HUMSUFER- PART-13 & CONFESSION PART-A PAGE-38 and PART-B PAGE-39 - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

300

Views

61k

Users

40

Likes

580

Frequent Posters

jineejiggs thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Waiting for next part, update dear
jeena1993 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Thank u all for supporting i will deffinitely post next part but abhi am busy to agle 4-5 din ke andar post karne ki koshis karungi.
jeena1993 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#33
PART-3

Uss din rat ko ram sirf priya ke bare me hi sochhta raha,Ek pal me uski masumiyat khilkhilati hui hasi ar ek pal me uski gussa sab use ajeeb lagraha tha but use pata nahi chalraha tha inmese kansi bajh use majboor karrahethe uski bare me sochhne ke liye,kya ye sirf man ki behem he ya attraction ya kuchh ar.But wo apne ap ko samjhadiya ki ye kuchh attraction battraction nahi sirf uski beared behaviour hain nahi to ar kya hosakta he.(But sahab ji sahi kaha attraction nahi ye usse v badke chij he.)Agle din ram apne office me bussy raha kyon ki use bahat sare impertant deals crack karne the.

Ram-Hei vikram,wo delhi wali deal bahat impertant he iss ki meeting jaldi se jaldi fix karna he wese aj hi Mr.Sharma se bat karlete hain.

Vik-Yes ofcource,abhi phone lagata hun dont worry ye deal hamari hogi.Hello Mr.Sharma am vikram shergil from kapoor industry, i want to talk to u about the pharmacuticaldeal,it will be better if u talk to ram urself.

Mr.Sharma-Wo yes Mr.Shergil i want to talk to him.Vikram handed ram the phone.

Ram-Wo hello Mr.Sharma,am very intrested to team up with u and expand the pharmacutical business,this is a dream project for me i dont want any disturbance want it to be the best project for ever,So if u r intrested plz tell me so that we can start it officialy.

Mr.Sharma-I am very happy and excited too,deffinitely i want to team up with u ,it will not it will deffinitely a best project.I will go to mumbai soon then we can deal it officialy and can start the project.

Ram-Then congratulation,done ap yahn ajae fir hum ye suru karsate hen.

Mr.Sharma-Sure,i will be there soon,bye.

************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************

JO BHI HUA KYA BHUL HE MERI KYON ISKI MILI MUJHE SAJJA HE...wo ho ye itni subha subha kiski phone he,Irritate face karte hue priya apne mobile phone ko uthati he ar screen ko dekhte hue recieve karti he.

Priya-Hello katik tujhe ar koi bakt nahi milta itni shubha phone kia tujhe pata he na me der rat ko ati hun hospital se ab bol kya bat he ??

Kartik-Di di di meri pyari di mujhe bolne doge tab na,wese agar subhe phone nahi karti to apki ye pyari sio datt kese sunpati ar khuskhabri kese deti ?

Priya-Kya ?Kan si khuskhabri ar ye maska marna chod bata kya bat he ?

Kartik-Di mere exams ka result agaya he me higher firstclass me pass kia he ar mujhekoi bhi achhi university me addmission miljayegi,ar sabse badi bat iss bar me chhuti me delhi nahi apke pas jarahi hun.

Priya-Sach am so so happy,am so alone here comesoon mujhe compny miljayegi.Kab araha he ?

Kartik-Kal di chachu ne meri flight ticket book kardi he ar mahesh mujhe airport chodne chalega koi prob nahi hogi,u dont worry bas ap wohn airport pe pick karne ajana sam ke 4 baje,ok.

Priya-Ye koi puchhne ki bat he me pahanch jaungi,ek bat bata tujhe yhn rehne ki permission dedi Mr.Sharma ne?

Kartik-Han di wo change horahe hen why are u so rigid ab chodo na.

Priya- Change,ar wo bhi bo kabhinahi unka koi maksad hoga isme ar rahi bat chodne ki tumhe pata he kartik chodna bahat muskil he,leav it i dont want to spoil our mood with thease stupid topic,u come fir milke bahatt sari bate karenge.

*******************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
Sam ko ram ar vikram dono office ke bad vikram ke ghar jate hen.Neha sab ke liye coffee leke ati he ar sath me snacks bhi.

Ram-Yar neha ye tumhari dost priya sachh me koi mental hospital se ayi he,ajeeb harkate karti he kal mene hat milane ke liye hat badaya to bhag gayi jese me uske sath jabardasti karraha hun,crazy woman.

Neha-Ha ha ha so funny ram esa nahi he tum use jante hi kitna ho uski jagah par tum bhi hote to tum bhi ese hi behave karte samjhe.

Vikram-Wese tu kyon itni soch raha he uske bare me hn,sam se sirf ghuma firake uski bate puchhraha he,majna kya he hn ??Vikram neha ke taraf dekhe hasne lagta he.

Ram-Chup esi koi bat nahi usme jo the ram kapoor uske pichhe pade bas mujhe wo pagal lagi to bolraha tha,agar tumhe kuchh ar lagraha he to forgate it ok.Wo topic change kardeta he,actually wo priya ke bare me janne ke liye ye sab bolraha tha ar ulta passa uspe pada.

******************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************

Next day at 3.30 pm,priya apni gadi ke chabi purse se nikalti hui apne hospital ke receptionist ko bolti he,

Priya-Maria,plz Dr.Rastogi ko mera ye application de dogi me do din ke liye chutti chahti hun,i have to go am late plz do this for me.
Maria-Ok mam,wese do din ki chhuti matlab kuchh khas he wese apko chhuti leni chhaiye kabhi kabhi.Hasti hui priya hospital se nikalti he ar airport ki taraf rawana hoti he.

Agle taraf ram bhi apni ek meeting ke liye car leke nikaljata he,use late horaha hota he to wo thoda becchen sa horaha hota he,uparse ye mumbai ki traffic ghanto intezar karbati he.Jese hi green signal deta he wo jald hi gadi start karke nikalne lagta he tabhi uske samne achhanak se ek gadi ajati he,ar wo break dedeta he but fir bhi dono gadi apas me thoda takra jati he.Ram apne car se nikal ke samnewali gadi ki taraf jati he,us carse ek ladki nikal ke ati he jiska ball chehre pe dhaka hua hota he ar ram ko bina dekhe hi bolti he,-Apko sharam nahi ati gadi ese chalate hue agar kuchh hojata to do u have any responsibility ??Itni bat bolte hue wo apne bal ko side pe karti he.

Ram-Ap ??Miss.Sharma,i did not mean it am in hurry am so so sorry,apko chot to nahi lagi ???

Priya-Wo,Mr.Kapoor no no mujhe chot nahi lagi but ap jis tarah se gadi chala rahe the kuchh bhi hosakta tha.

Ram-Miss.Sharma am so sorry,wese ap ja kahan rahi hen ap bhi kuchh kam hurry nahi hen hn ??

Priya-Plz call me priya,am going to airport to take someone special.

Ram-Why, Miss.Sharma ?Are not u Miss.Sharma ??

Priya(ANGRILY)-Yes ofcourse am a sharma but i dont like it,if there is no need of a surname in india i preffer to vanish it,do u understand ?Saying that she stormed out from there.Ram stood there for a while,did not understand what is problem with this girl and moreover who is the special someone in this hitler's life ????He allmost forgot about the meeting before he he got the calll from vikram.He also rushed toward hi meeting place.All the time of his drive he thought about priya, the mystry woman who is affecting him so much.

(THANK U GUYS FOR WAITING,HOPE THIS WILL BE ENJOYBLE FOR U ALL,IF U LIKE PLZ HiT THE LIKE AND COMMENT SO THAT I CAN WRITE BETTER OF IT.)








Edited by jeena1993 - 12 years ago
vironikajain thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Nice update..something big must have happened in priya's life thats why she is behaving like this..poor ram getting more confused everytime he met her..
Cont soon
Edited by vironikajain - 12 years ago
LovingRaYa thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#35
nice update
waiting for next part
lalmadhu thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Very nice update Please continue soon
jineejiggs thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#37
sorry for late reply, I liked the inquisitiveness of Ram, shayad yehi inquisitiveness ke liye Ram Priya ke bare me sab kuch jaan lega aur shayad Priya ko samhaal bhi le, Priya needs someone like him...continue plz ASAP, but plz from next time do PM me.
jeena1993 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

sorry for late reply, I liked the inquisitiveness of Ram, shayad yehi inquisitiveness ke liye Ram Priya ke bare me sab kuch jaan lega aur shayad Priya ko samhaal bhi le, Priya needs someone like him...continue plz ASAP, but plz from next time do PM me.

Thank u jinee,yes dear pm karungi but add me on ur buddy list so that mujhe yad rahe.Ar jo jo pm chahte hen mujhe bolo ya pm karo me vejungi ok.
jmehta1957 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#39
excellent,next update kab hoga.please PM me.
jeena1993 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#40
PART-4

Ye kartik pahanchgaya hoga ar mera intezar karraha hoga bahat der hogayi,jaldi se car ko park karte hue priya airport ke taraf chalpadi.Wohn pahanch ne ke bad use pata chala ke flight late he adheghante to wo rahat ki sas leti he ar wohn wait karti rehti he adheghante bad kartik ka flight ka arrival hota he ar gate se wheel chair pe bethe kartik ko dekh ke priya wohn jati he,uske bal pe hat ghumate hue puchti he-kesa he re tu bahat bada hogaya he chal ab apni badi di ke sath rehne ahigaya he to tera bada pan ko thoda chota kadete hain.Dono jorse hasne lagte hen,priya kartik ko apne flight me lekar ati he.Actually bachhpan me jab priya ke bade papa mama ka accident hua tha tab uss accident me undono ki maut hogayi thi ar kartik ke per me chot ane k bajese wo wheel chair pe he,Dono ghar pahanch ne ke bad priya kartik ko help karta he andar ane me,kartik fresh hojata he,priya dono ke liye chai banati he ar kuchh popcorns lati he jo kartik ka favourite he.

Priya-Kartik ab bata tumhari age ki planing kya he ab kya padhega,kuchh sochha he ????

Kartik-Han di,me civil service exam dena chahta hun ar isliye abhi prepair hone ki sochhraha hun bas mujhe yhn ke achhe library me entry chahiye ar ek achhe dost ki taki discussion karke padne me asani hogi,6 mahine bad exam he sochhraha hun yahi prepair karun kyon ki delhi me akela rehna achha nahi lagega chacha ji bolrahe the but mene insist kiya to mangaye pata he di chachu arahe hen mumbai sayad do tin din me,apko bola nahi kya ???

Priya-Nahi mene phone nahi kiya,wese wo ate to kya badi bat hoti,mujhe lagta he me tumhari help karsakti hun.Mene bola tha na ashiyan ke bare me,wohn mahesh nam ka ladka he wo bhi civil service ke liye asspirant he,wo bording me padta he chutii me ata he,ar abhi to uska bhi exam khatam hua hoga wo aya hohga me tum dono ki dosti kardungi so that both of u can interact ar tumhe bhi company miljayegi kyon ?

Kartik-Fantastic di,badhiya he kb milarahe ho mujhe apki ashiyan se,ar neha di se unki bare me bahat suna he apse ???

Priya-Achha kia yad diladia abhi phone karti hun azad ko lekar ane ke liye tum bhi mil lena ar humari masti bhi hogi.

Kartik-Am happy di ap thoda change hogayi ho pehlese better ho thanks to neha di,unki bajese mujhe meri priya di dheere dheere bapas milrahi he.Yese hi raho di mayusi ke andar rehke hume jindegi ke khusi ko gawana nahi chahiye,agar jindegi me andhera he to ek na ek din ujjala bhi ayega,dekhna di apki jindegi me bhi koi wo ujjala banke ayega,kya pata abhi chuka hoga ar hume pata nahi.

Priya-Oye itni badi badi bat karne ki jarurat nahi hn wese tune sahi to kaha tu bhi to agaya he ujjala banke wt me phone lagati hun,wo neha ko call karti he.Hello neha,kya karrahi ho yar ???Kartik aya he yhn rehne,ek kam kyon nahi karte azad ko leke yhn ajao me dinner banati hun sath me dinner karenge fir tum chalijana wese tum bolrahi thi na ke vikram bhi aj out off town he ar late ghar ayenge,to tum akeli kyon bore horahi hogi yhn ajao.

Neha-Great,isbahane ar ek naye dost banjayega,me abhi nikalti hun azad ko leke
.
After 45 mins neha arrived at priya's home with azad,sath dhersare cookis leke.Azad priya ko dekhte hi uske godh me kud pada.

Priya-Hei champ,kissi kissi,she kissed him which he likes very muchand giggles by clapping his hands.Neha ye sab kya he itna sara cookis,u know i dont it them yar oily he.

Neha-Ye tumhare liye nahi he kartik ke liye he use bahat pasand he na kahn he bo milaogi nahi kya ??Tabhi kartik apne room se nikalta he wheel chair se.Neha usse dekhte hi uske pas jati he ar use sofe tak ane me help karti he.

Kartik-Hyy neha di nice to meet u,thanks for help.Ar itne sare cookis mere liye he kya ????Apko kese pata chala mere pasand ke bare me ???

Neha-Bas bas thank u bolne ki jarurat nahi tum priya ki chote bhai ho to mere bhi chote bhai bane na ar tumhari pasand ke bare me kya mujhe to ye bhi pata he ki tumhe andhere me beth ke horror film dekhne me maja ata he but agar kissi ko jarse pakad ke dekhne bethe to.Sab jorse hasne lagte hain.Azad ko kuchh samjh nahi ata, sab haste hen to wo bhi hasta he jorse clap karte hue.

Kartik-Hei buddy come to mamu,wo azad ko leta he tabhi ajad dheere dheere bolta he ma..ma.. Hn bolo bolo bolo maaamu maaamu.To azad jhatse bolta he,maaamu ar hasne lagta he,curiosity ke bajese wo bar bar mamu bolne lagta he,uski bajese sab hasne lagte hen.Us sam tino milke bahat chit chat karte hen,ashiyan ke bare me discussion hoti he ar final hota he ki next day tino ashiyan jayenge.

Udhar ashiyan me billo massi pareshan he do din pehle hi mahesh ko ajana chahiye tha boarding se but abhi tak nahi aya,wohn phone bhi nahi lagraha to wo pareshan hoke ram ko phone lagati he.

Massi-Ram,beta mahesh abhitak nahi lota he do din pehle ajana chahiye tha,mujhe chinta horahi he.

Ram-Massi dont worry,mene phone kia tha uske ek teacher ki tabiyat thik nahi thi to wo unke liye ruk gaya tha,mene bhi use bola rukne ke liye,Wese bhi me aj sam ko nainital jaraha hun to kl ate bakt usko le aunga sath me relax itna tenssion lenge to hyper tenssion hojayega apko.

Massi-Tere hote hue mujhe chinta hosakti he bhala apna khayal rakhna ar khana theek se khana ok beta.

Next day priya ar neha kartik ko leke ashiyan pahanchte hen,kartik ko wohn ki surrounding bahat achha laga wo bhi wohn ke sare members se achhe tarh ghul milgaya.Sab beth ke wohn bat karrahe honge.
Billo massi-Priya beta achha kia tune jo kartik ko bhi yhn le aya,bilkul tumhari tarh he sant swabhab ka mahesh se uski khub jamegi.

Priya-Wese kahn he bo abhi tak nahi aya kya ??

Massi-Abhi ata hoga,uski teacher ki tabiyat theek nahi thi to do din ruk gaya tha.Tabhi ram mahesh ko leke ashiyan pahanchta he,Mahesh jake sabse milta he,ram priya ko wohn pe dekh ke chok jata he ar man me hi sochhta he,Ab ye hitler yahn kya karrahi he ??Priya bhi sochhti he ki kyon inse samna hua abhi dimag kharab kardenge.

Mahesh-Hyy priya di and neha di kese ho ??Ar ye kan he ????

Priya-Mahesh ye tumhare naye dost he,mera bhai kartik ye bhi tumhari tarh civil me asspirant he,tum dono ki khub jamegi isliye tumse milwane laya tha.

Kartik-Hyy mahesh nice to meat u ????Mahesh hugged him and said,wo yes here same yar buddy now ??Both of them shake hands and go for talk.Ram thought,wo ye he wo special one to tujhe kyon fark padraha he ram ki wo special one uski bhai he ya koi aur,wo khudse puchhne laga ar us batse disstract hone ke liye age badhte hue sabko hyy bola..

Ram-Hello,Miss.Sharma nice to meet u again.He almost forgot about their last argue.Priya looked at him angrilly.

Priya-How many times i said u that plz call me priya, Mr.Kapoor.Kartik heard this and came to them.

Kartik-Hello ram bhaiya,can i call u bhaiya ???

Ram-Smillingly,wo yes buddy u can call me bhaiya as mahesh also calls me that.

Kartik-Smiles and said,ram bhaiya meri di na thodi hitler he to unhe Miss.Sharma sunna pasand nahi ap unhe hitler kyon nahi bulate ??Sab hasne lagte hen,but priya gusse se kartik ki aur dekhta he.Sorry di majak tha.

Ram-Ok Miss.Sharma ek sart pe me apko ye nahi bulaunga,agar ap bhi mujhe Mr.Kapoor na bulake ram bulayengi ???Mujhe bhi beard lagta he ye suna.Agar apko manjur he to me apko priya bulaungi nahi to nahi Miss,Pri...

Priya-Ok ok,Mr.Kapoor,i will call u.

Ram-Abhi bhi apne wohi bola Miss...

Priya-Ok RAM,i will call u Ram.okRam smiled victoriously.Priya gusse se lal horahi thi but chup rahi,Kartik sochhraha tha ki aj koi to mila jo meri di ko bina hurt kiye na binaoverrage karte hue samvala he.dekhte hen age kya hota he.Sab wohn chitchat karrahe hote hain.

Massi-Beta ram tujhse ek aur bat karni thi,are bachho ke class badrahe hen unko sayad tution ki jarurat hogi ar hume bhi age horaha he itni der beth ke unko homework karwane me paresani hoti he ahgar tu kisi ko unhe padane ke liye tik kare to achha hota.

Ram-Massi mujhe yhn teachers ke bare me itna pata nahi fir bhi me kosis karunga.
Kartik-Ram bhaiya i have a plan kyon na me sam ko insab ko pada dun subhe library me padunga sam ko inhe padaunga time bhi pass hojayega inka bhi fayda hoga ar meri bhi knowldge badhegi,whats say ??

Mahes-Fantastic kartik,i can also join u.

Ram-Guys fine u both solved our problem,then done tum log hi ye sambhalo.

Priya-Dekha kartik mene bolatha na tumhe yhn ake bahat achha lagega.Wohn pe kuchh aur time spend karne ke bad priya ar kartik nikalnewale hote hen.

Ram-To kartik kl sam ko tum ready rehna me ajaunga tumhe lene.Kartik hn bolne hiwala hota he ki.

Priya-Iski koi jarurat nahi RAM me drop kardungi nahi to neha kardegi apko taklif uthane ki jarurat nahi.

Ram-Isme taklif ki kya bat he kl mera itna kam nahi he isliye sochha ki

Priya-Nahi har roj to ap ye nahi karenge na to achha he suru se hi permanent solution nikala jaye.Ye bolke wo gadi ki taraf badti he.

Kartik-Sorry bhaiya meri di ke tarafse i am sorry.

Ram-Its ok kartik.They left.Ram sochhta raha,ye hitler he ya hitler ki ma,ram beta ye bilkul teri kabil nahi he.Kabil ??kabil ki bat kahn agayi tu kya sochhraha he ram wo abhitak tera dost bhi nahi he.Dost kabil what are u thinking ram kya kya sochraha he u need sleep ja ja soja nahi to betuki bato se dimag kharab hojayega tera.Wo bhi wohn se nikal jata he.

THE END

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".