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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: vironikajain
Nice start nd very different concept...
Both Ram nd Priya's characters re very well defined nd beautifully shaped up..
Loved the way story progressed from their first meet as a stranger to now living together in a house like frnds..
Cont soon..
Thanx for pm..

thank you so very much for liking the concept, as usual was apprehensive at first, nevertheless hope u all like will like the other parts as well, will definitely continue, my pleasure and keep reading😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: shavii

aapko aise kyun laga i wont like it 😲 am i so bad😭

no not at all, I was just saying that I was little scared that whether u all will like it or not, just that, plz don't take otherwise, am not saying anything personally

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: chillpc
Love this os...
Superb storyline...

Contn soon...
Thnx fr the pm...

thanks for liking it, my pleasure, I will continue soon😊

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: lpsakshi
wow nice start continue

thanks for commenting

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

no not at all, I was just saying that I was little scared that whether u all will like it or not, just that, plz don't take otherwise, am not saying anything personally

oye i am not ekta's cv jisse tum darna chaiye common yaar i liked it and waiting for next part😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: sandhyasn
nice concept and I like the title
love priya's character...loved her simplicity...
Ram's intro nicely described...
don't allow Priya to stay in any hostel...I want raya relations should be grown up...
please continue dear...soon
thanks for PM😊

thanks for liking the concept and title, actually that was the toughest part of writing, I hope I can justify with the title, let's see kya hota hain RaYa ke beech me, continue to read, my pleasure😊

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: shavii

oye i am not ekta's cv jisse tum darna chaiye common yaar i liked it and waiting for next part😊

good one😆, but seriously am not afraid of you particularly, am afraid of myself actually every time I write something am apprehensive of that, may be I always feel that my readers want best from me that's why I get little shaky but after getting such good responses from them am at ease now

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Sharmirayanz
Hey very nice concept...too gud going..ple continue..

thanks for liking it😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: bpatil3
Nice beginning. Interesting..
Ab toh ram aur priya ke loveguru couple ki entry hui hai toh baazi palatnewali hai.
Beautiful beginning. Looking forward.
So finally ujjaini thx for the one third treat for the week. Ab yakeen ho gaya ur mood is alright.
Ok COOl.

thanks for liking, yes loveguru ki entry toh ho gayi hain, ab dekhte hain kya hota hain, tumhe thanks kehene ki zaroorat nahi hain, its my pleasure, mood toh puri tarah se theek nahi hua hain but yes am OK, am trying to live with that😊