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sushfiza

@sushfiza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Priya was a teacher then why she was serving wine 😕
Present track was very nice happy family...
Cont soon... Thanks fr d pm.. 😊

Edited by 123fiza1 - 11 years ago

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

wonderful start dear

birthday celebration.then morning gapshap all nice.

flashback is different. Priya is totally in different role.

but aapne kaha tha ki she is an teacher before her marriage😲...

but yeh kya Ram ne paid karke Priya ko bachaya😕...matlab kya hai...

please continue soon..really it's a different concept.

thanks for PM😊

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sampa123

@sampa123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

vry interesting..pls cntinue soon.n thanks for pm..mujhe (cuty baby pihu) rayapi ki happy life boht sweet, cute n acchi lagi..

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RAYAFAN2

@RAYAFAN2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

really awsome plz cont soon

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SharmiRayaBasu

@SharmiRayaBasu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Totally different..jst loved it..thanks 4 pm..ple continue..

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

wow yaar great concept ..but ram and ONS..it hurts ..ok waiting fo the full story and I blved ram is now family man ..thank u for ur pm

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peeyara

@peeyara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

intresting story😊

Priya pehle waitress thi then teacher ya phir along wid teaching it was her part time job😕

i know my question will be answered in next update😊

will be waiting for next one and thanks for pm😊

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: tulshan1989
the whole story is totally different
raya met first time at los angles
great the present scenario is good
continue soon and thnx for the pm

thanks for commenting😊, yes the story is very different from what I have written so far, RaYa met for first time in Las Vegas that too in a casino, pleasure is all mine

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sparkling_gems
Wowww what a fantastic start of a story. Ek dam jhakkas... lol ...Jaipur track ki memory taza ho gayi ... but in flashback u hanged the track for good... and pls dear dont ask ever, should u continue or not...u must continue...u write so brilliantly that i m in lovs with ur stories and characters totally... waiting for the next part already.

thanks for commenting😊, thanks for liking, am happy that u liked my other OS phir le aaya hoon, will update very soon, keep reading

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: chillpc
totally diffrnt trck...!!😊
nice stryline...!!!

priya servng wine...?? intrestng...
raya in los angles..
ram rescued her..lovely...

contn soon...
thnx fr the pm,,😊

thanks for commenting😊, yes this will be a complete different story, RaYa were in Las Vegas, pleasure is all mine, next part will come very soon