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Part 4

In the morning...Sudhir goes to bedroom where Priya is sleeping. Saline drops are still dripping.

Sudhir: Shipra...ab Priya ki tabiyat kaisi hai...

Shipra: (Touching...Priya's forehead) pata nahin iska bukhar kyu nahin utar raha

Shipra: Bahut mushkil se 2 ghate pehle so payee hai. Aap Pihu ko jaga dijiye...use school ke liye tayyar kar dete hain...nahi toh use school ke liye deri hogi

Sudhir: Haan..bus abhi jaga deta hoon...

Sudhir goes to other bedroom where Pihu is sleeping

Sudhir: Nanu ki Princess ...Pihu...utth jao bte ...

Pihu: (rubbing her eyes) ...2 minutes please...

Sudhir: Uth ja beta nahi toh school ke liye deri hogi...

Pihu: (slowly Pihu ..gets up and goes into Nanu's arms for hug)...

After 2minutes...Pihu: Nanu meri Mumma kaha hain?

Sudhir: Aapki Mumma so rahi hain...Unki tabiyat thik nahi hai na ' toh woh raatbhar so nahi payee aura ab jakar unhe thodi si neend lagi hain...

Pihu: (breaking her Nanu's Hug, gets down and goes to Priya's bedroom)...

Pihu: (seeing the saline bottle and the needle pierced in her Mumma's hand...goes near Shipra)

Shipra: Caressing Pihu...(in low voice so that she doesn't disturb Priya) Good Morning Pihu...Beta jaldi se school key liye ready ho jao (getting her out of the bedroom)

Pihu: Nani mein aaj school nahin jaoongi...mujhe Mumma ke saath rahena hai...

Shipra: Beta Mumma ka khayal rakhne ke liye Nanu aur Nani hain na...aur phir tum dophar tak school se aajaogi ...phir baad main tum Mumma ke saath reh sakti ho...

Pihu: Jab Dubai main, mein bimar hojati thi to Mumma pura din mere saath hoti thi...woh bookshop par bhi nahi jati thi...(pause...looking down) toh aaj Mumma bimar hain toh main aaj unke saath rahena chahti huon...please Nanu...please Nani...

Sudhir: (overhears their conversation) Aur Pihu Mumma ko pata chala ki Aap Mumma ke karan aaj school nahi gaye they toh kya unhe achcha lagega? (Pihu nods in NO...)

Pihu gets ready to go to school...just before moving out of house...

Pihu: Nanu ek minute...

She runs to Priya and places a kiss on her forehead and says...Mumma mein school jakar aati hoon...Aap aapni medicine time par le lena...aur jaldi se thik ho jayeeye..

Parallel Scene...Just imagine Ram at Vikram and Neha's house as shown in last week saying yaar Priya kaise soch sakti hain ki maine uske drink mein kuch milaya tha..

Neha: Arre fatty Priya ko ek bar phone karke toh dekho how is she feeling now...uska GUILT feeling gaya ki nahi???

Ram (making faces...): Haan phone lagata hoon...

Priya's phone is ringing but nobody is picking up...

Ram: Yaar ye Priya bhi...kabhi phone time par nahi uthathi...pata nahi usse phone rakhne ki kya zaroorat hain jab phone time par uthana nahi hai...

Neha: ok...let me try...ho sakta hain...shayad guilt ke karan tumhara phone nahi uth rahi...shayad mera le le...

Even this Priya doesn't pick up...

Vikram: I don't know Ram, but shayad tujhe khud Priya se personally mil lena chahiye or tumhari yeh confusion create hui hain isse sort out kar lena chahiya...

Ram: Lekin woh phone uthayegi toh mujhe pata chal sakta hain ki woh kaha hain...

Ram gets call from his office for some urgent work

Vikram: Kya hua...kuch urgent kaam aa gaya kya office mein?

Ram: haan yaar muhe jana hoga... and he goes to office...

Scene moves back to Priya's home...

Doctor comes and monitors Priya's health progress

Doctor: (turning to Shipra and Sudhir) Abhi tak Patient mein meine kal se kuch improvement nahi dekhe. I think we need to admit her to the hospital. Hamein kuch aur test karne hain woh hospital mein hi ho sakte hain...

During that time Nutz comes home...seeing the doctor coming out of bedroom...

Nutz: Mummyji...yeh Doctor...kya hua...

Shipra: Priya kal se bahot bimar hain...kal jab se savere se aayi hain bus...ro rahi thi...na kuch khaya hai na kuch piya hai...

Nutz gets shock after seeing Priya and they decide to move Priya to hospital...an ambulance is called

Sudhir: Natasha tum ghar par hi ruko...Pihu school se aayegi..beta hum main se kisiko toh yahi rukna hoga...

Nutz: ji (nodding her face)

Priya is placed on a stretcher and taken to hospital...

Part 5

Pihu comes from school. Throws her bag on the sofa (starts calling Mumma..Mamma...) and rushes to the bedroom where Priya was sleeping...she starts searching Priya here and there...Not able to find Priya...she starts asking Nutz

Pihu: Bua Mami...meri Mumma kaha hain???? Batao na...

Nutz: (hugging Pihu...) Pihu...Mumma is not well na...toh Nanu and Nani have taken her at the hospital for some tests and then they she will come back...Baby ...tab tak aap jaldi se fresh ho jao...aur apna khana finish kar lo...

Pihu: Nahi mujhe Meri Mumma aabhi chahiye...hospital mein toh hum tabhi jata hain na jab bahut zyada bimar hote hain...to kya Mumma bahot zyada bimar hain?

Nutz: Nahi Baby...Mumma ko zyada dekhbhal ki zaroorat thi..kuch tests karne they ...aur woh tests yaha nahi kar sakte they isliye Mumma ko hi hospital lekar gaye..

Tears flowing from Pihu's eyes..

Nutz: Baby everything's going to be alright...Mumma jaldi se thik ho jayeengi

Scene shifts to Ram's office...Ram is not able to concentrate in his office...and thinks it's afternoon so Pihu must be back from school...Priya should surely be there...

Ram dials Priya's no. ...saying Phone uthaoo Priya...Pick it up ..Damn it...

Scene - Priya's home...

Pihu sees Priya's phone ringing on the table...and picks it up...saying ...Hello...

Ram: Hey Rockstar...aap aa gaye school se...how was your day at school?

Pihu: Papa...(tears flowing down)...mujhe aapse milna hai aabhi...aap jaldi se yaha aa jao...

Ram: Are you ok Rockstar??school mein kuch hua hain kya??? Aapko kisine kuch bola???Papa sabko ekdum thik kar denge...

Pihu: nahi school mein kuch nahin hua (in crying tone)...

Ram: toh kya kisi ne aapko dataan ...ya Mumma ne aapko kuch bola?? sab thik hai na waha...zara Mumma ko phone dena...agar Mumma ne kuch bola hoga toh Papa Mumma ko dant denge ...

Pihu: (listening Mumma word...Pihu aur sad ho jati hain)...Papa aap fast fast yahan aa jao...

Ram: ok..ok...Rockstar ...Papa jaldi se aapke paas aa rahein hain..ekdum fast fast...ok...

Ram is clueless as to why Pihu is crying and calling him...

Vikram calls Ram, and asks if he was able to talk to Priya

Vikram: Ram, kya teri Priya se baat ho gayee,kya phone laga??

Ram: Arre a lekin meri Priya se baat nahin ho payee. Pihu bhi just lagne phone uthaya, aur pata nahi woh mujhe bahot sad lag rahi thi... Bahot zid kar rahi thi aur usne mujhe abhi jaldi mein PRiya ke ghar bulaya hain. Mein bus wahin ke liye nikala huon...Hope everything's fine...

Vikram: Tu chinta mat kar, sab thik hoga. Tujhe shayad miss kar rahi hogi, isliye bulaya hoga...ya phir Priya aur Pihu ke beech kuch argument...main janta huon ..aisa aksar Neha aur Riddhima ke beech hota hai...aur Riddhima everytime calls me...

Ram: Yaar mein janta huon Priya aur Pihu ke rishte ko, un dono mein aisa bonding hain ki unke beech kabhi argument ya zagda ho hi nahi payega...aur abhi tak aisa kabhi nahi hua hain ki Pihu ne Priya ki shikayat mujh se ki ho...but anyways you are much more experienced in this... ho sakta hain tu jo bol raha hain woh shayad sach ho...mein abhi phone rakh raha hoon...will call you later

Part 6:

Ram's car reaches parking at Priya's building with a screech...

Ram reaches the lift, but as usual it's not working...he hurriedly climbs stairs and reaches Priya's home...keeps on pressing the bell impatiently...after climbing so many stairs...he is sweating badly.

Pihu: (gets up from sofa)...

Nutz goes and opens the door...'

Nutz: Bhai...

Pihu: Papa...(clinging on to Ram's legs...) starts sobbing badly...

Ram: (picking Pihu up)...kya hua bachhe...Are you ok?? Priya ...Priya...(calls Priya's name twice trying to search Priya here and there)

Ram: (sits on sofa and makes Pihu sit on his lap) wiping Pihu's tears... Kya hua baby aap ro kyu rahe hoon...Aapne Papa ko bulaya...toh Papa aapke paas fast fast aa gaye na?

Pihu: (Crying) mein Mumma ko bahot miss kar rahi hoon, I want Mumma??

Ram: (looking at Pihu and then at Nutz) Matlab? Priya ghar par nahi hain? Kahan gayee Priya? Kya use abhi bahar jana tha? Use maloom hain na ki yeh Pihu ka school se aane ka time hota hain???How can she be so irresponsible?

Ram: Look Baby Papa hain ne yahan par...Papa Mumma ko daant denge ki hamari Pihu jabbhi ghar aaye...she should do nothing and just be at home waiting for you...

Ram: (he takes out hanky from his pocket and wipes Pihu's tears)

Pihu: Papa ...Mumma ko aap mat dantiye...woh bahot bimar hain...

Ram: (confused) ...what? Nutz ...mujhe tum bataogi hua kya hain???

Nutz explains everything...and Pihu also tells Ram in detail about Priya's fever, doctor visit, vomit and how she has been sleeping for a long time and is not waking up.

Ram: (after listening to everything...he senses that may be Priya is not well due to the Guilt she had after the MOMENT they had)

Ram: (Caressing Pihu...)Pihu...aab Papa aa gaye hain...aab everything will be alright...Mumma ko hum dono milkar jaldi thik kar denge...ekdum hamari tarah ...strong...strong...hain na Rockstar?

Pihu: (his words bring slight relief and she nods in yes)

Pihu: Papa aapko itna pasina kyu aaya hain

She takes out her hanky and wipes off the sweat from his Forehead, (Ram thinks...aakhir Priya ki beti hain toh ...Priya ki tarah hi karegi na)

Ram: Baby kyunki aapne Papa ko ekdum fast fast bulaya na...toh Papa ekdum run run karke aaye...

Ram: (he takes Pihu's hand with which she was rubbing his sweat and kisses it)

Nutz: Pihu tum change kar lo ...aur khana kha lo...?

Pihu: Par mujhe Mumma ke paas jana hain ' Papa aap mujhe le chalenge na Mumma ke paas?

Ram: Rockstar aap jaldi se change kar lo, have your food and then we will go to meet Mumma. Tab tak mein Nanu ko phone karke dekh leta hoon how is Mumma?

Nutz: Bhai aap bhi lunch kar lijiye...

Ram: signs no from his hands...he is no mood to eat anything when his loved one is in so much pain

Ram calls up Sudhir

Sudhir tells everything that was done after Priya got admitted. She has undergone many tests, whose results are awaited but her condition has not improved at all and they are worrying about her condition???

Ram: Papa please don't worry. Everything will be alright. Mein, Pihu aur Natasha bus thodi der mein waha pahunch jayenge...

After keeping the phone, Ram starts thinking...Priya tum itni bimar thi aur mein tumhare bare mein kitna galat soch raha tha...tum hamesha mujhe galat sabit kar deti hoon...

Precap: Ram, Pihu and Natasha reach hospital...

awesome, but am little sad for Peehu, she can't see Priya like this but am sure she will be fine, let Ram reach hospital and be with her, its the guilt conscious that made Priya in this condition, let Ram clarifies all things and have convo with her...I understand u r busy with ur work, but u r writing an amazing and interesting story that is why we specially am eager for ur updates, but its absolutely ok, u take ur time and update over weekends, thanks u, luv u and God bless u, take care

awesome update and very touching

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