SS: DHADKANEIN Part 15 Updated on Pg 139 on 17.10.2016 - Page 49

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey doc,

so so sorry for late commenting, but not soo late.

the story is moving so gracefully... everything is just so perfect...

wht i liked the most is the instant reaction of ram after seeing that mole ...

ha ha "wht a beautiful view, uff !!! I just wanna loose myself in that crook" really am shocked to the core after reading that line... hamein to maar hi daala hero ne ufff!!!yaar

i always loved the convo between ram and vik

Hawww! Neha kissed the mole no no no

its always rams right dear not urs only he can kiss that mole...

i thonk mein kuch jyada hi expect kar rahi hoon.. lekin kissi ne sahi kaha hai yeh dil to pagal hai..

Ram ka dil pagal hai priya ke liye aur mera dil pagal hai ram ke liye

yeh dill maange more.. more... and more...

due respect to the writer, i want one more dhamakedaar ful of emotion, update jaldi jaldi..
aur mat tadpana hame.. aur wait nahi horaha hai..
plz update asap..

Slowly and silentlt i m falling in love with this story...




yaar lya taunt maarte hai dono ek dusre ko.. bechara vik phasa neha ki vajah se..

hey i want this tobe add in future updates ..every girl wont forget his mans first touch , first kiss.. so when ram wants to kiss his lady for the first time then it should be that mole first plz dear.. becoz as you mentioned in update its so tempting...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rajhallur

Hey doc,

so so sorry for late commenting, but not soo late.

the story is moving so gracefully... everything is just so perfect...

wht i liked the most is the instant reaction of ram after seeing that mole ...

ha ha "wht a beautiful view, uff !!! I just wanna loose myself in that crook" really am shocked to the core after reading that line... hamein to maar hi daala hero ne ufff!!!yaar

i always loved the convo between ram and vik

Hawww! Neha kissed the mole no no no

its always rams right dear not urs only he can kiss that mole...

i thonk mein kuch jyada hi expect kar rahi hoon.. lekin kissi ne sahi kaha hai yeh dil to pagal hai..

Ram ka dil pagal hai priya ke liye aur mera dil pagal hai ram ke liye

yeh dill maange more.. more... and more...

due respect to the writer, i want one more dhamakedaar ful of emotion, update jaldi jaldi..
aur mat tadpana hame.. aur wait nahi horaha hai..
plz update asap..

Slowly and silentlt i m falling in love with this story...




yaar lya taunt maarte hai dono ek dusre ko.. bechara vik phasa neha ki vajah se..

hey i want this tobe add in future updates ..every girl wont forget his mans first touch , first kiss.. so when ram wants to kiss his lady for the first time then it should be that mole first plz dear.. becoz as you mentioned in update its so tempting...

I loved ur DP😳 and ur wish👍🏼 please viji kar do
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Posted: 11 years ago
super awesome update ...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Asusaul awesome ... will come in detail ..

😛👏



Ahhh another beautiful update yaar 😛
Im so so waiting for it
and here it is let me run for it ..
ahhh
so Ram is waiting impatiently to share his biggg problem with Vik 😆
I so loved vik tauntings ..
awww Ram so fallen for priya
"kya jadoo hai yaar un aankhon mein?? Ek hi jhatke mein mujhe pagal bana diya..he was lost in his thoughts.."
i so love his dialougues 😆


.then tell me why is she disturbing me?
V: Haaww how would I know?? Kya kya chala hain aap dononke beech mein mujhe kaise pata hoga?
Im rofling like helll ..OMG kya jaadhu kardiya 😆
So vik clarified its called "LOVE" 😆

I loved the talk between Vik and Ram, and you know what
You described very very beautifully 😛

I can so understand Neha's excitement
and loved their interaction
The change Priyas face was clearly shown in your writing
awewee

The famous CT surgeon Dr. RK has fallen for Dr. Priya Sarma as she hypnotised him with her beautiful eyes.
Priya was smiling and blushing at first but when Neha finished the line she was having a confused look.
P: What? Come again?
P: Saara ilzam mujhpe laga rahe hai.. I wont leave him🤣

😆😆😆
yesh she wont leave him

Oh My God ... Neha kissed on her beauty spot 😆
she is Neha only Lol ..
Oh my oh my im grinning like a fool while redaing the entire convo
poor priya yelled like hell ... and she is asking neha
you are not supposed to kisss 😆 😆

Hayye hayeee so mrg mrg Both Ram & Priya met
Oh my ..priya is giving nice taunts to him
I love this tom and jerry silent war between them

haha priya did wrong thing standing right infront of him 😆
now both are in a lovely tension 😉

OMG OMG Ram did noticed the Mole
thanks to neha ..priya easily can understand what he was talking about
and how this Rk is .. poor priya like she was unable to say anything as she knws his answer
But god how darely he is gushing his feleings towards her
and uper se he was thinking why he is doing like this
and moreover he is okay with his feelings

Lol Lol
wonderful wonderful
so their professionalism you showed so gracefully yaar
aww i loved the way she dealt the case which Ram has referred 👏
and the way he is calling "Madam" she is irritating
but she i scontroling herself

wah wah kya explanation diya "Code Blue '"
Priya did the great thing
yaar i so imagined this procedure ..Brilliantly penned down
The shocks ..
haha you mentione the "Clear " also ..
Giri used to laugh when any movie or serial shows something without
"clear " note when they were doing teh procedure 😆
But beautifully penned down 👏 👏
ahhh superb and she saved the life
very good going baby
and and RK gave her water and she was surprised to see he is giving Water and calling for Coffee

Priya smiled feebly at vik .. as he was astonished to see them together
and all three had goodtime
I loved priyas teasing

Oh mY heavens ... you Dr.RK praising me
and he is asking "No need of taunts " 😆😆😆
and yeah definately if he call her "PRIya" sweetly
one day she will die with that sweetness 😆

and i loved her last punch .. She will read hypnosism 😆😆
and Ram was telling vik .. see i told you
God how innocnet Ram is heere

Lol ..
I so loved
and Raj hated this ... so something with Raj is going to come in future haa ..

oh my what a surprise ..."natasha "
I loved her entry jollygirl
and priya is simply smiling at her while she is speaking
and when she came to know about her Bhai she was like
shocked at the same time RK bhi
wah wah what a coincidence
Hope this natasha brings some new thoughts to meet them
hope she may help these two ..

Oh my after this gripping update
I cant wait anymore for the next update
please
please update dedo
urgently
Otherwise i will do rele nirahara deeksha 😆😆😆

simply superb mindblowing
ahhh
Muhaa for this stupendo fantabulous update
Hmmm
maardalaaa
Love you
ek tight huggy from my side

Now im eagrely waiting fir next updte




yaar di u reply...so good yaar... bas iske baad rply karne ki zarurat hi nahi kisi... apne hi saare chote se chote point lkh diye...

par ek cheese nahi samjh main aai yaar

Otherwise i will do rele nirahara deeksha 😆😆😆

ye wali line...

maine puri kahani with aapka comment ke saath padi sab samajh main aa gya bas ye hi nhai aaya...


main abhi tak ye hi soach rahi ho...yarr..

Edited by deekshasxn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deekshasxn



Otherwise i will do rele nirahara deeksha 😆😆😆



Thank you for liking deeksha
and the line im writing in english for you

This is the meaning of that line

"Relay Hunger strike" 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iLuvRamKapoor

I loved ur DP😳 and ur wish👍🏼 please viji kar do



Chotiii ..

this wish is not going to happen
hehe i came to knw from Giri

their first kiss is coming in next update i think so
but not on mole

But you will like their first kiss 😛😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iLuvRamKapoor

baby u took my comment very seriously or what

itna saara Ram?

Haye haye mast that sab kuch i loved all the scene Priya Neha, Chti entry.Vik Ram (my jai veeru) sab kuch mast that
also update was so long(not that i have a problem)

how are u able to manage with my angel(my angel will (she will finish 9 months tomm and 3 more to go she will be mine) and write these updates.. Tc sweety ..

and u know what the USP of ur FF is the detailed mention of medical terminologies and the friendship between Neha priya ,Ram Vik..

But Ram is suddenly chnaged na (i know the reason am sorry viji feeling gulity)

and neekoti chepana naku kuda akada undi mole LOL😳

That was so cute awee..

That hospital scene was too it was like i can imagine the scene happening

aww RaShi as doctors

Thanks Viji for the awesome update and sorry dude..



The blue line

Viji mam also impressed seeing the mole on some one 😆 😆

Dnt worry ..your future Ram will enjoy 😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi




<font color="#0000ff">The blue line</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Viji mam also impressed seeing the mole on some one😆😆</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Dnt worry ..your future Ram will enjoy😉😆</font>



I know dat someone lol
Andaru mee ayana la romantic untara chepu towel n all lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh nop write da way u want viji n dis is cheating u too discuss the uodates first itself hmph

Originally posted by: luvsakshi




<font color="#0000ff">Chotiii ..</font>

<font color="#0000ff">this wish is not going to happen</font>
<font color="#0000ff">hehe i came to knw from Giri</font>

<font color="#0000ff">their first kiss is coming in next update i think so</font>
<font color="#0000ff">but not on mole</font>

<font color="#0000ff">But you will like their first kiss😛😆</font>

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Posted: 11 years ago
viji di update soon na.. Eagerly waiting for next part...

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