RaYa SS :Kaho na Pyar Hai part 13updated on page 18 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it whenevr u update na plss mention on title plss
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Hello guys here is next part hope u like this one...
PART 8
IN COLLEGE
Ram : yar i am so much happy ki me pass ho gya i cant tell u guys.
Priya think hey bhagwan is baar isko pass krna jaruri tha kya.
Ram : kya priya tum bhagwan ko kyu blame kar rhi ho.
Priya : surpsingly,mein nahi toh me kyu blame kru.
Ram : (teasingly) shayad isliye ki tumhe acha nahi lag rha ab finally meri shadi hogi.
Neha : vo to thik hai par hum logo ko milwa to de teri would be wife se.
Ram : of course yar why not chalo aj hi mila deta hu sham ko.
Neha : sach me.
Ram : ha,priya tum bhi aaogi na.
Neha : ha ha ye bhi ayegi hai na priya.
Priya : yes why not.
Ram : ok bye guys mujhe bhaut sari tayari karni hogi akahir vo special jo hai.
Neha : hmm bye,
Ram : (teasingly) bye priya,
Priya : ya bye.
Ram leave ,
Neha : priya aaj na tum ache se tayyar ho kar ana.
Priya : me kyu.
Neha : taki is pagal ko samaj me aye ki sirf tum uske liye ho.
Priya : kya fayda yar he love someone else.
Neha ; But u love him na tell him baba.
Priya : nahi..
Neha : acha leave it,tum na aj sari penhana aise tyaar hona ki ram us pagal si ladki ko bhul hi jaye.
Priya : u think it will work.
Neha : hum yar,,,,,,,,,,,,
Priya : ok toh dekte hai MR.RAM KAPOOR ki apki would be wife kitni sundar hai.
Neha : ya this is spirit good come. and both leave.
ON OTHER HAND
Ram call vikram
Ram : ha vikram jaisa mene tujhe bola tha vaisa ho gya na.
Vikram : ha yar tu tension mat le sab kuch ho gya hai.
Ram : ok thanx yar .
Vikram : tu mujhe thanx bol rha hai apne pass hi rakh.
Ram : acha yar thik hai chal bye meet u there.
Vikram : hmm bye.
IN KAPOOR MANSION
Ram come shouting happily Maa,Maa kha ho aap,
BK inform she is not at home.
Ram : ok and call Krishna ji.
Krishna ji : ha beta kya hua.
Ram : Maa aap kha ho jha bhi ho na bs jaldi se ghar aa jao.
Krishna ji : arrey aise kaise aa jau kya kaam hai ye batao.
Ram : Maa please aa jao na plz.
Krishna ji : acha thik hai i will be there in 30 mins ok.
Ram : ok maa jaldi aao love u.
Krishna ji : ha baba aa rhi hu and hang up call.
Ram go to his room and check his every clothes and spread on bed he dont know what to wear.He call Rishabh to his room.
Rishabh : kya hua bhai?? Aur ye sab kya hai.
Ram : ye sab ...pehle ye bta me kya pehnu.
Rishabh : kis liye???? Kha ja rhe ho aap.
Ram : vo kya hai na today i am going to Propse Priya.
Rishabh : (happily) to ye baat hai wait 1 min and slect dress for him.
Ram : u sure i should wear this.
Rishabh : ha bhai vaise plan kya hai matlab kaise propse kroge.
Ram : beta ab tera kaam nahi hai tu ja.
Rishabh : arrey bhai ye koi baat ni hui.
Ram push him out of room.
Rishabh : mere bhai ko apne deewana kar diya hai Priya Bhabhi,Bhabi viase sound good and leave.
Ram wear Black Shirt with fitted Grey trouser and Blazer.(i like him very much in black colour.)
After sometime Krishna ji come.
Ram : maa itni der lga di apne.
Krishna ji : arrey arrey kya ho gya hai aaj kis baat ki jaldi hai.
Ram : acha pehle mujhe ring do.
Krishna ji : kaisi ring????
Ram : Maa hamari khandani ring jo is ghar ki bahu ki hoti hai.
Krishna ji : Acha ab samji kya baat hai.
Ram : blushingly hmm ab do na .
Krishna ji bring ring and give it to ram,
Ram : happily thank you maa love you and hug her ,acha i am going bye.
Krishna ji : haa aram se jana.
Ram : ha maa bye.
Krishna ji : bye beta.
Rishabh : bhai bhabhi ko mera bhi hi bolna.
Ram smile only to him and leave.
Ram to himself So miss Priya Sharma ready ho jao Mrs.Priya Ram kapoor banane ke liye i am coming.
Sorry for errors.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Now waiting for ram to propose priya plss update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 7
Ram was on cloud nine after knowing about Priya true feeling towards him from his mom. The mother in Krishnaji so happy to find her son will get his love.

Part 8
Neha Vik know about Ram love but the person who has to know about this is unawre. Just waiting for him to propose Priya.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waiting for RAM to propose priya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update.
Waiting for ram to propose priya.
Thanks for pm and continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Beautiful story
Waiting for next
Plz continue soon
Thanks for Pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello fnds here is next part hope u will like.Actually i dont know how to propse someone so i am trying hope you like it.
PART 9

It is little dark in evening.Ram and Vikram reach at Kapoor farm house.
Ram : Yar vikram sb kuch thik se ho gya na.
Vikram : ha yr tu tension mt le.
Ram : bhaut nervous ho yr cant explain u.
Vikkram : arrey nervous kyu ho rha h be a Man yar.
Ram : ha chal ek bar finally sb check kr lete hai.
They check verything and all is very good.
Ram : yar sun tu na Neha ko yhi par rok lena garden me mt ane dena jb me priya ko lekar jau.
Vikram : kyu?????
Ram : yr tu janta hai na vo ...vo kitne questions karti hai me toh use hi answer deta reh jauga.
Vikram : ha thik h yar rok luga.
After Sometime ram get call that Neha and Priya come.
Ram : yes let them come.Vikram chal tu neha ko rok me Priya ko lekar jata hu.
Ram and Vikram meet Priya and Neha.
Ram : so finally tum aa hi gyi.
Neha : ha hum bhi to dekhe aisi kon h iske liye tum pagal ho.
Ram : ha kyu nahi vo bhi aa hi gyi.
Vikram : neha ek min suno toh mere sath aao na.
Neha : arrey ruko toh pehle Ram ki lady love se toh mil lu.
Vikram : ha dekh lena aao toh and drag her with him.
Ram look at priya and lost in her she is looking so beautiful.
Priya : Ram...Ram
Ram : coming to his sense Ha kya hua.
Priya : kya hua hme yha jis liya bulaya hai vo to dikaho kha h tumhari would wife.
Ram : ha aao this way.
Priya follow Ram.Before entering in the Garden Ram close Priya's eyes.
Priya : ram kya kr rhe why you close my eyes.
Ram : arrey wait kro sb pta chal jyega and take her to garden and open her eyes.
Priya open her eyes and memirise to see the arrengements.
There are lights decorated with flowers eveywhere with a dinner table in middle.
Priya : Ram Tum jis se milana chathe ho vo kha hai.
Ram : vo...arrey itni bhi jaldi kya hai mila duga vaise tum usko bhaut ache se janti ho.
Priya : mein...me to bhaut logo ko janti hu ab batao bhi kaun hai.
Ram : ok no more wait.and turn priya to other side and ask Are u ready.
Priya : hmmm...
Cover get up from A heart shape big size mirror Ram and Priya image formed in mirror.
Priya : ye kya hai ye toh mirror hai.
Ram : oh god vaise to itni intellegent banti hai itni si baat ni samji.
Priya : kya ni samji.
Ram : kuch nahi rehne do mein hi batata hu.Tum janana chathi ho vo kaun hai jis se mein pyar karne lga hu infact mujhe bhi ni pta me kab se us se pyar krna lga hu par ha i really really love that girl she become my life.Sbke pass dil hota hai par vo uske liye dhadkta hai jisse vo bhaut pyar krta hai aaj meri jindagi me bhi koi hai jo meri dil ki dhadkan ban chuki hai.Aur pta h vo ladki kaun hai.
Ram bend down on his kneel.
Priya only see him what he is doing.
Ram : that is YOU priya.Yes I LOVE YOU and i really really do.
Rose petals fell down on Raya from helicopter with song
Hua hai aaj pehli baar jo aise muskaraya hu
tumhe dekha to jana ye ke kyu duniya me aya hai
ye jale kar ke ja meri tumhe jeene me aya hu
Mein tumse ishq karne ki izzazat Rab se laya hu
Jami se asmaa tak hum dhund aye jha sara
Bna paya nahi ab tak khuda tumse koi pyara
Ram get up and make her see in sky...
Mein likh du asmaa par ye ke padh le ga jha sara.
I LOVE YOU Will U MARRY ME Formed in sky from sky shots.
Priya become seeing love of ram for her see look in Ram eyes and a sweet eye lock.
Ram bring out ring from his pocket an dask from Priya
Ram : May i...
Priya : nodded in yes.
Ram slide the ring in her finger.
Ram : may i kiss u hand.
Priya : just smile and say yes.
Song played
Itni mohhabat kru na mein doob na jau kahi
Ram put a warm kiss on her hand,Priya just close her eyes feeling kiss on her hand.
Vapas kinare par ana mein bhul na jau kahi
Ram get up and face priya
Dekha jab se chahra tera
Meii to hafto se soya nahi
Ram : can we dance and forward his hand.
Priya put her hand oh his and start dancing looking in each other eyes.
Bol do na jara dil me jo hai chipa
mein kisi se kahuga nahi.
Bol do na jra dil me jo hai chipa
mein kisi se kahuga nahi...
Ram drag her close both are looking deeply in each other eyes.
Ram : priya bolo na, will u marry me??
Priya : thinkly...
Ram : will you.
Priya : uummm,yes.
Ram : happily yeah and pick her up in his arms .
Priya : Ram kya kr rhe ho put me down.
Ram put her down .
Ram call vikram and neha in garden.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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reserved! well i dont remember reading this...or i have read it but don't remember at all! :-P short time memry! will read it whole and comment :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lvly...ram prpsd priya...c said yes...nw waitng fr der mrg n rmnce...wna c nehaz reaction also...

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