RaYa SS :Kaho na Pyar Hai part 13updated on page 18 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superrbb update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow... Thanks for updating even if it is after a long gap...
As usual the update was nice...
Ram has forgiven his father as per his friends advice..
Please continue soon.. Of course after your board exams..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice update..
after long gap u updated
good progress..Priya har kadam per Ram ko support kr rhi h..
Ram accepted his step brother rishabh n his father..
waiting for next update...thnx for the pm
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nice update
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Nice update
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hey frnds i will give update shortly
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Hello frnds,hope all are fit and fine,soo now my exams are finished now i will complete my both stories,Sorry for making you wait.Hope you like this one also,,,,,,,,
PART 5

Everybody retire to their rooms only Amar ji and Ram is sitting in hall.
Ram is happy seeing his all family together but somewhere in heart something is bothering him.He don't know what?
Amar ji is observing ram,
Amar ji : Ram i can understand what you are feeling.
Ram only looked at him.
Amar ji : i will wait till you accept me truly your father.
Ram : thanx for understanding me now kash apne bachpan me samja hota.
Amar ji : it hurt him but manage to give e fake smile.
Ram : good night. and left from there to his room.
Amar ji thinking to himself " i know ram your heart want to call me dad but your brain is stopping you." and go to his room.
Next Morning
In Sharma House
breakfast is almost done when priya phone ring.She left table to attend the call.
Shudhir ji : arrey beta first finish your breakfast.
Priya : i have completed papa and ran from there.
Shipra ji : arrey slowly beta.
Priya : ookkk maa.
and attend the call it is neha
Priya : hii Neha good morning
neha : good morning priya,tumne ram se bola tha na to bring rishabh with him.
Priya : haa yar but i know Ram very well he will not bring him.
Neha : teasingly,ooohh kya baat hai kuch achi hi tarah janti ho.
Priya : strenly shut up neha but in heart see is happy,do one thing ask vikram to call Krishna Aunty and ask for rishabh number and call him to come in college.
Neha : ok mam,so you ready to give surprise to your RAM.
Priya : Neha strenly
Neha ; ok ok bye see you in college.
Priya : bye.
At the same time in Kapoor Mention
Breakfast is going on silently,
Ram is thinking he should say o rishabh or not and looking at rishabh only,but not eating anything.
Rishabh : bhai
amar ji,krishna ji and rishabh is watching him but he is lost in his thought.
Rishabh again call him little loud this time ram come to his sense
Ram : haa
Krishna ji : kya hua beta kha kho gye kya soch rhe ho?
Ram : kuch nahi maa vo bs rishabh... but stop suddenly.
Rishabh : kya bhai ?
Ram : nahi kuch bhi to nahi and smile.
Amar ji : you sure
Ram : Haa pap...but stop and start eating.
amar ji smile at this and all finish their breakfast and left to their respective work.
Vikram call Krishana ji and do what priya tell.
IN COLLEGE
All are sitting in college garden vikram ask about Rishabh
Ram : ha yar i ask him but he has some work.
Neha : ha isme ram ki kya galti .
Priya : right neha, don't worry ram.
Ram himself thank god bach gya.
Vikram : chalo ram hum hi tumhe kisi se milwate hai.
Ram : who?
Neha :oh see yourself.
Ram stand up from his seat seeing rishabh coming to their side.
Ram : ye yha kaise
Priya : we call him.
Rishabh come to them,
Rishabh : bhai you didn't tell me your frnds want to meet me i am always free for you.
Ram : with expression being caught,Achha mujhe lga i told in morning.
Rishabh : haww bhai when?
Neha : we knew it thats why we call him.It was priya plan.
Ram : smile to them only.
They all have wondwefull time together and they come to know Rishabh is also studying in same college infact Ram also he was unaware of this.All left to their respectitive clases.
Ashwing was keeping watching on them,he want to take revenge from Ram.and is waiting for right time.
Days are passing happily Ram accept rishabh and Amar ji compeletly now they are living happily and ram and priya is also coming closer.Both realise something beyond freindship but dont realise love till now.
One day in evening at Kapoor Mansion
Krishna ji feel is not feeling well and try to come to rishabh room. but she become unconscious and fell on ground.
Bansi kaka inform rishabh and ram fortunely both are present at home.they immedietly take her to hospital.
On the way they saw there way is blocked by 15-20 boys,
Rishabh didn't recognise but ram immedietly recognise him and come out from the car and tell rishabh not to step out from car whatever happen.
Ram come near boys
Ram : Ashwin please abhi mujhe jane de mujhe maa ko hospital le kar jana hai.
Ashwin : oh see this angry man is requesting and grab Ram's shirt collar.but ram didn't react because of his mother.
Ram : Please Ashwin let me go now.ek baar mujhe hospital jane de.I...I promise i will come back to you.
Ashwin : slap on ram cheecks,he become very angry but control himself for his mother.
Rishabh : shouts from car,hey how dare you and come out from car and grab ashwin shirt collar.
Ram immediately shouts at rishabh,
Ram : rishabh : leave him.
Rishabh : no bhai iski himmat kaise hui ap pr hath uthane ki.
Ashwin : oh mein darr gya in laughing way.
Ram : make ashwin free from rishabh grip,
Ram : tu yha kyu aya ja yha se.
Rishabh : Par bhai...
Ram : loudly Rishabh just go.Rishabh move to go but ashwin try to catch him but ram save him and move.
Ram : ashwin mein rishabh ki taraf se tumse mafi mangta hoo.
Rishabh : Bhai come fast please we are wasting time.
Ram : ashwin teri dushmani mujhse hai tujhe jo krna hai mere sath kar but please let my mom go to hospital.
Ashwin : chal thik hai,but you have to stay here.
Ram : yes,thanx
Ashwin smile evily,Ram run near car and tell Rishabh to take maa hospital soon he will come.
Rishabh : par bhai aap yaha...
Ram : shout at him just go rishabh now only maa is important.
Rishabh takes the car.
ashwin come near ram
Ashwin : ram i think you know why i stop here.
Ram : Ashwin dekh try to understand me...
Ashwin : cut in middle mujhe priya se dur kar ke tu khud uske karib jaa rha hai and push him.
Ram : agar us din priya ki jagah aur koi hota to me tab bhi vahi karta.
Ashwin : Ram dekh tu mere aur priya ke beech mat aa.I want to make her mine and i will.
Ram : become angry and punch on his face,
Another boys beat ram very badly blood is oazing from Ram body but still he is beating Ashwin.
Ram : agar agli baar priya ka naam bhi liya toh i will surely kill you.
someone from backside hit on ram head he fell on ground.
ashwin come near him and sit on ground.
Ashwin : Ram you wait and watch what i do with priya.
Ram want to hit him but because of pain and blood loss he become unconcious.
ON THE OTHER HAND
Rishabh reach and call Amarji to told him about krishna ji and what happen with them on the way.
Amar ji : which place???
Rishabh tell him and both hang up.
Amar ji calls Ram but he didn't attend.
Amar ji call Police and tell them everything and soon left from office.
But on reaching spot they find Ram lying unconcious and he is bleeding badly.They admit him into hospital.
IN HOSPITAL
Doctor come out from OT.
Amar ji : Doctor how s my son now?????
Doctor : sir blood loss kafi ho chuka hai but still we are trying our best.
Amar ji : listen very carefully agar mere bete ko kuch hua to tumhare is hospital ko aag lga duga.i want my son fine(my dada ji said this to doctor when my daddy met with an accident).
Amar ji : inspector i want those boyes who beat my son how dare they.Arrest them as soon as u can.
Here Krishna ji gain conceious.Amar ji asked Rishabh not to tell anything about ram to krishna ji.
Amar ji : krishna how u feeling now ??
Krishna ji : feeling better.
Rishabh : Mom aap na bilkul rest nahi krti,ab se kuch kaam nahi sirf rest ok.
Krishna ji : acha baba thik hai,khush.
Rishabh : bhaut khush.
Krishna ji : areey beta Ram kha hai,ghar pr roh tum dono hi the na.
Rishabh : ha vo bhai...
Amar ji : ram ghar gya hai.
krishna ji : ghar kyu ???
amar ji : kuch ni bs tumhe aise dekh kr panic ho gya tha toh humne use ghar bhej diya.
Krishna ji : ok thik hai,par mein kab ghar ja rhi hu
Rishabh : jab ap compeletly recover ho jaugi.
Amar ji : tum ab rest kro,we are outside.and they leave the room.
NEXT MORNING
early in the morning doctor inform amar ji that Ram gain conceious and calling him.
Amar ji : sach usne mujhe bulaya.
Doctor : yes Mr.kapoor,but please dont give him stress.
Amar ji : yes and come into ram room.
IN HOSPITAL ROOM
Ram is lying on bed with bandage on his head, hand.
Amar ji go near bed and keep his hand on ram hand.He open his eye and look at his father.
Ram : slowly,Maa kaisi hai.
Amar ji : thik h,tum kaise ho,dard ho rha h,i will not leave that boy.
Ram : papa aap mere liye kuch kroge.
Amar ji : ha bol na beta tu jo bolega me vo karuga.
Ram : i want to get marry.
Amar ji : what???
Ram : please papa sirf aise hi me priya ko safe rakh sakta hu.
Amar ji : to ye sb us ladki ki wajah se hua h..
Ram : nahi papa,use to kuch pta bhi nahi.Aap please uske gharwalo se baat kariye na.
Amar ji : thik h tumhare liye ye bhi karuga.Ab tum rest kro.
Ram : nodded.
Amar ji leave the room.
Sorry for errors it is not edited.Hope u like
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice to hear from you.
Very nice update and thanks for pm.
Please continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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great update
waiting for raya love story start
thanks for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello frnds, how are u all ??? Here is next update hope you like this.

Part 6
Amar ji come out from room and think that Ram want from him.aisa kya hai us ladki me jo Ram ko aur kuch dikh hi nhi rha h.Agar use shadi hi krni hai to i will find achi se achi ladki for him Pr usko to us se hi shadi krni hai.krishna se baat krta hu Priya ke ghar jane se pehle.
Amar ji go to Krishna ji room,She is feeling better now.
Amar ji sit on chair beside bed.
Krishna ji : ye Ram kha pr hai vo aya nahi mujhse milne.
Amar ji : (lost somewhere)oh ram,usko to pta nahi ho kya gya hai.
Krishna ji : matlb.??????????????
Amar ji : matlb ye apka beta apke liye Bahu lane ki zid kr rha hai.
Krishna ji : what ?????
Amar ji : ha...
Krishna ji : (very happily) arrey ye to bhaut achi baat hai,kon hai ladki,acha ye bataiye naam kya hai uska jisne mere bete ke dil me jagha banayi hai.
Amar ji : Priya naam hai ram ke college me hi h.
Rishabh : sirf college me hi nahi ek hi class me hai,bhaut ache dost hai aur infact bhai ki choice bhi bhaut achi hai.She is really nice girl and perfect for Bhai.
Krishna ji : tu mila hai PRIYA se.
Rishabh : ha maa,me abhi ata hu bhai se to mil lu.
Krishna ji : Ram yhi hai bula na use bhi andar.
Amar ji and rishabh look at each other.
Amar ji : ha krishna Ram hospital me hi hai...
Krishna ji : to bulaye na use
Amar ji : vo actaually...
Krishna ji : what tell na...
Amar ji : Ram ka accident ho gya tha to vo admit hai.
Krishna ji :(tears in her eyes) ye aap kya bol rhe hai ram ka accident...She try to get up abhi abhi to aap bol rhe the uski shadi ke liye aur accident usko jayda chot to nahi ayi,bolye na Amar vo thik to hai.
Amar ji : ha krishna Ram thik hai,bs rest ki jarurat hai aur use hosh aa gya abhi usne mujhse shadi ke liye bola.
Krishan ji : muj...mujhe milna hai mere bete se.Ek baar dekhna hai usko.
Amar ji : abhi Ram so rha h krishna usko rest kr lo aur tum bhi kr lo.PLZ after sometime u can meet him.
Rishabh tum yhi ruko maa ke pas me ata hu.
Rishabh : ji papa.
Amar ji left the room, and call inpector.
Amar ji : hello inspector,i am Amar Kapoor.
Inspector : yes sir.
Amar ji : aap ne us Ashwin ko pakda ya nahi abhi tak.
Inspector : sorry sir,we are trying our best,vo kahi pr underground ho gya hai.
Amar ji :(angrily) whatever,i need him dont tell me excuses,mere bete ke sath ye sb kiya us b*****d ne i will not leave him,catch him at any cost,got it any cost,i want him.
Inspector : dont worry sir we will catch him annd both hang up the call.
Amar ji : mujhe priya se baat krni hogi,...nahi abhi nahi pehle ram ko thik ho jaye,ek baar phir ram se baat kruga akhir baat shadi ki hai.

Here Rishabh inform Vikram,Neha and Priya about Ram and Krishna ji condition and they come to meet them in hospital.
First they meet krishna ji,IN Krishna ji room,
Rishabh introduce everyone to Amar ji and Krishna ji.
Krishna ji : acha to ye hai priya.
Neha : ji aunty yahi ahi priya,kyu kuch kiya kya isne.
Krishna ji : ha kiya to hai vo Ram bol rha tha...
Amar ji : cutting in middle...vo ram aur rishabh tumhare bare me baat krte rehte hai na infact tum sbke bare me...hai na Rishabh and look at him.
Rishabh : (confusily) ha ha papa sahi bol rhe hai.
Amar ji : (only audible to krishna ji ) arrey wait krlo thoda sa abhi mene kisi ko nahi batya hai.
Krishna ji : okkk... vaise ladki achi hai.
Amar ji : baad me baat kre.
Vikram : arrey kya hua aap log kya baat krne lge,vaise aunty ji aap na apna dyan rakha kro aur mujhe to lagta hai apko na ram ki shadi kra deni chaiye,ye jo bhi fight krta hai,late ghar ata h,responsibilities badegi to khud thik ho jyega.
Priya look at vikram where Neha and Krishna ji notice priya that she dosent like ram marriage with some one else.
krishna ji : ha mein bhi yahi soch rhi thi infact mene kuch ladkiya dekhi haiuske liye,looking straight priya.
neha : ha aunty ji aur hme bhi invite krna Ram ki shadi me.
Krishna ji : kyo nahi tumhe sbko hi to help krni hai,kroge na.
Vikram and neha : ha aunty kyu nhi.
Priya is lost somewhere.
Krishna ji : Priya tum nahi krogi apne DOST ki shadi me help.
Priya : coming to her senses,ha aunty ji kyu nahi and smile fakely.Mein abhi ati hu and come outside and go to ram room.
She enter in Ram room and see him lying on bed with closed eyes and bandage on his body.She feel pain seeing him like this.
Priya sit on chair beside bad and keep his hand on his hand.
Priya : ye kya kiya tumne ram,Ashwin se ladne ki kya jarut thi tumhe.Hamesha ulte sidhe kaam karte rehte ho,dekho kitni chot ayi hai tumhe(with tears).
Priya stare ram for sometime and kiss on his forehead lightly.I will not leave Ashwin how dare he harm you he harm MY ram.She comeout from room,here Ram open his eyes .He was not sleeping he was listeining everything.Ram feel good for priya concern.
HERE inspector inform Amar ji that they catch Ashwin.
Amar ji : good i am coming there now.
Amar ji reach police station and go to Ashwin cell slap him hard and grab his shirts collar.
Amar ji : to tum ho jisne mere bete ke sath ye sab kiya.par agar rum ye soch rhe ho na kitum jeet gye so you are wrong kyuki tumne uski majburi ka fayda uthaya.Agar himmat hoti na tum me to akele samna krte mere bete ka itne logo ke sath nahi.Mera beta sher hai sher samje tum and again slap him.
Ashwin : Mujhe ram se kuch lena dena nahi hai bas vo mere raste me naa aye me use kuch nhi karuga.
Amar ji : smile you think tum aaj ke baad is jail ke bahar bhi ja paoge.Kabhi nahi itne charge laga duga tum par jindagi barbad ho jyegi tumhari and i mean it.Aur ha jis raste ki tum baat kar rhe ho acha hoga tumhare liye agar tum usse chod do.Kyuki bhaut jaldi me ram aur priya ki shadi krane wala hu.Mere bete ne pehli bar kuch manga hai mujhse.tumhe shadi ka invitation jarur bhejuga.Aur ha tumhe jo karna hai na kar lo open challenge hai tumhe.Is baar ek father apne bete ko aur uski khushiyo ko protect krega and left from there.
Ashwin : aisa me kuch hone hi nhi duga Mr.Amarnath kapoor tum abhi mujhe jante hi nahi ho.
Here Ram and Krishna ji come home.
Ram : papa aap ne priya ke gharwalo se baat ki.
Amar ji : nahi...
Ram : kyu nhi ki...
Amar ji : kyuki pehle meri ek shart hai.
Ram : kya hai apki shart.
Amar ji : is baar tumhe pass hona padega,dekho beta shadi ek bhaut badi responsibility hoti hai aur tum kuch karte bhi nahi ho college ke baad tum company join krna work handle krna akhir company tumhe aur rishabh ko hi to handle karni hai Rishabh abhi bhaut chota hai tum thodi se responsible bano.
Ram : papa me kar luga na pehle shadi to kra dijeye.
Amar ji : thik hai,but tumhe is baar pass to hona hi hoga i hope itna to tum priiya ke liye kar hi sakte ho.
Ram : ab ye to krna hi hoga.
Amar ji : good acha me office ja rha hu take rest and left from there.
KAPOOR INDUSTRIES,Amar ji cabin
Amar ji enter in his cabin and see someone is waiting for him.
Amar ji : Who r u and how u enter in my cabin.
Man turn toward Amar ji and he become shocked.
Amar ji : tum???????????????????????/
Ashwin : kya hua uncle ji shocked ho gye abhi aur bhi hone wale hai.
Amar ji : tum bahar kaise aye.
Ashwin : bail par.
Amar ji : impossible tum par to mene itne charge lagwaye the.
Ashwin : jab aap apne bete ke liye itna sab kuch kar sakte ho to mere papa nahi kar sakte.You know what i am son of Mahesh Singh (great politician,...heeheheh dushman barabar ka hona chaiye na).

Sorry for errors,i also dont know what i am writing but i promise next update will be better than this.
Precap : Ram tease priya.
Kavya kapoor


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