RaYa New Story : Complicated Luv Story Update Part 10 on Page 32

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Good start

Ram is married and waiting for his wife

continue soon

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Janilover

@Janilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Precap:

Ronit : OMG !!!!!!!
I cant beleive its u after 1 year...ohhh
u look...fugly i mean lovely...beauti ohh sorry i mean i have no words for u dabbu..
Tum to esi nahi thi and Ye sareee...saree aur dabbu...

Dabbu : With Angry looks Dont call me that i hate this name
Dabbu what kind of a name is this.

Ram : Ahem Ahem main bhi hu yaha...

Ronit : Ha Sorry par kya kare yar jab hum sath Hote hai to sabko bhul jate hai kyu dabbu...

Ram : Accha...

conti...

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Dhristi

@Rayaland

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Awww complicated precap cnt guess anything pls update soon n waiting for it

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sampa123

@sampa123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

vry nice start pls cntinue soon.n pls next time pm me

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Janilover

@Janilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

dhristikpd : thanx and title ke hisaab se precap bhi complicated hona chahiye

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Malati

@bpatil3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

laggta hai Ronit calls priya aas Dabbu😆😆 ram ko kuch kuch ho rha hai, pinch😆😆😆

kuch kuch ki kajol ki tarah hi describe kar rha hai dabbu ko ronit like shah rukh😆😆

nice preview👍🏼

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Janilover

@Janilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

PART 2
So here i am with 2nd part
Lady in White goes towards her husband and just then
A Man call: hey Ronit man How r u ??
Ronit turn other side and talking with man : Hi buddy i m F9 nd h r u ?
Man : same as u.
man goes other direction and just Ronit turn back direction and see a Lady in White saree come towards them( ram and ronit)
Ronit rubbed his eyes two time while ram make faces to see his wife and show her Watch tell her by his eyes that u r late.
Here Ronit cant believe what he has jst see before ram could say anything

Ronit : Ronit : OMG !!!!!!!
I cant beleive its u after 1 year...ohhh
u look...fugly i mean lovely...beauti ohh sorry i mean i have no words for u dabbu..
Tum to esi nahi thi and Ye sareee...saree aur dabbu...

Dabbu : With Angry looks Dont call me that i hate this name
Dabbu what kind of a name is this.
And a Simply friend Hug b/w Ronit and Dabbu..

Ram : Ahem Ahem main bhi hu yaha...

Ronit : Ha Sorry par kya kare yar jab hum sath Hote hai to sabko bhul jate hai kyu dabbu...

Ram : Accha..Apne Husband ko bhi bhul jati ho dabbu...and laugh hahaha

Ronit : Husband means Ram tera husband hai dabbu...

Its time to our Sherni come out in her Avtar
Hey watch it haa i told u dont call me that stupid name My name is Priya Sharma jst ram intrrupt and say

Ram : Correction mam Priya Kapoor not Sharma
And tumne sahi kaha ronit ki tum dono sabko bhul jate ho i mean mam to apna Naam bhi bhul gayi.

Dabbu aka Priya : Sorry Mr. Kapoor wo actually itne dino baad mili na apne...pause Best Friend se.

Ram : ronit tune kabhi bhi priya ke bare me bataya nahi means Clg days main ki tu priya...tum dono best friend the.

Ronit : actually hum dono Class ke 1st year me...

Just then Vikram and neha enter and Vik: hey Ronit u here wat a plesnt surprise.

Ronit : hmmm me too surprise and see priya and hugs Vik and neha.

Neha: tum kyu surprise i mean surprise to hume hona chahiye America ke Itne bade Business Tycoon hamare bich hai aaj.

Ronit : yaar neha tu kabhi meri tang khichna nahi chodegi.

Neha : to fir surprise kyu hai...

Ronit : surprise isliye hu kyoki...

Ram intrrupts and say kyoki aaj ise iski best friend pure 1 saal baad mili hai or use aaj hi pta chala hai ki uski shadi ho gyi hai right ronit and winks at priya.

Vik-Neha together : Kaun ???

Ram : Tuhamari Priya

Neha : Priya...tum ...tum ronit ko janti ho i mean kaise kab...

Priya : Sab batati hu baad me abhi Party me aaye hai to party enjoy kar le kyu Vikram.

Vik : baat to sahi hai ab to sab milte rahenge baate hoti rahegi chalo neha,sab kuch drinks shrinks ho jaye.

Priya jsut relif to here this bcoz she doesnt know how ronit react.

but then just Ram :vik-neha lagta hai
Ronit apne friend se baate karna chahta hai itne dino baad jo mila hai and make faces before priya say anything
neha : ofcourse ronit

Priya and ronit u carry on hum baad me join karte hai chalo fatty...

Then ram,neha,vik leave and only Priya and Ronit their.

Ram and vik having drinks and neha bla bla with her friends.

Ram continusly watching priya from distance

Here Ronit and Priya talking with each other.

(i know all u want raya talk but plz its really imp to flow of story )

Ronit: hi Mrs. Kapoor kaisi hai aap.

Priya: plz ronit yar ye kaise bat kar rhe ho yar muzse.i know ki tum gussa ho muzse..

Ronit: are mam aapse main kyu naaraz honga aap lagti kya hai meri.and turns right side.

Priya: sorry sorry sorry lo baba kaan pakad liye ab to maaf kar do.and priya hold his right hand and turns him her side

Ram saw all this from distance.

Ronit: ok baba maaf kiya bus aur mera hath chodo tumahre pati ne dekh liya to god knows kya karega tumahre sath bhi or mere sath bhi.Tum uska gussa to janti hi hogi

Priya: are unhe koi fark nahi padta yar...

Ronit: ok baba ye batao tum kaha gayab ho gyi thi.

Priya : thinks Sab bataungi Ronit tumhe par shuruwat kaha se aur kaise karuuu...priya's thought brek by ronit hello dabbu kaha kho gayi tum...

Priya: are kuch nahi ye sab bate to baad me karenge aaram se chalo abhi.
Priya drag ronit towards vik neha ram.

Host announce plz Mr. And Mrs. Bhatiya to Cut the cake and Anniversary Party on.

Mr.and Mrs Bhatiya cut the cake

ram priya vik neha ronit present their and Host Announce that all couples Join the dance floor

Vik-neha just wait for this moment but they insist ram and priya to dance but both denies and ronit ask priya
Ronit : may i have plsr to dance with u dabbuuu...
Ram control his laugh and priya gives angry looks to both

Priya first denies
Ram first looks her with twinkled eyes and says kya tumhe dance krna aata hai...

Now priya cant control and say You just wait and watch

Here Ronit and Priya on dance floor
suddenly DJ change the slow song to fasttrack song and all other couples say vow vow vows except priya and ronit they are very good dancer but
But ram vik neha doesnt know this

Ram Vik Neha see priya and Ronit with wide open mouth cant believe what they watching
Priya and Ronit dance like professional dancers.

Salsa and contemprory mix

Neha: Fatty yar tumahari wife to kamal ka dance karti hai yar.

Ram just see priya without blinkng his eyes
" WOW " the first word come from his mouth and
at the song end ronit knee down takes priyas hand and kiss priyas hand.

Ram saw this and burns with anger..

End
Sorry for mistake bcoz i update this from my mobile.I know all ppl want raya story but this is just starting and and plz let ne know the length of the part is ok
Jutta chapaal tomoto(100rs/kg) are welcome.

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luvbalh

@luvbalh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

HEY ,,, WELCOME TO THE FORUM 😃

PART 1

part is nice ronith is waiting to see ram's wife

uff yaar he called her bhabhi ..

😭 she looks pretty young than both men ..

loved it looking forward for part 2

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Malati

@bpatil3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Good going

ok ronit and priya has something more than friendship i suppose, the way priya was hesitating to tell her relationship n cozines with Ronit.

Ok how can ram be calm , when he is seeing his darling wife dance for the first time that to with Ronit and so well above all Ronit kissing her , defintiely rambabu ko dard hoga dil k kisi kone me😉😆😆 hona bhi chahiye, he has all rights.

lets see how it unfolds.