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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-1
Sitting in a black shining BMW most handsome eligible industrialist with chocolate brown eye full of cheer,joy,shining black hair making him more attractive with a mysterious smile on his face thinking,"After long 5 month trip to USA finally he is back to his own city ,to his friends ,to his workplace which makes him happy.One more thing coming to his mind is "Ashiyan'.He desperately wants to be there.After all it was long 5 months he had not seen any member of his family which he made himself."
While thinking all this the car came to a halt and sudden realization of arrival at workplace came to his mind.Before he could open the door Raju one of the security guard of Kapoor Industry came running and open the door.With much obligation he said,"Welcome back Sir and a very good morning.'
Ram- Raju Da u r a darling u never be late to open the door.BTW how are u and thank u for keeping my workplace safe and fine.
Raju-Sir everythingh is allright. your workplace is my temple,how could i let it be unsafe ? With a hearty laugh Ram entered the kapoor industry making raju think that,"What a big heart the man got ?May god give him all happiness in his life." All the employes greeted ram .Before entering his own cabin ram entered the cabin left to his.After opening the door
Ram-Hei "Barbie' darling where r u ? U did not come to welcome me.This is not fair.My eyes were searching for my beautiful lady.Barbie who is sitting in the chair facing toward the window said,"And is that fair to avoid your beautiful lady whole 5 months.
Ram- Wo wo wo wait my sweety who told u that i avoided u ? Barbie-Asmall child can tell that no single call nd msg from the daqy u gone am very much angry with u.That much love u have for me ? Ram-Wo my baby is angry with me ? Hona v chaiye mene galti jo ki he itnibadi.But jkya karun dear kam itna tha ki rat ko room me ate hi sojata tha.Can not my baby forgive this poor guy for this mistake ?Ram made such a puppy face that barbie could not take anymore and ran to ram and hugged him.
Ram-Where is my alooparatha ?
Barbie-Sab ready he dear,tumhare liye khas banaya he aloo ka paratha with extra ghee mutter paneer gajar ka halwa and special lassi.
Ram-Wow aj itne dino ke bad mere manpasand ka khana milega mujhe Vikram who was standing near the door and watching all this convo between the duo said,"Oye mujhe vulgaya kya ? Aja mere bhi gale mil le ar hume v party me samil karba de.Ram turned to see his best friend and hugged him
Barbie- So i will not interfere both of u.Everything is ready on ur table u both go and enjoy i will see u latter . After their breakfast vik said-Ram neha ne tumhe bahat miss kia usse to pata v nhi ki tu aj anewala he wo aj ashiyan gayi he chal wohn chalte hen ar sabko surprise dete hen wese v tu v to wohn jana chahta hoga na.
Ram- Fantastic idea chal sabko surprise karte hen, mene bahat gift layen he wohn lene k bandobast karde.Wese tere liye v kuchh laya hun chal apna bayan hat age badha ar ankhe band kar. Vik-Mujhe ? wese me tujhse kuchh lene k liye mana nhi karunga but ankhe band kyon me kya tera girlfriend hun jo itna romantic banraha he ? Neha dekhegi na hum dono ki band bajadegi.samjhe bachhu.
Ram-Oye chup kar ar jo bolta hun bo kar.fir vikram jese hi hat age karta he ram ek box se silver black combo ka ek rolex watch nikal k use pehna deta he.Vik ankhe khol k dekhta he uske ankhose ashu nikalate hen wo jake ram ko gale milta he.
Ram- oye chal itna senty mat ban ar chal ashiyan chalte hen. dono wohn se ashiyan k liye nikaljate hen. Scene shifts to other side.

Neha-Hello priya,are you free now ?Actually am going to ashiyan, sochha sayad tum jana chahogi ?
Priya-Wo no neha am very busy today.Av ek surgery he ar uske bad hospital k board meeting bhi he sare doctors ko bulaya he to mujhe jana padega.Wese dodino k bad panchi ka birthday he na,
Neha-Tumhe yad he ?
Priya-Ofcourse, me panchi ka birthday bhulsakti hun bhala ? Use mene hi to apne hato se ashiyan me laya tha.
Neha-Kya fayda,tum to usdin panchi k birthday party me nhi anewali,sab kitna miss karte hen priya tumhe pata he.Kisike v party me nhi jati,abhitak ram se bhi nhi mile ho,akhir kabtak ese vegte rahoge priya kabtak ?
Priya-Please neha don't start again,mujhe milne na milne se farak nhi padta me ashiyan k har member se pyar karta hun ar us pyar ko dikhane k liye mujhe koi party me aneki jarurat nhi.
(madam ko pata nhi age chale unhe ashiyan ki ek member se sabse jada pyar hone wala he)
Neha-Ok ok don't get hyper,ye batao isbar gift me kya sochha he har bar to kuchh hatke gift lati ho hn ?
Priya-Isbar bhi kuchh special he.
Neha- Ok, then see u later.
At ashiyan ram entered with lots of gift along with vikram.A long smile plastered on his face.
Ram-Hello everyone,your ram is here and where are ram's darlings and dear ?
All looked at ram with surprise with neha.Ram hugged neha and gave her a present.He took blessings from billo massi, raghu chacha and all the elderly members of ashiyan.
Billo massi-Are munna kitne din hogaye tujhe dekhe hue ankhe tarash gayi thi beta aja mere gale lagja.Ram hugged her.All the children gathered arround their ram bhaiya and gave him kisses.Ram gave all of them their gifts.All of a sudden a sweet charming voice came from backside.
Voice-Hei lamu(actually ramu) ap to panchi ko bhul hi gaye.Lo me apse kati.Sweet smile created on ram's face.
Ram-Ole ole itni cute princess ko koi bhulsakta he bhala.
Ram 4 sal l panchi ko apni godh me leta he ar uske dono galo me kiss karte hue use ek gift deta he.
Ram-Dekhi tumhare ramu ne apne princess k liye kya gift laya he.Pnchi opened the gift and smiled to see a barbie doll.
Ram-Pasand aya princess ko.Panchhi noded her head in positive direction give kiss on ram's cheek.
Ram-Hei neha after 2 days my princess will be 5 na ?To party ka intezam hua ya nhi ?After all its my princess pnchi's birthday ?Kyon panchi ?Panchi giggles.
Ram- To panchi apko is sal gift me kya chahiye gift me ?
Panchi-Lamu kya sachh me me jo mangunga wo mujhe doge ?To suno mujhe is sal gift me pliya di chahiye.
Ram- What ?
Panchi-Han, mujhe isbar apna birthday cake pliya di ar ap k sath katna he nhi to me apna birthday nhi manaungi.Ram looked at neha helplessly.
Neha-Ram tin dinse panchhi yehi jid pakad k bethi he ki use priya chahiye party me ab kya karun /Priya to party me nhi ayegi tumhe to pata he aj tak wo kisi bhi party me nhi ayi he.
Ram neha ar vikram k sath balcony me chalajata he bat karne k liye.
Ram-Neha ye priyahe kis mitti ki bani ?Uske ashiyan k liye attitude dekh k to lagta he wo bahat achhi hogi but uski behaviour kuchh ajeeb lagta he.Wo ese sabse nai nai mujhse bhagti kyon he matlab avoid kyon karti he,usko problem kya he yar /Tum to uske sath itne din rahi ho janti hogi use.
Neha-Nahi ram wo sirf tumse nhi bhagti wo har nayi risto se bhagti he.Use jaldi kisike upar trust karne me problem he,usme uski koi galti nhi apne jindegi me wo jin kadbi chijo ka samna ki he usko bhulna kibhi insan k liye asan nhi he.Wo dil ki bahat achhi he ram bahat achhi,tum usse miloge to tumhe pata chalega.
Ram-Milegi tab na.
Vikram-Ha ha me neha ka pati hoke v us se do bar bhi thik se bat nhi ki ar tu to thehra naya banda dekhte hain wo shubh muhurat kab ayega /Ayega bhi nhi.
Neha-Stop it vikram, tumhe majak sujhraha he problem ka hall dhundo ki kese panchhi ko manaye.
Ram-Me panchhi ka dil nhi todna chahti wo bhi uske janam din par.Uske liye me kuchh bhi karunga agar priya ko lana pade tab bhi.
Vikram-But mahasaya ye adbhut kam apse hoga kese /
Ram- Nothing is impossible for ram kapoor,both of you just wait and watch.(i love this line of ram sir)
Ram-Hei bachha party agar aplogo ko party me priya di chahiye to mere plan k hisab se kam karna padega.Ok.All of them said yes to ram.
Ram smiled and thought himself,"So,Miss.Sharma looking forword to see you."
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice..
interesting so lets see how THE RAM KAPOOR mana lete hai apni Priya ko
Edited by bpatil3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update.. 👏 who is this barbie??
Loved the ashiyan wala part nd little panchi is soo cute...
Dekhte hai ram kaise lata hai priya ko party mein..
Cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice and interesting Please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry for late reply, nice part, interesting too, am loving their characterisation, and I guess as the story progress we get to see more of their character's side, just one suggestion to Priya, I know u r hurt and don't trust on relation but yehi relation aapko Ashiyaan tak laye hain, u can hide the emotion but can't sidelined it, continue plz ASAP and plz if possible then PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jineejiggs

Sorry for late reply, nice part, interesting too, am loving their characterisation, and I guess as the story progress we get to see more of their character's side, just one suggestion to Priya, I know u r hurt and don't trust on relation but yehi relation aapko Ashiyaan tak laye hain, u can hide the emotion but can't sidelined it, continue plz ASAP and plz if possible then PM me

Yes jeeni u are right about priya but ye nahi he ki wo puri trh risto se bhagti he but ye ki uski mental halat esi he ki wo kisi bhi riste pe instantly jakin nahi karpati uska dil bolta he par dimag mana karta he,usse bahat hichhkichhahat me he,wo hamesha dil ar dimag me se jujhtirehti he ram hi he jo use is muskil se nikalega.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys i did not get enough comments regarding the update,so dont know iether i wil post futher or not.That only depends upon u all.Plz suggest iether i will post ya postpond.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please update dear Such a nice story Waiting to read it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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[s][/s]Part-3
Dodin bad panchhi ke janamdin ke subha ram yellow rose boucket ke sath ashiyan pahanchta he ar panchhi ko happy birthday wish kartahe.Uske bad panchhi ko apne sath ek mall me le jake ek pyari si dress kharidke lata he ar sath hi dhersare chocolates and icecreams bhi taki panchi wo sab apne dosto ko desake.Lot ne ke bad wo sabke sath milke breakfast karta he ar sam ko honewali party ke tayariya karta he.

Ram-Hei everyone listen to me,sab ko plan ke bare me yad he na ?Panchi you know tumhe kya karna he ?Pnchhi giggles and nodded yes.To me abhi office jata hun kuchh kam karta hun samko party karenge ok.Ar ram wohn se office k liye nikal jata he.

Subhe se lekar afternoon tak priya bar bar ashiyan me phone lagarahi he taki panchhi ko wish karsake but koi phone uthanahi raha,wo neha ko bhi call karrahi he but wo bhi switch off araha he.Wo wohn ja bhi nhi sakti to,kam me dhyan bhi nhi deparahi hogi.Ese sochhte sochhte sam hojati he,to priya last time ke liye neha ko phone karti he.Isbar neha phone uthaleti he,plan jo he sabka karna to padta na.

Neha-Hn priya bolo.Kya bataun yar aj bahat bussy tha phone me charge nhi tha abhi dekha ar charge pe bithaya.Tumne panchhi ko wish kia ?Priya jo bhi bolnewali thi ye sunke chup hogayi kya puchhegi,ulta uskeliye sawal agaya.

Priya-Nahi neha subha se phone karrahi hun wohn koi uthanahi raha ,tum plz abhi panchi ko phone doge kya me use wish karna chahti hun.
Neha-Ok ek mint me use bulati hun,Wo phone pe hi jorse panchhi ko bulati he but actually sab use gher ke bethe hue honge,ar fir panchi phone leke hallo bolegi.
Priya-Happy birthday to my doll,happy birth day to u.Dusri worse koi jawaw nhi milta he to priya ko ajeeb lagta he.Kya hua panchhi priya di se naraj ho kya,sorrybaby me subha wish nhi karpayi,apne priya di ko maf nhi karoge ??Achha suno me tumhare liye ek pyara sa tofa layi hun jab tum cake katlogi tab wohn pe tumhe tumhari gift milayegi,,ab to smile karo ar mujhe ek pyari si kissi do ???

Panchi-Pliya di,me apni birthday party nahi manaunga.Ar mujhe koi gift nhi chahiye.
Priya-Kya kyon nhi manaogi ?Abhi tak naraj ho mujhse ???Panchhi said no.To kyon nhi gift chahiye tumhe ?
Panchhi-Kyon ki mujhe ap chahiye ??Mujhe apke sath birthday manana he cake katna he,isbar to koi bhi nhi he na lamu he na viklam bhaiya azad bhi chota he me kiske sath dance karungi ???Please pliya di isbar party me aona ??Mujhe gift nahi chahiye,agar ap nhi aogi to me aj khana nhi khaunga na hi birthday party me cake katunga na kuchh bhi karunga.Itna bole panchhi neha ko phone dedeti he.

Neha-Dekha priya mene bola tha na tumhe ki panchhi kya jid leke bethi he.Hum ne sari tayari karke rakhi he but wo man nahi rahi.Tum aj party me ati kyon nhi,wese ram bhi nhi araha to panchhi bahat sad he plz uske liye sahi thode der ki to bat he fir chalejana.
Priya-Ummm ok me aungi but sirf panchhi ke liye,use boldena uski priya di uske liye kuchh bhi karegi.

After the phone convo finished neha gave high five to ram and panchhi hugging ram said,"thank u lamu u r d best".Sam ko sab ready hoke garden me jahn party ki arrengement hui thi wohn jate hen.Ram bhi panchhi ko leke nichhe ata he jo ki white frock me bilkul pari jesi dikhrahi hoti he.Fir ram sabko bolta he ki jab tak priya nhi ajati tabtak wo ar vikram andar rehte hen jab priya ajayegi tab hum bahar ayenge ar wo bapas bhi nahi japayegi.
Neha-Ram.ye sahi to he na ?Priya bahat sensitive he yar use dhoka pasand nhi agar wo gussa hogayi to !!Me use hurt nhi karna chahta.
Ram-Chill neha kuchh nhi hoga.Agar kuchh hoga to me samval lunga mujhpe bharosha rakho.
Kuchh der bad priya ati he,pink and white combination ka saree me uske kalle kalle curly hair ek side pe inup hua he no make up sibaye ek white binndi ar ankho me kajol looking like dazzling ruuby in the platinum ring.Ram jo ki parde ke pichhe khada hoka dekhraha tha,pehlibar priya ko dekh ke kuchh ajeeb sa sukun feell karta he dil me.priya ki ankho ki gehrayi,jo bahat kuchh bolne ko tadaprahi ho,uski ghane bal jiski gehrayi wo me koi bhi madhos hojaye.uske simplicity.uski pichhe jhuk ke smile karna sab kuchh ram ko pehli najar me hi bhagayi.Uske labo pe apne ap smile ajata he.
Priya-Wo my lil pari panchhi happy birth day my darling.Wo panchhi ko galle milke kissi karti deti he,bad me sab elder members se blessings leti he.Panchhi tum apna gift nhi dekhogi ?
Panchi-Kahan he pliya di ?
Priya gate ke pas khade hue kuchh logo ko instructions deti he to,wo log ek bada sa glass bowl jo ki ek parde se dhanka hua tha use leke ate hen.Wo bowl itna bada tha jise leke ane ke liye 6 logo ki jarurat thi.Sab surprised the.Priya panchhi ko parda uthane ke liye bolti he.Jab panchhi parda uthati he to khusi se chilane lagti he ar poppet ki tarah jump karne lagti heSab ke muu khule ke khule rehjate hen.Actually wo glass ki bowl plain nhi tha wo ek chota sa aquarioum tha jisme kariban 200 rangbirange machhli the starfish the turtles the pebbles,sea grasses the,bilkul chhota samundar..

Panchhi-Thank u thank u pliya di,i love u.Priya use gale lagate hue puchhti he tumhe pasand aya ??Panchhi use kissi deti hui bolti he bahat ar dono jorse hasne lagte he.Ram jo ki chup ke khada hua hota he ye dekh ke messmerised hojhata he,
Priya-To ab chale cake katne ?Panchhi ar sab log thoda hadbada jate hen.Priya ye notice karti he.Kya hua kisi ar ka intezar he kya ?
Neha-Actually priya bo kya he ki ?woo,wo.
Priya-Kya wo wo lagarakha he,chalo yar panchhi chalo cake katte hen.
Panchhi-Sorruy pliya di.Priya thoda confuse hojati he.Me sirf apke sath nahi apke ar lamu ke sath milke cake katungi.Lmu aona bahar.

Tabhi ram vikram ke sath bahar ata he silly sa smile leke.Priya bilkul stunned hoke khadi he.Uske ankho me kuchh der pehle chalkti hui pyarki chamak ki jagh gussa bhara pada he.
Ran-Hyy Mss.Sharnma am ram,nd handshake ke liye hat badhata he.Priya gusse se neha ke taraf dekhti he,neha to seedhe neeche ke taraf dekhne lagta he.
Priya-Ye sab kya he neha,tumne mujhse jhut bola.Tumhe pata he mujhe jhut se sakt nafrat he fir bhi,mene sochha tha duniya me atleast tum to mujhe dhoka nahi dogi but me galat tha.Ar ap log,ap log bhi usme samil the ?Bilu massi ap to samajhti he sab fir apne bhi is jht me samil hogayi ??
Neha-Priya meri bat to suno ?Hum ne ye sab panchhi ke liye kia plz meri bat to suno me tumhe hurt nhi karna chahti thi plz priya .
Bilu massi-Beta meri bat suno hum sab chahte the ki tum issal panchhi ke sath party me raho.Wo apne priya di ar ram ke sath cake katna chahti thi..
Priya-Sab apne apne wish ke hisab se sochhliya,koi mere bare me sochha he ?Me kya chahti hun ya nhi ?Mujhe kisi ke sath bhi party manani nahi he.Mene galati ki jo aj apsabki jhuti plan me faske yahn agayi.Ye bolke wo wohn se janewali hoti he ki ram pichhe se bolta he.
Ram-Ek min Mss.Sharma,apko jo bolna tha apne bol liya kindely ab humari bat sunengi ?
Priya-Me kisike bat sun ne ke liye forced nhi hun,art khaskar dhokebaj logo ke muu se kuchh sunns bhi nhi chahti.Apne ek choti si bachhi ki sahara liya ye plans banane ke liye ?How sick u are.
Ram-Sick kisko bola apne ?Me koi raste ka romeo nahi hun jo ladki patane ke liye faltu ki nautanki kare.Mene apni jindegi me bahat ladki dekhe hen,mere ajubaju me ghumte hen harroj,ye to me hun jo unkitaraf dekhta bhi nhi.,Me sharif insan hun ar ye sab charecter mere nahi he.Ap bina bat jane ek choti si bat ko kya rup diya he uska andaja bhi he apko ?Mujhe koi souk nahi he apse milne ka agar milne k liye me itna tadpraha hota to 4 sal nhi lagta am ram kapoor do mint nahi lagta apke biodatta pane ke liye ar apko mere samne khade karne ke liye but me wesa admi nahi hun.Apne apni gift dedi panchhi ko apko pata he jitni kareeb panchhi apki he utni meri bhi.usne mujhe kya gift manga tha apko pata he ?Usne apko manga tha use gift me ye chahiye tha to ye ki usko hum dono ke sath cake katna tha.Mere pas itne paise he ki duniya ki koi bhi chij me use kharid ke desakti hun but uski ye gift me paiso se nahi kharidsaktiar uske janamdin pe me use dukhi bhi nahi dekhsata tha.Isliye mujhe yesab karna pada,agar apko ye lafangagiri lagta he to sahi me lafanga hun.
Panchi-Pliya di lamu ka koi dosh nhi mera he,mene hi jid ki thi unse.Ap plz unpe gussa mat ho .Me cake nahi katunga,plz ap gussa mat ho .Wo ye bolte bolte ropadti he.
Priya jo itniderse chup thi wo panchhi ke ankho me anshu dekh ke sambhal nahi pati ar nichhe beth ke panchhi ko sinne se laga ke ropadti he.
Priya- Sorry beta am realy sorry,dont cry priya di tumhare sath jarur cake kategi.Chalo cake kato.Panchhi apni ankhe pochh ke ek hat me priya ki hat dusre me ram ki hat leke cake ke pas jati he priya ram ki taraf dekhti bhi nhi actually use bura feel horaha hoga ki usne bina bat ke itna hungama creat kia.Ram bhi chup hoga.Panchhi dono ke hat pakad ke cake kategi.Tabhi ram ka hat priya ke hat ko touch karegi,dono ek dusre ko dekhenge,ek ajeeb si feeling dono ko mehsoos hogi but dono fir dusri taraf dekhne lagenge.Pnchhi dono ko cake khilayegi ar bad me sabko cake ar chocolates bategi.Party me panchhi ke force karne par priya bachho ke sath dance karrahi hogi jorse haske unke sath khelrahi hogi,ar ram use durse hi dekhraha hoga,uski smile me jesi jadu sa he itna kuchh sunne ke bad bhi ram ko priya pe arahi guusa bilkul sant hochuka hoga.Kuchh der bad priya neha ke pas jayegi.
Priya-Sorry neha mujhe maf kardo ,mene tumhe bahat kuchh kehdiya.mujhe sachh me bahat gussa agaya,tumhe to pata he na me yesab jhut nahi sehpati,plz mujhe maf kardo.
Neha-Are its ok priya,me tumhari dost hun mujhpe tum gusa hosakti ho,am also sorry ki mene jhut bola but panchhi ke liye yesab kia.Agar tum sorry bolna chahte ho to ram se bolo,wo bilkul us type ke ladka nahi he,wo bahat simple he yar,tumne jo bola sayad use bura laga ho.
Priya-Han me abhi jake sorry bolke ati hun,uske bad hospital jana he wohn se phone aya he.
Neha-Ok.
Ram vikram ke sath khade hoke khana kharaha hota he,tabhi priya pichhe se ake khadi hui hogi.Kya bolegi kuchh samajh nahi prahi hogi,kese sorry bolegi ?kya reaction hoga ?Wo dheere se bolti he.
Priya-Mr.Kapoor,Ram mudta he ar priya ko dekhta he fir chup rehta he.
Priya-I,i am realy sorry mene bina bat jane apko itna kuchh boldia mujhe yesab nahi bolna chahiye tha am realy realy sorry.
Ram-Its ok Mss.Sharma,kabhi kabhi galatfemi hojata he.Me gussa nahi hun.Ar actually am also sorry mujhe bhi apko itna kuchh nahi bolna chahiye tha.
Priya-Nahi nahi its ok.
Ram-Then all good.Friends ?Esa kehke wo apna hat badhata he hand shake ke liye.
Priya-Mujhe der horahi he hospital jana he .Esa kehke wo wohn se chalijati he.

Ram surprised hoke wohn pe khada hoke rehta he,use samajh me nahi ata ki usne kya galat kaha ki priya esi ajeen tarikese chaligayi.


(Guys please mujhe is ff me achhi response nahi milrahe hain,agar aplogo ko achha nahi lagraha to bejhijak bolsakte hen,taki me ise postpond karsakun ya agar kuchh chahiye to sudhar saku respond milegi tabhi to likhne ki ichha hogi,mujhe patanahi chalraha he ki likhu ya nahi to plz respond kijiye ki me likhu ya band karun)
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Its a good story..plz do continue..😊

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