OS*Pehli Barish*updated Part-5 pg-37 - Page 35

Originally posted by: leena04

part 5

awww awesome finally Ram find out Priya too gud so Priya left Ram as she thought what they did was wrong but i felt if RaYa had confessed their love this won't be happen but at the end all is well when end is well... happy ending... do write more will love to read from u...

Originally posted by: zeylanica

what an amazing update with a beautiful ending ...loved it to the core...thanks a ton.. will look forward to read more..

Originally posted by: peeyara

@vironika: oho madam, u too love shayari n all...another common thing between us

itna accha likha hai par phir bhi itne nakre dikharahi thi aap

it is awesome, i will copy ur liness n include in my collection 😊, whether u mind it or not 😆

@sagar: meri friend ko itna pareshan kiya, very bad😡

but end result was good 😉 😆

Originally posted by: peeyara

@vironika: oho madam, u too love shayari n all...another common thing between us

itna accha likha hai par phir bhi itne nakre dikharahi thi aap

it is awesome, i will copy ur liness n include in my collection 😊, whether u mind it or not😆

@sagar: meri friend ko itna pareshan kiya, very bad😡

but end result was good😉😆

Thank u 😊 ofcourse u can copy it.. 😆
Haan bahot pareshan kiya mujhe iss sagar ne ab hum dono milke isse pareshan karenge.. 😉 😆

Originally posted by: sinalbest

Dekhte hai...😉Har kisi mein itni himmat kaha ki mjhse jeet sake..😎

Ok..will see 😉

Originally posted by: peeyara

wow it was beautiful, loved it,😊

sorry i'll comment in hindi:

uttam, ati uttam, pura os ek saath padh dala, bahut adhbut tha

appki hindi bahot acchi hai, 😊

u shld write in hindi only, it was superb

(sorry pura hindi mai likhna, mere liye impossible hai, toh hindi aur english combo se kaam chalana padega 😆 😆 😆)

but it was indeed very very good os 👏

Originally posted by: sinalbest

Meri itni himmat ki mein isse pareshan kar saku..😲ulta isne mjhe pareshan kiya..😭😉..

Whole day wait karvaya vo bhi tab jab update ready tha already.. 12-13 hrs back..😉

Hawww 😲 tu humesha mujhe pareshan karta hai.. 😆

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Thank u 😊 ofcourse u can copy it.. 😆
Haan bahot pareshan kiya mujhe iss sagar ne ab hum dono milke isse pareshan karenge.. 😉 😆

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Ok..will see 😉

Originally posted by: sinalbest

Juth mat bol..😭Mein akela tum do.. bahut na insaafi hai..😉

Koi baat nahi aa jao.. chun chun ke rpl karunga..😆😆

😆 😆