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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: dhristikpd
Lovely os n sorry for late comment pls keep writing n thanks for pm

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment!

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leena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

first of all sorry for late comment... I must say u ended it on crucial point my mind is all time busy to think what must be happened in 20 min n looking like it was must be something really interesting can't wait to read further so waiting for it to know do update soon...
so Priya came there for Neha's wedding n Ram seen her first time I guess her ravishing beauty didn't let him he away from her that's the best part...
but I must say this Its much different then ur other OS's so looking forward to it u can write very well in different ways I like that do waiting for next do update soon...

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: leena04

first of all sorry for late comment... I must say u ended it on crucial point my mind is all time busy to think what must be happened in 20 min n looking like it was must be something really interesting can't wait to read further so waiting for it to know do update soon...
so Priya came there for Neha's wedding n Ram seen her first time I guess her ravishing beauty didn't let him he away from her that's the best part...
but I must say this Its much different then ur other OS's so looking forward to it u can write very well in different ways I like that do waiting for next do update soon...

Leena, thank you for taking the time to comment in such detail...it made my efforts worthwhile. There are lot of subtle hints of their story throughout. What happened in those twenty minutes will certainly unravel the so called mystery... I am trying to pen down the next part time permitting...hopefully in the next couple of days. Really appreciate all the feedback and enthusiasm from your side😃

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sandhya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Nice OS

loved the first part

waiting for the next..Please PM me next time

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: sandhyasn
Nice OS
loved the first part
waiting for the next..Please PM me next time

Thanks for taking the time to read and appreciate. Unfortunately I haven't had the time to actually sit down and finish the second part beyond the first paragraph. Next few days are busy as well but I will try to post the last part by next week ( keeping fingers crossed). I will surely PM you next time 😃