OS*Pehli Barish*updated Part-5 pg-37 - Page 32

Originally posted by: tulshan1989

fab update

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Hi Sagar as promised i m here with my lines:

tujhe paane ki aarzoo thi iss dil mein,

tujhe choone ki justju thi mann mein.

khamosh thi dil, tan thi madhosh,

jaane hum kaha kho gaye.

ruki thi dhadkan, thami thi saans,

jaane kaha hum beh gaye.

hontoan ki hasi,chehre ki khamoshi,

main bhi teri chahat ki pyaasi.

dil ki maani, dil ki suni,

jaanina wo galat tha, ya sahi.

hosh mein jab aaye , dil toota tha,

dimaag gehri soch mein baitha tha.

dil-dimaag se sangharsh kar raha tha,

galti ka ehsaas tha, ya wo darr tha?.

seema ya bandhan, kya humne toda,

zindagi ne humein kiss aur moda.

kismat kaha le humein choda,

wo pyar hi tha na jisne humein joda?

tujhe dhoond rahi thi meri aankhein,

jab tak door the,na jhapki thi palke.

ummed ki leher thi, asha ki kirnein,

koi aur chah rahi na tumhe paake.

wahi samay tha, wahi baarish thi,

tumse milne ki aas thi.

wahi jagah tha, jaha tum mili thi,

tumse meri har khushi judi thi.

baarish hi toda tha maryada,

baarish hi bandha hai bandhan mein.

tab bhi dil juda tha, aaj bhi hai,

phir kyon wo galat tha, ye sahi?

na jaanu mein sahi ko,na samjhu mein galat kya,

na ye sach hai,na wo jhooth tha.

bas tha to sirf pyar aur mohabbat.

ab ye sahi hai,tab kyon galat tha?

sochte reh jaavu mein,

sahi path pe chalu mein.

yahi thi meri kahani,

reet hai wahi purani.

Hope i am able justify the update sagar, like to hear from u.

Originally posted by: Sharmirayanz

Amazing u r...jst woww...take a bow dear...fantastic journey with ur os...nd i respect priya's decision..bcoz i know i m 4m thz generation..bt i love i respect thz indian tradition..nd i also apply thz in my life too..very gud to see ur respect ur love 4 indian tradition...nd 4 thz if any1 call me tht u r backdated..toh i dnt mind..jst dnt care..waiting 4 a new writting with ur lots of love nd respect

Originally posted by: bpatil3

👍🏼 rightly said.

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

super end sagar .

.super story too..

and waiting for more from u ..

Originally posted by: Dsudipa

very emotional update, i had tear in my eyes when read it, u written very well & perfect ending loved it thx 4 PM Sagar (is baar not ji ok😉)

Originally posted by: sinalbest

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Ahh.. u ready with speech..😉😆

Btw I like to read long comment ..😛...

Thanks for the comment..😛I m glad to read it..😛😛

Very well explained why they had seperated..👏👏👏

Abbey itna accha exam mein bhi explain karti hai kya..😉

Originally posted by: sinalbest

So u urself cleared ur doubt with this coment😉😆

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Tujhe har waqt mujhse koi na koi problem hoti hai na.. 😡 agli baar se sirf ek word ka comment karungi.. 😉 😆
Yeh last time hai padle.. 😛
Nhi exam mein ram - priya ke bare mein question nhi hote na.. 😉 🤣