun na tu meri help karega i know she love me but she didnt show I want her to tell me herself that she love me.
Vikram : arrey ha bol na tere liye kuch bhi karuga.
Ram : nahi abhi kuch nahi karna hai sochte hai kuch yar kaise bolegi vo mujhse.
Vikram : smile seeing him,leave it class me chal is baar tujhe pass bhi hona hai amd left to class.
After classes RaYa and NeVik meet.
Neha : (teasingly) yar tu yoh bda chupa rustam nikla matlab shadi ki jaldi hai aur hme to bataya bhi nahi vaise kon hai vo ladki jo tujhe itni jaldi hai.
Ram : once look at priya,kya batau yar neha pta hi nahi chala mujhe kab us se pyar ho gya i cant tell u she is so beautiful and her eyes oh god i just love her so much.
Neha : acha priya se bhi beautiful...
Ram : kya yar tum bhi na priya ko compare kar rhi ho i am telling u she is much more than her.
Priya : feel jaleous...ha toh meine bola bhi nahi ki mujhse beautiful nahi hai.
Neha : wait a min kahi aisa to nahi tum priya se hiii...
Ram : oohh hold on madam tumhe lagta hai mujhe is se pyar ho sakta hai please yar priya tum hi batao na ise ki aisa kuch ni hai.
Ram (audible to vikram) : oie isko handle kar.
Ram : arrey priya batao na inko we are only frnds.
Priya : feeling jaleous ha neha aisa kuch nahi hai yum kuch bhi mat socho.
Vikram : vaise ram tum hum sbko bhi to to milao ur would be wife se haina priya.
Priya : mujhe koi shok nahi hai tum hi milo bye and leave from there.
Ram : ise kya hua.
Neha : me dekhti hu and left from there calling her.
Ram : happily jali jali priya is jaleous yr and hug vikram.
Vikram : vaise kb batane wala hai priya vo ladki vahi hai.
Ram : bta duga yr thode time baad chal me bhi chalta hu bye.
Vikram : ha bye and both leave.
TIme passes and Ram Get Pass and in Kapoor Mansion a new servant is appointed Robin.
Ram : Ab time aa gya hai priya tumhe batane ka ki mein tumse pyar karta hu.

Precap : Ram confess his fellings to priya.Plan of Ashwin.

Sorry for errors.
Plz hit like and do comments.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice.so RaYa love each other. next part jaldi. we want to c RaYa confession. ye ashwin kyu aya ??? robin kaun hai?
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yahooo...me first
Edited by iluvusakshi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Wah... So fab continue soon yar can't wait for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Superb update.
Raya's confession soon.
Thanks for pm.
Eagerly waiting for your post.

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