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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pinkjali

absolutely fantastica concept.. really rita di from where u bring this awesome concepts and titles..? no matter what the ending will be i want to read this till the end bcoz after reading the first split i realized that the journey will be more beautiful then the destination.. looking forward for the next part...


Thank You . Glad you liked it 😃 . their Journey will be a clash , will be sore! will be teary .. 😭 but will be of a will to stand strong till the end ..
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Thank You . Glad you liked it 😃
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Originally posted by: anupam_dil

Wow jaise naam waise poster for the os , very nicely started...I tought I would read once it is ended as it is mentioned suspense...per padlia ...very nice


Thank You . Glad you liked it 😃
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Awww Narita di its way batter then anything i just love the way u presented it RaYa r such classy personality a way diffrent then others yet also like other... but loving this sinioury... just awesome waiting for all next parts egarly this OS also gonna be super duper hit just like ur other once ... do post next soon... ...
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Hi Frenz ,

After showering so much love , to the split one ,here i present the second split of the OS . This is a Romantic Update 😳 something called Intensifying Romance of a husband and wife. My first try to write something intense. Though CENSORED 🤬 Version is Presented.

Your Comments are awaited.

Cheers ,

Nairita













Split 2

Mr and Mrs Kapoor ...

hello Sir .. Your..' ram stopped the revelation , by putting his finger on his lips and nodding a big firm No to the Manager. Priya grinned knowing the later consequences , Surely her husband is not in a mood to be in public with her. He need privacy. His Intent desires needs privacy, even her's too . Both of them were looking flawless that night. The men's eyes on her made Mr.kapoor more jealous. But not so sooner , Priya thought.

Ah ! Ram see it's Mexican cuisine today , let have a try. Your Favorite it is come.' She almost pulled ram. Stopping her , he asked , what was wrong with her. What should be , she wondered; it's just she is hungry , as simple as that. It was not simple as she was showing , She grinned . Knowing her naughty mischief's , he grinned back . Not again Priya , he whispered and lead her to the elevator.

With hands entwined they walked into the elevator. His room was booked in the topmost floor. It will take few seconds if the elevator doesn't halt in any other floor. Ram looked at Priya , who was checking mails in her Blackberry. Ram always get irritated whenever she peeps into her phone when they used to be private dates and this Date is more private as it was their 5th Anniversary . Both their families wanted to celebrate their anniversary , but they postponed it by day giving lame excuses.

Ram took her phone in raven's speed . arey' she said asking him to give the phone back. No ways was the oblivious answer from the man. While they fought over a phone the elevator reached it's destination. come' he almost snatched Priya from the elevator and headed to his Suite. He commanded his lady to close her eyes.

same surprise , I know about it .. same cakes , wine , candles , curtains...' A sudden jerk took her inside the room. Pinning her to the wall, Ram whispered back to her , it's your fault that you are looking so ...' He looked into her eyes with his desires for her.

what ? I am looking what .. complete it Ram.' Priya said looking straight in Ram's eyes... is it Hot that you want to say.'

nah! Calling you Hot , will be a disgrace, it's elegant, glamorous, exquisite beauty , over flown with desire for me .' Smiling he said to his wife...

Don't embarrass me Ram.' She said with her eyes fixed down on the floor.

don't use the word again Priya , I am not embarrassing you . There is no place for the word , between us. I have every right to flaunt you and vice versa. So never use that again. And I can't stay away from you any more.' He slowly moved more towards her.






Priya was mesmerized by the intent blaze of desire in his eyes. He tantalizingly brushed his mouth against her cheeks , moving down to her ear lobes he kissed her softly. She was shifted to another world , her excitement level rocketed to another world, With eyes closed her breathes became faster. He smiled like a proud warrior who just won the war of desire over his wife. He softly removed the earrings followed by the necklace that she was wearing, and slipped them into his coat's pocket.

The man went back where he left her sinking ...As He took her mouth in a demanding kiss she moaned at the erotic slide of his tongue taking the last of the strength from her knees. His hands sank into her hair, his grip was painful as he held her fast and kissed her as he'd never been kissed her before. Priya kissed him back, clutching the front of his shirt; her response to the explosive chemistry was as fierce as his. When he lifted his head, she opened her eyes in shock and tried to focus, only to feel the warmth of his breath on her throat.

do you think I was embarrassing you? I would have embarrassed you if I would have kissed you right infront of the everyone in the marriage hall. Do you know how much self control is needed to keep out from my irresistible wife?' He growled the words against her skin, his hands sliding confidently down her back to the base of her spine. She closed her eyes again as she panted for air.

With a soft moan, Priya tore his shirt and his hands covered hers, completing the task with efficiency as his mouth found hers again. His kiss was urgent and demanding and she answered that demand with her own. She slid her arms around his neck and rose on her toes to try and get closer, She just wanted this wild, delicious excitement to continue for ever.

Without taking his mouth from hers, Ram scooped her up swiftly and carried her across to the enormous bed. Still kissing her, he deposited her on the centre of the satin cover and came down over her, the weight of his powerful body sending her pulse rate flying.

Somehow he'd managed to dim the lights in the room and a soft glow came from the illuminated glass balcony; the melancholy silence outside noted the privacy of the master's suite. In the intimacy , it was just the two of them. Nothing but breathing and heartbeats as he kissed her with relentless expertise. And he gave her no time to think , reason or falter.

As Ram rested his head on Priya's shoulder, her heart hammered against her chest and she was lost in the world he had created, a world where there was just the two of them, a world where he protected her and kept her safe. He tugged at the silk bedspread and covered them both, even though the evening was warm.

It was not the first time they loved each other so intensely claiming every inch of each other , but Ram , never fail to make her shiver and feel fresh. His strong hand stroked her back gently, warming her, calming her, and she knew that he had guessed that her trembling had nothing to do with the temperature of the room.

When the wild, crazy storm had passed and her mind had cleared, she was faced with the stark truth. The mails , the messages from Mona all flashed back in her mind . She promised herself not to get physical with her husband till the case gets over. He is a suspect , she along with her team was doing a sting operation on The Ram Kapoor , the results are still unknown.

She hadn't slept with her impossibly sexy husband , but with her Husband cum enemy.

Ram looked at the woman lying in his arms and knew she wasn't asleep. She was too still for that. Stroking her hairs , he asked , hungry?'

Ram I need my phone , I have to reply back to some urgent mails please.' She requested her husband. Unwillingly , Ram gave back the phone , with little disappointment he sat up, wrapping around the house gown he sat on the sofa , with the phone to order dinner for them. should I order something or you will order for you.' Disappointment and disagreement was crystal clear in his voice.

mails can be answered tomorrow Priya . Your husband is disappointed.' Priya's brain hammered her back. It was very natural for a man to react disappointingly if the wife asks to do work just after the sweet , crazy yet wild love making. She kept the phone on the side deck , and sat up covering herself. I am sorry she said extending her one hand in the air she welcomed ram in a hug. Like an arrogant child Ram dialed the number and Priya found him talking with the room service ordering dinner for them. She knew the last surprise from him too , there should be something for her in the changing room. She wrapped the silk sheet around and walked to the changing room. As guessed there was a gift wrapped parcel waiting for her.

She found a red Night Gown , for her. A two piece . the inner piece went down to the knees while the gown covers her perfectly, preserving her for the master only. She let the silk cover go, what she knew that the last piece of fabric was heaped on the floor. She took the first piece of the night suit , but her husband twisted her hand behind and within a moment , she ended in his arms, he hugged her taking her in him , his hand travelled to the end of her spine. Her hands trailed into his head , As they breath fast again, Ram bit her neck . Ouch ! she uttered ... in response to his erotic torments. With her eyes closed her voice escaped , Raam.. room service will be here anytime.'

who ordered Dinner , it's your part not mine , don't you remember that . now stop talking or else I will make sure you cant even moan tonight .' his husky voice warned her. They hardly remember how they ended to the shower chamber from the changing room. Ram pushed the door of the behind them and inside the shower chamber turned into their private love chamber. From many more to come , they made love for the second time that night.

Priya came out dressed in her new night suite , sat by Ram . he draped her with his arms, and made her slip to him. Making a choice , she dialed for the dinner. Healthy dinner . Ram was not happy with the healthy diet. He pouted his lips in disagreement.

no ways ! I am not going to order those high trans fat diet for you no ways. If you blackmail me , then I will order them to open up my suite too. As simple as that!' the mistress took the charge over the master this time. While ram sat like an arrogant kid , losing the call to his mistress . The lady patted his back , like a warrior queen.

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After the wildest romantic night , the sweet morning stepped into their life. Priya , is a , hardcore professional person. She walked into the room , after shower draping in her cotton saree. Before leaving the room , he eyes went back to her handsome husband who was sleeping peacefully content with all the memories from the last night.

I am sorry Ram , relations are at it's place , and my profession is ahead of everything. My positions asks for high social responsibility and if you are guilty you should be punished , I just pray my team came up with the wrong information this time.' Priya said to herself. She left the room , with the overcast of tension and agony.

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Few days back ,

Priya kapoor's right hand, Mona Ganguly , dashed into the channel head quarter . Though she was stopped by the security , from meeting Priya as madam was having lunch with her husband , in private. Private word holds a special place in Priya's life. The Love birds gets cozy , whenever they use the word Private it was not at all private from the world.

Mona , knocked at the door, priya looked at the door , shifting her eyes from her husband, she thought who must have so much courage to interfere in her private time. Ram , who was leaning on the couch , sat straight , asking his wife if she has not alarmed the staff about their private time. Nodding a yes , priya stood up to open the door as the visitor kept on banging on the door , the frequency increased with every second.

Little disappointed , the man wore back his coat , he brushed his hand through his hairs and was ready to leave. Mercury of priya raised too. After a long time , she was seeing her husband who just came back after a month stay in Auckland.

Priya opened the door , she was not in a mood to forgive even Mona , who is her most favorite employee. Rejecting her plea to hear once , Priya paced to her chair. Ram briefed a hug to his wife and kissing softly on her hair he left the cabin.

ma'am if it was not urgent , I would have not done the dare to inrrupt your Private Lunch with Sir.' Mona said closing the door behind her.

how dare you Mona , have I given you permission to enter my Room. My husband came down directly from airport to meet me , to spend some time with me , and you just spoiled it ! do you even feel what blunder you have done.' Priya , or best to say Madam Priya spoke to the loudest of her pitch.

I know ma'am. But I am your student. From you only I have learnt everything and you only say ma'am that if anything important regards interest of the country comes , it should get the first priority .' Mona said ..

what you have show me...' Priya said in a soft voice.

Ma'am it is something against Sir. R u sure you want to take this up !' Mona surprised Priya ...

if it is against ethics , I will not let my Husband go even without punishment. Show me what you have.' Priya sat on the chair ... and moved her eyes on the papers and then through the recording , that Mona , got in her camcorder. investigate further .. do a sting operation . choose the team , I will approve it ! But keep it on mind that it should remain very private. It should not get leaked to other new channels. Kapoors are very powerful they can change the every little thing in few hours and if my husband comes out to be guilty , I will make sure he gets punished .' Priya sighed leaning back to her chair ...

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Priya walked into her private suite , and waited for her team to come up with the latest development , which will prove her husband either innocent or guilty.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: leena04

Intro
Awww Narita di its way batter then anything i just love the way u presented it RaYa r such classy personality a way diffrent then others yet also like other... but loving this sinioury... just awesome waiting for all next parts egarly this OS also gonna be super duper hit just like ur other once ... do post next soon... ...




Thank You :-) next part is posted .. do read and comment :-) will wait for your comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful update nairita...
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words are less to describe hw much i loved it...
Romance and duty are blended beautifuly...
Priya is a lovable wife as well as strict proffessional person at d same time...
Unique story...
Waiting to read more ...
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Superb..nice..pls giv more of their Gud moments..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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the update was fantastic
full of raya romance and
some suspense elements also included
continue soon thanx fore the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thx for the pm
Superb one.
Priya on a mission interesting..

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