SS-Ishq ka Rutba...INLEAD New Part 8 Updated Pg No. 69

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sandhya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Ram is hurt...koi baat toh hai jo ram ke dil mein khatak raha hai.

leena please update soon...

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peeyara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

nice preview, it looks like the man is Ram n he is very hurt

try to update it soon,pls😊

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: chillpc
intrestng promo...!!

update soon...!!

Hopefully will post by tonight so stay tune & wait & watch...

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Yah sweety I'm Good.Happy to back again.
sure I will wait for the update.
plz update your old Ff too.
Nice Preview. waiting for it.
Thank you so much.

Hopefully will post by tonight so stay tune & wait & watch... yes dear very happy to see u back again... will update that too very soon... a bit little wait plz...

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: 123fiza

nice promo..cont soon

Hopefully will post by tonight so stay tune & wait & watch...

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: sandhyasn
<font color="#006600">Ram is hurt...koi baat toh hai jo ram ke dil mein khatak raha hai.</font>
<font color="#006600">leena please update soon...</font>

Hopefully will post by tonight so stay tune & wait & watch... lets's see is he really Ram or someone else next is ready to explore soon... stay tune...

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: peeyara
nice preview, it looks like the man is Ram n he is very hurt
try to update it soon,pls😊

Hopefully will post by tonight so stay tune & wait & watch... secrate will reveal in next updates so stay tune...

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: vironikajain
Nice preview..
Do update soon..

Hopefully will post by tonight so stay tune & wait & watch...

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

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First of all sorry for taking long time to update was bit busy & now a request I m gonna make PM of update list soon so if u want notifying PM on new Update of part plz like this post or add me in ur buddy list else u won't get notifying PM for next part so hurry up will be waiting for ur reply & one more thing people as posting via cell might be some spelling or grammar mistake if u find so plz forgets it... now enjoy the part.

Part 1 - Beginning of Journey.

One more bright day were abt to raise in rainy days of year the cool breeze were flowing in the air giving soothing to everyone as just now the heavy rainfall has stopped few moments ago. The birds are creeping outside from their nest feeling that sun is almost abt to raise from his sleep finishing the dark night to give brightness to the world to make them realized that new day is arrived to start their life again after a pause of sweet sugary sleep of new dreams & restart the life forgetting all the bad dreams & pain they faced in life.
Now its time to leaving the life with new energy & as battle of fight with life's sadness & failures but at the same world there is one place where there is someone for whom this bright sun's brightness can't finished the darkness of pain in his life there is no meaning of new dreams of life for him as his pain is that much deeper that he can't even think of start new life forgetting the painful past. Its morning's 5:30 in India at Mumbai one man is standing near the window looking at the rising sun in orange sky & lost in his thought of life how the life is changing in every second, the biggest happiness of his life is still with him but yet not with him. He had never thought one day he will face such drastic situation that will change everything in his life in a movement & he won't be able do anything.
He was thinking of his life's past last 5 years the pain from he suffered he can't even share it with anyone b'coz with whom he always sharing is with him... can hear him... can see him but can talk... can't give suggestion... can't make him comfortable when he is feeling emotionally really very weak & broken. He closed his eyes with heavy heart.
When he hears some noises at from other side of his place he turned & moves in the direction of voice where one elderly lady is singing lord Ganesha's shlook while doing lord Ganesha's idol's aarti along with some other man & ladies around her at the early hours in morning like she everyday does. That man moves near them then he also resting his one hand on his chest stands front of Ganesha idol for morning lord Ganesha aarti. He closes his eyes & hears getting his soul dissolves in it with full heart yet not fully.

The elderly lady starts to sing it along with doing Ganesha's idol's aarti.
|| Shree Vakratunda Mahakaya Suryakoti Samaprabha
Nirvighnam Kuru Me Deva Sarva Kaaryeshu Sarvada ||

Sukhkarta Dukhharta Varta Vighnachi, Nurvi Purvi Prem Krupa Jayachi,
Sarvangi Sundar Uti Shendurachi, Kanti Jhalke Mal Mukataphalaanchi.
Jai Dev Jai Dev, Jai Mangal Murti, Darshan Marte Maan Kamana Purti, Jai Dev Jai Dev.
Ratnakhachit Phara Tujh Gaurikumra, Chandanaachi Uti Kumkum Ke Shara,
Hire Jadit Mukut Shobhato Bara, Runjhunati Nupure Charani Ghagriya.
Jai Dev Jai Dev, Jai Mangal Murti, Darshan Marte Maan Kamana Purti, Jai Dev Jai Dev.
Lambodar Pitaambar Phanivar Vandana, Saral Sond Vakratunda Trinayana,
Das Ramacha Vat Pahe Sadna, Sankati Pavave Nirvani Rakshave Survar Vandana.
Jai Dev Jai Dev 2, Jai Mangal Murti, Darshan Marte Maan Kamana Purti, Jai Dev Jai Dev.
Shendur Laal Chadhaayo Achchhaa Gajamukha Ko, Dondil Laal Biraaje Sut Gaurihar Ko.
Haath Liye Gud Ladduu Saaii Sukhar Ko, Mahimaa Kahe Na Jaay Laagat Huun Pad Ko.
Jai Jai Jai Jai Jai, Jai Jai Jii Ganaraaj Vidyaasukhadaataa,
Dhany Tumhaaro Darshan Meraa Mat Ramataa, Jai Dev Jai Dev.
Astha Sidhi Dasi Sankat Ko Bairi, Vighan Vinashan Mangal Murat Adhikari,
Koti Suraj Prakash Aise Chabi Teri, Gandasthal Madmastak Jhool Shashi Behari.
Jai Jai Jai Jai Jai, Jai Jai Jii Ganaraaj Vidyaasukhadaataa,
Dhany Tumhaaro Darshan Meraa Mat Ramataa, Jai Dev Jai Dev.
Bhaavabhagat Se Koi Shara Naagat Aave, Santati Sampatti Sabahii Bharapuur Paave.
Aise Tum Mahaaraaj Moko Ati Bhaave, Gosaaviinandan Nishidin Gun Gaave.
Jai Jai Jai Jai Jai, Jai Jai Jii Ganaraaj Vidyaasukhadaataa.
Dhany Tumhaaro Darshan Meraa Mat Ramataa, Jai Dev Jai Dev.

This is Marathi lord Ganesha aarti if u want to read its translation here go with link u will find easy to understand it.
Ganpati Aarti Shukhkarta-Dukhharta with English translation.
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After completing the aarti that elderly lady draped in withe & blue border cotton sari turns to her back & sees that man is standing there resting his one hand on his chest front of Lord Ganesha's idol. After while giving everyone prasad she smiles to looking at him that man also looks at her give slight smile. She comes near to him while giving him prasad of lord Ganesha's in his hand he took it & eat it with taking bless of lord Ganesha but was still quite.

Elderly lady: beta don't worry everything will be fine one day just have faith in lord Ganesha one day he will make everything all right. (she tried to assures the man with her sweet talk & trust on god looking straight into his eyes with hopes)
Man: I have lost me faith in him long back Kaki & if I m here its just for her b'coz she always had blind faith in him (looking back at the Ganesha idol) & look what he did... were he brought her today if I never promised her u would never seen me in front of him like this ever. (disappointment & anger clearly shows in his talk... in his eyes for god yet elderly lady smile to him & say).
Elderly lady: beta u r saying all this as u r angry on him for the pain he given to u (looking side way to Ganesha idol & smile) but remember my one thing one day Bappa will only bring so mach happiness in ur life u won't be able hold them in one try. If he gives sadness then he will only give u happiness too. It's just u will have to keep trying & fight with u sadness b'coz one or other day happiness is round of the corner for u. (she lovingly placed hand on man's head & smiles to him but somewhere man didn't agree to her nor he had courage to argue with her so he let it be & stay quite looking other side)
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When there one other man in dress of ward boy of hospital comes to them & told to them that.

Ward boy: Suku Tai (looking at elderly lady) Dr. Rastogi sir is calling u in his cabin. (Suku tai nodded her head in yes & ward boy left the place with smile then she turns to looks at that man)
Sulakshana Tai: Just take care ur self & her too I m sure one day she will back to us. (Saying so she left the place with smile to move towards Dr. Rastogi's cabin)

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{Shulakshna Kamble {Suku tai} (late Rasika Joshi)
[She was one of the wonderful actress in this industry's but unfortunately she just died around a year ago while fighting with cancer. She was wonderful person too so I m making her alive in this SS as this character will suits her the best she last played Tarulata Mahiyavanshi in Bandini. I love u Rasika ji u were the best.]
She is 55 year old head nurse of City hospital in Mumbai from last 15 years she is working her as head nurse in this hospital. She is very hardworking, very sweet & claim person she makes everyone smile with her pleasant nature. she can mixed up with anyone very easily. She is having her family her hubby works in factory. She have 2 kids 1 boy & one girl but her most of the time spends in hospital only taking care of patients that's why she bonded with them very well.}

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That man moves back to the place where he was standing before with sadness in his face once again lost in his thoughts when Dr.Ravi Rastogi comes there & held that man's chain of thoughts by keeping his hand on his shoulder with concerned. That man turned & looks at his back he sees a slight smile of hope on Dr. Ravi Rastogi lips & he is facing him.

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Dr. Ravi Rastogi {Guest appearance}
He is 60 years old strong experienced psychiatrist doctor of Mumbai's leading City hospital from last 30 years. He is very hard working & one of the best doctor in City hospital even he is very humble & gud human being yet very strict abt his patients health too. (he will be in story for just 2 part then he will only appears if its needful so not giving any actor name u can imagine him anyone of there in show.)

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Dr. Ravi: don't worry everything is under control beta. She will be fine soon & I think until by this evening u can take her home back also if her reports permit me to discharge. (Dr. Ravi assures him with smile to that man which made him a bit relax & hopeful he closed his eyes with deep breath relaxed himself from all the worries).
Man: but are u sure doctor uncle everything will be fine one day. (he looks with dejection in Dr. Ravi's eyes where he just can see hope but not yet convinced with it).
Dr. Ravi: have faith beta not on god then on ur trust that is alive in ur heart from last 5 years & b'coz of what u r here for her... for her betterment. (man nodded his head in yes looking away as his eyes got little moist he controlled himself & his emotions) well I wanted to share this with u abt her from past some days but actually didn't got chance to talk with u on this matter properly &... (before he could say something the man asked in hurried with tension growing inside him & with worried face).
Man: is everything all right uncle is there is something to worried abt??? (he just can't hold himself back after hearing Dr. Ravi is talking abt her who is his life).
Dr. Ravi: yes beta everything is fine just don't worry come let's go to my cabin & then we will talk with peace. (both enters in Dr. Ravi's cabin & set themselves on chair Man sits on opposite chair of table from Dr. Ravi. Man is still worried hoping for not any bad news is waiting for Dr. Ravi to continue it which Dr. Ravi can easily find out from his face).
Man: uncle tell me na is there any bad news or is anything abt to worry plz uncle don't grew up tension any more tell it first. (he asked very impatiently to Dr. Ravi with so much worry but it was not new for Dr. Ravi as he knows how much this man is loving & caring for her so it was quite normal his concerned for Dr. Ravi).
Dr. Ravi: relax beta I told u before only there is nothing to worry abt its just that I have discussed her case to my one psychiatrist friend of UK his name is Dr.Alax d'soza & he is very experiences doctor in his filed of psychiatrist. He has handled successfully lot of case like her kind of illness & his track reports r 80% of successful cases. So I sanded her all reports of last 5 years to him. (Dr. Ravi says with smile seeing which give him hopes of her returning of her to back to him he was listening patiently but now it was not possible for him)
Man: so what he said is there any chance in her case is she can be like before? (he asked in hurry with all his eagerness to know abt it further).
Dr. Ravi: he said normally in this kind of cases changes r very less but sometime if we try it's not impossible too. I also have asked him to come over here to examine her personally so we can get actual exact picture of this thing. (he said with plain face no expression there that man is listening him very carefully wanting him to continue but his urge to know more he ended up asking him again).
Man: but what is need of him to come here uncle u r there & have faith in u that u will treat her the best u r gold medalist in this. (he asked with confusion looks that is there any big issue that Dr. Ravi is not able to handle that's why h want another Doctor for her treatment or he is really assuming to much abt it?).
Dr. Ravi: no its not like that beta its just that I have did my best till now & i m doing it still but in my view I think we also should take other doctors medical reference too when we can't see much improvement in this case. I know beta there is improvement in her not that much as I have thought so it will be batter we consult other expert psychiatrist too. ( he said with lots of concerned & some how man looked convinced with his talk too).
Man: ok if feel that then I completely believes on u uncle so what he said? I mean is he lending down here to examine her. (he asked very patiently & waited Dr. Ravi to continue it with plain face Dr. Ravi looked straight to him & say).
Dr. Ravi: no beta he is not coming here he have lots of case to handle there & he can't come here for more then year. (man becomes upset hearing this it feels like he lost his one more hope but Dr. Ravi has not stopped yet there is more to be continue in his talk) but seeing the seriousness of this case he is sanding his best associate doctor for us beta who had assisted him in his most of the cases. Who become his right hand & very popular in her short period of last 3 years practice & the good part is she is an Indian but brought up & worked in UK only. She will be reaching here in 3 hours from now her fight must be landing now. (man smiles hearing this he was feeling hope in Dr. Ravi's talk but was not will his wait will end ever? will she be fine like before? All questions where in his mind but he was unable to clear anything right now but he is hopeful something gud is surly coming.).
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Preview:
U will get to see Ram meeting with one unknown girl at middle of road. She left her deep impression on Ram at just her meet that Ram gets attracted to her at his first sight.
In next so just stay tune with lost of twist & suspense is to be unfold.

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If u like this part or story plz comment on it & like the pos[]t it will give me more encouragement to write

[COLOR=brown] I know was completely filler part foe u all who is the man talking to Dr. Ravi & who is she that is in the hospital??? However, all confusions will be clear in next update just stay tune here to read more...
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Edited by leena04 - 12 years ago