RaYa OS: My Prince * PART-2 on PAGE-7 * 9/9/2014 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
lovely Os
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: bpatil3



I can guarantee you I won't😆but I cannot assure you of Neel, bcoz wo kuch bhi karsakti hai😉😆



Thats y I rofled Neel our good gal sochke... mikes apart Neel and being a good gal.. Never from childhood too... attitude kut kut ke bhari hain issmein woh bhi akad wala... aur shaitani toh no limits.. so abt U I am sure but she deffo wont stay good.. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Neeelll want next part nowww... tell Sandhya to comment here re... waaahhh
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Update nowww... I wanna read...
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Nee.. y***a Neel update istava leda.. enni rojulu wait cheyale.. nee asalu... nenu writers block toh suffering and nuvvemo assaluu emi help cheyatle.. Update iste chadivi happy feel auta kada... eroju rabbit twaraga bajjundi.. plz plz plzz rakshasiii update cheyyave...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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last mei sandhya ke liye aap ki note mast hai...lol
about os it is always nice to read one from you ...so nice and the one hour teasing was too good bechari priya...ram tho ram hai aaraam se khana kha raha hai...

thanks for pm

hope sandhya gave the reply or will give soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First of all thanks for dedicating this beautiful OS to me...It means a lot to me.
I really loved it very much.At the same time Im very sorry to neel and giri and all readers for being late and making u all wait. I thought I will read at night peacefully and comment but never expect it will hurt others...I felt I don't deserve it...sorry once again.
coming to update
Awesome OS
morning romance is beautifully written...Im surprised to see how a writer can write so amazingly.
Ram is very much crazy for his wife.
it is correct Ram jaisa koi romantic hubby ho toh kaam one hour mein pura nahi kar sakte😉
highlight of this OS is one hour😆
teasing part is icing on cake...Priya is embarrassed ...and I can imagine the scene...wow superb.
Ram ne sahi kaha ki eise waqt mein kahi dur jana hi better hai but he took her to his office where kapoor and sharmas are already present...another surprise of Ram.
lets see what more surprises are waiting for priya
thanks for PM and really sorry for late
Please continue...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

First of all thanks for dedicating this beautiful OS to me...It means a lot to me.

I really loved it very much.At the same time Im very sorry to neel and giri and all readers for being late and making u all wait. I thought I will read at night peacefully and comment but never expect it will hurt others...I felt I don't deserve it...sorry once again.
coming to update
Awesome OS
morning romance is beautifully written...Im surprised to see how a writer can write so amazingly.
Ram is very much crazy for his wife.
it is correct Ram jaisa koi romantic hubby ho toh kaam one hour mein pura nahi kar sakte😉
highlight of this OS is one hour😆
teasing part is icing on cake...Priya is embarrassed ...and I can imagine the scene...wow superb.
Ram ne sahi kaha ki eise waqt mein kahi dur jana hi better hai but he took her to his office where kapoor and sharmas are already present...another surprise of Ram.
lets see what more surprises are waiting for priya
thanks for PM and really sorry for late
Please continue...


I wil reply later



Hmm Thank you so much sandy
Love you too ... common if you give late reply you think you dont deserve
what is this ... I love you

Im sorry yaar if you felt like that ..

Imso glad you liked it ..
Hehe one hour mai kya kya karsaktha hai ... go thru the msgs malu said something
I dont have time but deffo i will ask you about that ONE HOUR matter later .. 😆
Hugs 🤗



From writer :Hi di , im gla dyou liked it ..😆 haha even i don't know wether one hour is enough or not but just i want that teasing part so i just wrote it about "One hour " pressing it
Hehe but dont know it will turn out a discussing matter whether that one hour is enough or not
or how could one hour is enough etc etc

Lol But glad to see you liked the story ,, and here is the part 2 ,, enjoy the reading


Edited by luvsakshi - 10 years ago
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RaYa OS: My Prince #PART-2#

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Ram: Please, it will be over soon. I need you here.
Priya shrugged off her shoulders and
went along with him. When she entered the hall she was surprised to see Kapoors and Sarmas over there. Shipra came to her and they together went towards Sudheer. Karthik, and her mom and dad wished her and she asked why everyone came there.
In the mean while she heard an announcement "please be seated".
Then she looked at the dias and found that some people were sitting along with Ram. She had no clue about the happenings but she felt everyone else knew what it was as all had a happy face.
Ram: Goodmorning and thank you all for coming here. I just wanna introduce the dignitaries to you. He introduced the three persons as eminent teachers in their respective fields and they will form the selection committee which will work un biased.
Now am announcing "PRK trust" which takes birth today on my beloved wife's birthday which will take up a prestigious project named "For You".. This project is born to help the meritorious poor students in India who arent able to persue higher education because of financial problems. The rules and guidelines will be formed by the selection committee and approved by my wife Priya and she will be the chairman of this trust, where as Vikram and Rishab will be the MDs.
You all may not know that my wife was a lecturer. She is well educated and intelligent and believes that education imparts knowledge to people and will make them better persons in life. I never cared for all these but when she came into my life I started learning so many things. I was incomplete till then but she made me complete. My sister asked me an hour ago whom I love most my wife or my kids. Of course everyone loves their kids, I'm not an exemption but I love my wife more than any one else on this earth. Because of her all this happiness happened in my life. She gave birth to a new Ram Kapoor, khadoos se insaan bana diya mujhe. (Laughter was heard here and there) I used to think with brain but she taught me think with heart. I understood that I may go wrong now and then but I wont be on losing side.
So for what ever I am now after my parents, its Priya who moulded me into a better human. So I felt to reciprocate that love and care, I thought of spreading her name to all over India. Of course I can start businesses on her name but that wont give her happiness. This will defo help my wife receive the blessings from the needy. I just hope this charitable trust will go beyond boundaries one day. Thank you again one and all.
The room thundered with applaud and when Ram saw for Priya, he saw her having tears in her eyes and looking at him adorably. He smiled and went to Nuts and talked something with her and came to Priya and offered his hand. She got up and holding his hand she walked in daze. He made her sit in the car and came to driving seat and started the car and drove towards highway. All the while Priya was looking out of the window when tears were churning in her eyes. When the car halted with creech she came into senses and saw that they were at their Lonavala resorts.
She understood his plan for rest of the day.
Ram came down and offered his hand and she came out of the car holding it. She could only ask "kids" for which Ram told they were more interested to go to disney park than come to boring resorts and Nevik and Nuts will take care of them for the day.
When they entered their room she hugged him tightly and shed some silent tears.
He allowed her to cry for some time and said "birthday baby ka rona is enough now, wiping her tears"
Priya: Yeh sab kyun?
Ram: Because I love you.
His answer made her overwhelmed and she hugged him back. How can some one love so much this question was eating her brain but the answer was alive infront of her.
They spent the time talking, laughing, caressing each other. They had lunch and took rest for an hour. In the evening they went for a walk and went to a near by restaurant. They were lost in each other that it was night when they were back. Ram took her to home theater and played her favourite movie "Guide" and when she was lost in the film he slipped out silently to make his arrangements. After an hour he came and saw that Priya was totally engrossed in the film and he came and stood between her and the screen.
Priya: Hathiyena Ram, please.
Ram: Nahin. Am hungry come lets have dinner.
Priya: Now only we ate in restaurant na. We can eat after half an hour. Please.
Ram: Hawww for the sake of a film you are keeping your hubby hungry. This isnt done angel.
Priya: No no Ram, I was just.. anyway chaliye we will have our dinner. Let me change and come.
Ram: You can change later. Abhi terrace pe dinner hain. Come.
Priya: Terrace pe kyun?
Ram: Moon cum candle light dinner. Chalo na Priya. He pulled her along with him.
Except security he gave leave to every staff who were there till the arrangements were done.
Ram stepped first and when Priya entered the terrace she was thrilled when rose petals were falling on her.
She looked up and saw that it was arranged in such a way that once a button was pressed She wanted to looked up but Ram stopped her. He asked her to just walk ahead. She smiled and did as per her wish but she could see that each of her step lit up the path beneath her foot. She was thrilled for his arrangements. Once they reached the table arranged for dinner she looked back. Now Ram didnt object her.
It was so well arranged that each her step will lit up a tile and it inturn would activate a button which opened a bag and flowers would shower on her. She has no words when she understood that. His love was making her amused every other day but this time it was magnanimous. She never expected all these. First a trust on her name and a funding project for education and now the royal dinner. It was as if she was a queen. When she said the same Ram smiled broadly saying ofcourse you are my queen... he bent on his knees and spread his arms saying "aapka hukum mere sar aankhon par mallika"...
Priya's eyes welled up with tears.
Ram: I was born as Ram Kapoor, I was a son, bhai, friend, Khadoos boss and everything else other than a lovely human. You are the reason for what I'm now, I was imperfect then and may be even now, but you made me the best husband ever and best dad. Its because of you I knew what is love. Thank you so much my angel for coming in my life. Please be with me in all my lifes as my princess. These five years are the most beautiful years in my life. Thanks for being a wonderful wife, mother and making my family as OUR family. I love you for ever Priya.
Priya had sobs by the time he finished his confession. He moved in daze towards him and hugged his head, he dugged more into her tummy holding her waist. They were lost in each other for a while. Then Priya wiped her tears and asked Ram to get up as his knees would hurt.
When he got up, she went near to him, lifted herself up and pecked his lips.
Priya: Don't love me this much Ram, my little heart can't take "itna pyar".
Ram: Then what about me who is getting breathless every day in your ocean of love.
They both smiled for this and just stayed calm keeping their foreheads together.
After some time Priya took him to dining table and served food in a plate and adoring their love they fed each other.
Priya: Will go and arrange bed for our sleep, you go freshen up, I too will. Just give me half an hour.
Ram: Usski jaroorat nahi hain, bed is all ready.. its been waiting for our sizzling romance.
He took her to the room on the terrace and there she saw that a round water bed was waiting for them. He had wall mounted mirrors every where
around the bed.
Ram whispered in her ears I want to see you enjoying every moment of our love and intimacy. I hope you are ok with it.
Priya blushed and bent her head bitig her lip.
Ram: I told you, they are mine.
Priya: Yeah as you wish. But not now,pushing him outside of the room ,she went to freshen up .She was having an adorable cute smile on her face all the while . she claded herself in a white saree with a maroon streaks at the sides ,she wore a sleeveless blouse with a deep cut neck attached with a simple latch .she made the pallu lying on her bossom as one layer .her neck adorned with a platinum chain with a love pendent along with her mangal sutra .she wore white glass bangles to her bare wrists golden anklets to her smooth ankles.she slid a thin waist band on her waist ,wore white jhumkis to her ears ,she marked with sindhoor on her parted hair , keeping a red rose on her rt side , made her hair dangle on left side ,she did a light touch up .and the smile on her lips made her glow more .The more she is thinking about Ram the more her glow is deepening .

She looked back at the mirrors arrangement she walked to the door she unlatched it without doing anysound ,she came back .

Ram growing impatient sec by sec ,he so wanted to take her in his arms ravish her beauty , He is away from her few days and he just came back before her birthday night just to be with her , and the long wait is making him go crazy on his wife, After sometime , he knocked the door calling out fr her "Priyaaa "

But there is no sound .he knocked a bit hardly ,This time to his surprise the door opened ,he stepped hesitatingly when he looked towards the bed .He frozen at his place seeing Priya sitting in the middle of the bed a gungat covering on her head . Its water bed so except her sitting place the rest of the part slightly welled up .so priya is looking like a white lotus flower blooming .He latched the door .Priya's heart beat increased while he is nearing to her , He sat infront of her ,Slowly he unleashed the gungat ,loved to see priya in that attire .

Taking her face in his palms . You are looking like an angel kissing featherly on her forehead . he kissed her eyes than nose than cheeks , He observed that she wore sleeveless as he asked her once he so wanted to see her in this attire . He lifted her up she perplexed to see him .He made her stand on her delicate feet turned her to the mirror ,gazed at her attire .It was only for her and she got ready only for him ,OMG how perfect she is looking his darting looks making her go weak on her knees .His hungry eyes caught her attention but he so wanted to ravish her and he don't want to go far away from her at the same time he so liked this type of priyas attire . Unable to bear the tension Priya hugged him "Don't look at me like that "

Like what he asked with a smile

Like "As if Im not wearing anything "

Haha he laughed heartfully , How you guessed my itentions so correct ha ,My princess I Love You so much .

She stood on her tippi toes slightly pecked him on his lips "I Too Love You "My Prince .

I feel the time stood still and I lie in your arms like this forever ,Im not wishing for anything ,I love you so much Ram .Im the luckiest women on this earth .I so love you kissed his cheeks . her silky long fingers trying to unbutton his shirt , Ram stoppd her in midway he removed her bangles one by one than her jhumkas ,platinum pendent, her waist band with his lips not with his hands . she shivered with his touch and win whatever position also he can see her in the mirror.How much she is responding , enjoying his touch . She felt his need at her belly .he is doing magic on her each grooves nd curves . and she is moaning according to his perfect hands play . he is loving it .and he unlatched her blouse she arched her back feeling his touch , her round curves welled up , he hide his face in that spontaneously priya pressed him more keeping her hand on his head .

"Make me yours " barely she can able to audible only to him . He made her nude , she too did the same with him . Priya don't close your eyes .I want to see your desire for your prince , I want to see your joy . I want to see your peack so please saying this he lowered his head to reach her round curve .twirling with his tongue , the other one is rightly punishing by his expert fingers .

After the well foreplay she can hear his growl sounds and he can hear her small moans with longingness .He sunk himself in her skillenfolds ,measuring the depth of her cave , he saw her feminine form arching with pleasure at the same time bearing his manly pressure .her hands grabbed the sheet tightly in her hands after few secs the same of her hands scratching his back with her sweet love . Ram had a glow seeing the full side of his princess both satisfied after bathing on the osean of their love . he tired slept off on her bossom . soon after some time she heard him snoring away to glory , she looked at all the life size mirrors "OMG " how sweetly their both nude bodies tangled in one . She caressed his hairs looking in the mirror at his sleepin form on her bossom"

"My Prince I love you so much "

The rest of their lifes filled with only love and their non stop banters .

Her Prince and His princess lived happily ever after .

Hope you all like it .Thank you so much for the appreciation . Love you all ..

Edited by luvsakshi - 10 years ago
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Awesome again , Right now Im in clinic will give my full comment after reaching home
P.S:Im waiting for your post after seeing sandhya's comment as i guessed you did it😉😆
[DIV]Thank you for the Lovely fairy tale ,, muhaaa .
So am here with full comment.

The surprise was splendid and indeed so thoughtful anyone who loves their wife and if they have paisa too may plan something like this for one or other noble cause.. I think few do.
And the way Priya might have felt I can so understand and he took her to solitude to have her totally for him and give himself to her.. Good plan Ram..
And the evening was beautiful and the night OMG... Aisa hota toh kitna accha hota re.. I just loved it.. his surprise with raining flower petals every gal will be thrilled and Priya isnt an exemption.. His confession was awwweee... the best man he is. Their dinner was filled wid love recipe I think.
And OMG the water bed and mirrors ahem ahem... I just u know got a grin there.
And Priya's description padhthe hi mera dil bhar gaya imagining her in that attire was a treat... and she too poured her heart out and it was a perfect ending of a perfect Os with pleazing romance.
Keep it up Giri u rock always...and Neel thanks for pestering her..
Muah and hugggss
It was sooo goood beautiful awesome superb... Os.
Edited by armanz - 10 years ago

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