My take on the current scenario..updated part 4,5,6.(last update)

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

all parts were nice ending was good

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Awesome update nd perfect end..
Romatic one..😳
It was not at all a bad story.. 😃

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Part 4 5 6
it was really intesrting to read all 3 parts in one go loved how u made Priya to slove the problam without making anyone villan u did gud justic to story i really liked it... also it was hot & sizzling of RaYa & too gud do wite more often would love to read more...

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anupam_dil

@anupam_dil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

yaar I said BOLD not in that terms it is about font like bold,italic or underline to make a paragraph look very good as and when you look at it you feel like reading it legible... you see this is the meaning of me telling...ok now I am going to read the updates and then I will comment on them thanks that you read the reply and reacted to it...

Edited by anupam_dil - 11 years ago

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anupam_dil

@anupam_dil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

yaar story toh bahuth achhi hai 😛and sorry I could not tell you clearly but any ways you wrote nicely I liked the story👏...and we know to give time to writing itself is very big thing as you have many things to do in your life👍🏼...thanks for completing the story😛

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bssamyukta

@bssamyukta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

yaar anupam mujhe pata nahi tha ki font vali bold ki baat kar rahe the...i thought the other bold ...anyway thanks for reading and taking time out for commenting..

thanks and regards

samyukta