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Posted: 12 years ago
part 3

awww awesome update Sagar bhai its too gud deari loved how Ram has fallen foer her in his first slight woh kehte hain na love at first slight too dearmy yaar & awesome... hope he confesses his love for her by tonight only... know its not easy but still want it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 4
awww awesome too gud lovely update it is yaar i so loved it what to say to u Ram loves Priya so purly truly from heart... & they even shred a moment of their love with each other too gud... but ab Priya kahan chali gayi do she lovd Ram or not well will get to know in next part so moving...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 5

awww awesome finally Ram find out Priya too gud so Priya left Ram as she thought what they did was wrong but i felt if RaYa had confessed their love this won't be happen but at the end all is well when end is well... happy ending... do write more will love to read from u...
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Posted: 12 years ago
what an amazing update with a beautiful ending ...loved it to the core...thanks a ton.. will look forward to read more..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sinalbest

Oye isse bekar bolte hai..to accha kya hota hai..😲..
This is too good.. Damn goog yaar..👏
Isliye itna bhav kha rahi thi,,😉..
Seriously its amazing..👏👏

@vironika: oho madam, u too love shayari n all...another common thing between us
itna accha likha hai par phir bhi itne nakre dikharahi thi aap
it is awesome, i will copy ur liness n include in my collection 😊, whether u mind it or not 😆
@sagar: meri friend ko itna pareshan kiya, very bad😡
but end result was good 😉 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow it was beautiful, loved it,😊
sorry i'll comment in hindi:
uttam, ati uttam, pura os ek saath padh dala, bahut adhbut tha
appki hindi bahot acchi hai, 😊
u shld write in hindi only, it was superb
(sorry pura hindi mai likhna, mere liye impossible hai, toh hindi aur english combo se kaam chalana padega 😆 😆 😆)
but it was indeed very very good os 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vironikajain


Haan haan right.. 😛
Tu humesha bich mein sab ko kyun le ata hai..isliye mein kuch nhi kar pati..kyunki meri wajah se kisi or ka loss nhi hona chahiye 😔 par iska badla mein zarur lungi yaad rakhiyo.. 😛 😆

Dekhte hai... 😉 Har kisi mein itni himmat kaha ki mjhse jeet sake..😎
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04

part 2

awww awesome so RaYa were met Priya in seasons first rain which become thier most lovely moment awww its awesome i really loved the way u discribed it was really beutiful all the emotions were great just mind blowing i say too gud... 10/10 for this update loved it ...

Thanks for the wonderful comment.. 😊😛
So happy to get 10/10 marks..😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04

part 3

awww awesome update Sagar bhai its too gud deari loved how Ram has fallen foer her in his first slight woh kehte hain na love at first slight too dearmy yaar & awesome... hope he confesses his love for her by tonight only... know its not easy but still want it...

Thanks for the wonderful comments.. 😊😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04

part 4
awww awesome too gud lovely update it is yaar i so loved it what to say to u Ram loves Priya so purly truly from heart... & they even shred a moment of their love with each other too gud... but ab Priya kahan chali gayi do she lovd Ram or not well will get to know in next part so moving...

Thanks for the wonderful comments.. 😊😛

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