FF: Ek Luv Story @ Abhishek Panchal. PART 4 on Pg 11 *29 May 2015* - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: ARUJI

Nice start of story
Plz regular update krna
Thanks 4 pm.
Continue soon


Thanx Arushi
I ll try to be regular

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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Nice start!!
Plz continue soon!!!
Thanks 4 pm!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
really nice start but chotu update...:-P next soon please
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Very nice intro of the characters
will love to read the story once again
continue soon and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cute_Saakshii12

Nice start!!
Plz continue soon!!!
Thanks 4 pm!!

Thank u very much
I ll continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: abhishekpanchal

really nice start but chotu update...:-P next soon please

Ahaa look who s talking
Chota update
I ll try to improve sir
Nd will soon continue
Thank u for ur precious comments sir
I ll not disappoint u
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

Very nice intro of the characters

will love to read the story once again
continue soon and thanx for the pm

Thank u very much Anchal di
I ll continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
scene 2..in k.i
a.k(amarnath kapoor)-welcomin ram n vik..are aao...aao par itna late kyu hue..
.vik lukd at ram...
vik-wo kya hai na uncle traffic bohot tha aur kisi ko taiyar hone me bohot waqt lagta hai(lukin @ ram)

ram-a tu jyada bol raha hai ha
vik-are mene kya bola??

Ram-kya matlb tu kya bol raha he kisi ko jyada waqt lagta hai taiyar hone me

vik-ha to mene kisiko kaha tujhe nai

ram-par tera matlb to mujhse hi tha na

vik-(smilingly)are wah tu samaj gaya ram bada hoshiyar hai tu..
.a.k cuttin of der argument
-are bas karo tum log 1st din hi jhagad rahe ho ab chalo mere cabbin me jaldi..come fst..
Ram n vik-huh..(2 ech othr) n headed 2 a.k cabbin...
Scene 3 in a.k cabbin

a.k..said..tum dono..welcome 2 k.i 1st of all..tumhe yaha ke kuch rules he jo tumhe lily
(sory bt koi aachi secretary nai mili a.k k liye...lol) samaja degi u both undrstand...1nce again u undrstand

ram n vik-ys sir...a.k-gud so go nw n hav fun... On ur first day...

Ram vik still fi8in bt @ d end of d day d both gav up n came bck home..ram ws thinkin ful day about tht girl which ws on d bs stop he jst cnt concentrate on anythin in d car...

Vik-chal ram ghar chal neha ne bulaya hai khana khane k liye n celebration 4 our new job..
.ram didnt bothr he ws jst thinkin about d girl..
vik jerkd him n said..abe tu sun raha hai na neha ne bulaya hai..(oh by d way..
neha kapoor-vik's fianc..and goin 2 marrie in nxt mnth.. luv marriage ram n vik k hi college me thi junior thn vik..bt also goin 2 b n prt of k.i age 25,.)ram dis time heard n said in irritatin sound ha chal..

In neha's house..whole family of neha ws out for n function so neha invitd thm both

door bell rangd neha opnd d dor n ram n vik ws there
so thy had a gud time togathr bt ram ws stil thinkin abut tht girl..

Ab bohot ram n vik hua lets concentrate on pri:-P

priya's apartmnt
karthik-(karthik sharma priya's yongr brothr age 22)di jaldi aao khana khane
pri-(ws checkin test paper's-wrkin in sidhivinayak classes(sorry dnt knw d nam)n continuin hr studies 4 duble M.A)

pri put d paper aside n gone 2 tak dinnr a nice family dinner done b/w d family talkd abut wht happnd in d day n al a nrmal talk...

[Precap-pri 2 see her prince charmin]

note-guys sory nai tag kar pa raha hu bt pls share dis story if u like..n hit lik n comment pls ur comment are more valuable
Edited by priyajan12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Nice part but too short try to give long updates!!
Continue soon and thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Nice update continue soon thanks for the pm

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