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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Sharmirayanz
Totally different..jst loved it..thanks 4 pm..ple continue..

thanks for commenting😊, yes its different story, and i hope you liked it, pleasure is all mine

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER
wow yaar great concept ..but ram and ONS..it hurts ..ok waiting fo the full story and I blved ram is now family man ..thank u for ur pm

thanks for commenting😊, I know it hurts but Ram is like that but he will be a change person and how that u will get to know in coming parts, pleasure is all mine

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: peeyara
intresting story😊
Priya pehle waitress thi then teacher ya phir along wid teaching it was her part time job😕
i know my question will be answered in next update😊
will be waiting for next one and thanks for pm😊

thanks for commenting😊, no no she was a waitress before she met Ram, then teacher but something has happened which has made her like this that u will get to know in next part, will update soon, pleasure is all mine

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Part 1
yaar how u come up always with so many diffrent stories so soon its really feel graet to raed ur write ups so megicle they r awesome i loved the most is "maan ki lagan...ishq hai tumse" its such a feb story everythis is so real in the story... but i love all ur write ups alll r feb & amezing treat to read... now come to this OS its so feb again yaar background story is really intersting of RaYa so happy Peehu is back but just for 2 part first & might be will be in last... but never mind can u write up any FF with RaYaPee (Peehu mean our beloved Amruta) plz do if u can & awww this is really awesome update yaar par ek baat nahi baith rahi... story title & story discription r feeling opposit how come is it love story or tragic story??... do conntinue next soon waiting for it...

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vironikajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Very differnt nd interesting concept..
Bussiness tycoon nd waitress..story about how they meet, their journey towards happiness nd togetherness..good..looks very interesting
Iss bar Pihu bhi hai awww..loved the scenes on bf table..
Birthday celebration was nicely describe...Aww how Pihu is saying use bhi baby lado..cute
Good job..i m amazed how everytime u come up with a different nd awesome story.. 👏 thank u for all the stories..love all of them
Cont soon nd thanx for pm..
Sorry for late rply..

Edited by vironikajain - 12 years ago

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: leena04
Part 1
yaar how u come up always with so many diffrent stories so soon its really feel graet to raed ur write ups so megicle they r awesome i loved the most is "maan ki lagan...ishq hai tumse" its such a feb story everythis is so real in the story... but i love all ur write ups alll r feb & amezing treat to read... now come to this OS its so feb again yaar background story is really intersting of RaYa so happy Peehu is back but just for 2 part first & might be will be in last... but never mind can u write up any FF with RaYaPee (Peehu mean our beloved Amruta) plz do if u can & awww this is really awesome update yaar par ek baat nahi baith rahi... story title & story discription r feeling opposit how come is it love story or tragic story??... do conntinue next soon waiting for it...

thanks for commenting😊, in fact I also don't knoe how I land up with such aweful ideas sometimes but am really happy that every time u people appreciate my work, that is everything to me, will definitely try to keep ur request, I know abhi tak story bohot confusing lag rahi hain but am sure when u get the next part, you all will understand it, so keep reading the story, I will update ASAP

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: vironikajain
Very differnt nd interesting concept..
Bussiness tycoon nd waitress..story about how they meet, their journey towards happiness nd togetherness..good..looks very interesting
Iss bar Pihu bhi hai awww..loved the scenes on bf table..
Birthday celebration was nicely describe...Aww how Pihu is saying use bhi baby lado..cute
Good job..i m amazed how everytime u come up with a different nd awesome story.. 👏 thank u for all the stories..love all of them
Cont soon nd thanx for pm..
Sorry for late rply..

thanks for commenting😊, thanks for liking the concept, don't be sorry yaar, will continue soon and pleasure is all mine

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

thanks for commenting😊, in fact I also don't knoe how I land up with such aweful ideas sometimes but am really happy that every time u people appreciate my work, that is everything to me, will definitely try to keep ur request, I know abhi tak story bohot confusing lag rahi hain but am sure when u get the next part, you all will understand it, so keep reading the story, I will update ASAP

awww so sweet of u will be waiting for that movment when my wish will be fullfill... btw will be waiting for its next update story is so promising do update soon......