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Raya_some

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

this one is elegant ..beautifully described .. waiting for next part :) :)

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vironikajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Wow!! Fantastic start..Beautifuuly described..
Looks like another Masterpiece from ur side..hats off to ur imagination nd writting skills..
Very different nd interesting concept..
Cont soon nd thanx for pm..

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

superbly interesting, exquisitely classy and highly demanding, plz go ahead as am looking forward to read more, continue ASAP

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Advitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Nice start...intro s too good...interesting too continue soon thanks for pm

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sandhya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

nice start...nice description

please continue soon and thanks for PM😊

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SharmiRayaBasu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Super duper start with overperfect raya..waitting 4 next di..nd plzzz di end me raya ko ek rakho yaar plzz beg of u..aise dono ko alag maat karo..we cant tolarate thz :(

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Anjali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

absolutely fantastica concept.. really rita di from where u bring this awesome concepts and titles..? no matter what the ending will be i want to read this till the end bcoz after reading the first split i realized that the journey will be more beautiful then the destination.. looking forward for the next part...

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anupam_dil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Wow jaise naam waise poster for the os , very nicely started...I tought I would read once it is ended as it is mentioned suspense...per padlia ...very nice

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shreya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Wow superb start waiting for the next part looks like two head strong personalities falling in love

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Nairita Bala

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: D4BALH
Wow! It looks like some fantastic updates are coming in future. Awesome starting. Thankx a lot for this brilliently presented OS. Waiting 4 next part. (y)

Thanx , glad you loked it ! it will be little different where both of them will be influential persons in their own ventures

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