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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: DiehardRaYafan


Leena, my dear in this OS RaYa did consummate their marriage before Priya left ...their physical chemistry was great...it's the emotional attachment that Priya was worried about and that's why she left. Their consummation part was written in a subtle way so please check the dori scene again😉...yaar I wanted to have Vikram there too but in this story Ram and Vikram don't know each other...next story mein Vikram koh bhi rakhenge😆if you have any more questions, please don't hesitate...love to get your feedback.




okk after reading it again I got what u said... but that moment come & went I siriously didn't realized when it happend... so I m demanding a detailed update on that part specially as it was little diffrent also so plz write down abt thier consumation plz... I m sure like me other would also loved to read abt it... like what was thier thought at the timee who took first step to other how they felt after that... how they confessed in untold words that they needed each other everyday now.ect ect more u can add by ur self... but I want an update on speically that dorri scene & also want to know it was by chance or Dadi's plan plz write down one part plz... sorry for being demanding but can't be enough of RaYa...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: leena04




okk after reading it again I got what u said... but that moment come & went I siriously didn't realized when it happend... so I m demanding a detailed update on that part specially as it was little diffrent also so plz write down abt thier consumation plz... I m sure like me other would also loved to read abt it... like what was thier thought at the timee who took first step to other how they felt after that... how they confessed in untold words that they needed each other everyday now.ect ect more u can add by ur self... but I want an update on speically that dorri scene & also want to know it was by chance or Dadi's plan plz write down one part plz... sorry for being demanding but can't be enough of RaYa...


Arre yaar, you are putting me in a tough spot to write out the consummation part. I love RaYalicious sensuous romance too par likhna thoda mushkil hai...chalo tumhare liye koshish karungi. Give me some time as this month is extremely busy for me ...I will try working on it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
super story and very interesting too...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
superb. awesome. beautiful.
thanks for pm.
do write more n more raya stories.
raya rocks. love them so much.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful
Thanks for the PM
plz do write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anandraji

super story and very interesting too...


Thanks for liking and commenting!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for the encouragement!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

superb. awesome. beautiful.
thanks for pm.
do write more n more raya stories.
raya rocks. love them so much.


Raya definetly Rock and our love for them is eternal. Thanks for the beautiful PM. Anytime I feel inspired I will share my love for RaYa with you all. Your feedback means a lot ...thank you!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ramsakshi

Beautiful
Thanks for the PM
plz do write more

Thankyou and I want to take the time to read and comment on all the beautiful OS's you write on them ...that's my agenda for next month as this month is a bit busy personally😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: DiehardRaYafan

Thankyou and I want to take the time to read and comment on all the beautiful OS's you write on them ...that's my agenda for next month as this month is a bit busy personally😃

Well I'll wait for your comments
nd you are amazing writer i like your writing
plz do write more on RAYA's stories😃

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