RaYa - FF - Second Chance thread 5, updated final part on page 94

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Mi_AmOR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#411

well written part...

emotional...

all their griefs dscrd well...

contn soon..

thnx fr the pm...

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akilagoud2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#412

emotional update
continue soon
thanks for pm

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Suriya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#413

very emotionally written.pls send pm fr nxt update pls..

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lpsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#414

thnks for pm and i lovd the most in this story family bonding and understand and raya romance

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Cute_Saakshii12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#415

It was too emotional... Ram didn' t let any one know about miscarriage 4 long time and its good he has opened it up!!!
Continue soon and thanks 4 pm!!!

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sampa123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#416

uff finally u updated!!thank u thank u thank u so much drlo...as usual updt waa too good,just superb..pls cntinue soon.n pls raya romance se vara ak updt do na

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bubbles84

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Posted: 11 years ago

#417

Hey there, I am a silent reader in this forum and I like your FF very much. I just have one point to make that please focus more on RaYa rather than other characters. I know they are needed but sometimes their scenes are too long and RaYa very little. It is just my POV coz I like this FF a lot.

Regards 😃

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Jyothi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#418

Very nice emotonial update convo between 3 friends very neatly penned down jaldi se priya ko sab kuch yaad dilao yaar anyway thanks for pm waiting for next part

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Sumira

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Posted: 11 years ago

#419

Awesome update ... emotions very well penned ..

loved it ...

Thanks for d PM ...

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agneeputra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#420

uh grt update good that everyone knows the truth and they support for Ram...waiting eagerly for the holiday update...described every emotion and that was fantastic...

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