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Welcome back guys...Last week CV's ne achcha likha tha...Kudos to them...specially Monday's episode, Balcony talk...agar aap ko thokar lagegi...toh mein sambhal loongi...aur agar tumhare aankh se aansoon aaye...toh tum hi pahonch lena..., bedtime story telling, the rickshaw ride... Ram supporting Priya in front of Ayesha...

So I am skipping Raya's valentine date due to CV's good thoughts...

Part 12

Ram is thinking about starting a company, kahi se to shurwat karni padegi...Priya in order to support financially is doing job search and thinking she should TOEFL classes ...

In the evening, at Vik-Neha's house..., Priya comes home first...

Neha: (opening the door) Hey Priya tum aa gayi...kaise raha tumhara din...ek...minute mein pani lekar aati hoon...

Priya: (somewhat saddened...Neha gets water) kuch nahi yaar...interviews mein wahi saare questions...why did you take break...things have changed since you last taught...etc...

Neha: It's ok baba...aapne aap ko thoda time toh do...you will get something good...don't rush off...

Priya: hmmm...Pihu aa gayee school se?

Neha: haan...Ridhima aur Sammy ke saath baithkar aapna homework kar rahi hain...tumhare aur Ram ke bare mein poch rahi thi...ek minute let me call her...Pihu...Pihu...look who's come...

Pihu comes running to Priya...and hugs her...

Pihu: Mumma aap kahan gayi thi...meine aapko bahot miss kiya...

Priya: (Hugging her...)Baby Mumma aur Papa ko kuch kaam tha...isliye...humlog bahar gaye they...

Neha: Priya... tumnein akele Pihu ko itni achchi aadetein lagayee hain...I am so proud of you...

Priya: (hugging tightly) Mera bachcha hain bhi itna sayana...

Priya: ok Baby...aap jao aur jaldi se apna homework finish karlo...phir Papa bhi aajayenge tab tak...

Pihu: ok Mumma (and goes inside...)

Priya: Neha...Vikram kab aa rahe hain...

Neha: aaj raat ko aa jayega...thodi der pehle baat hui thi...Priya ek cup garma garam chai ho jaye...

Priya: haan...ek minute mein banati hoon...achcha khana bhi banate hain...kya plan hain...aaj Vikram aa rahein hain...kuch special banatein hain...

Priya and Neha are sipping Tea...simultaneously cooking by the time...and food is ready...

Priya: Pata nahi Ram kahan reh gaye...

Neha: Haan toh phone karke dekh lo...

Priya: Haan...

Priya calls up Ram, Ram intimates he will be at home soon...

Pihu: Mumma mujhe bhook lagi hain...

Neha: Ram aur Vikram ke liye tehrne ke zaroorat nahin hain...Bachchon ko bhook lagi hogi...

Neha: Chalo Bachcha Party...common Dinner time...

Pihu, Ridhima, Sammy, Rahul have their food...

Priya is looking after kids ...Ram comes by that time...Neha opens the door...

Neha: Hey Fatty...welcome home...

Ram comes and settles down on sofa...

Neha: Hey Ram one good news...Vikram aaj wapas aa raha hain...

Ram: arre wah...mein usse lene jata hoon airport...what time is he reaching...

Neha: Nahi, usne bataya hain...he will come on his own...aur tum bhi toh tired ho...he said he will reach here in an hour...

Ram wants to go but Neha tells him...aree Vikram ko aadat hain

Neha goes inside and tells that Ram has come...

Neha: Priya tum jao Ram ke pass...mein bachchon ke pass huon...

Priya gets water for Ram

Priya: Kaise raha din aapka?

Ram putting on a fake smile...

Ram: Bus thik hi tha...aur tumhara...

Priya nodding her head in ok...Priya keeps her right hand on Ram's shoulders...saying everything will be all right...

Ram: Yeh Bachche kahan hain...so gaye kya? He goes to dining room...Priya follows him

Pihu: (seeing Ram) Papa aap aa gaye...jaldi aayeye hamare saath dinner kariye...

Ram: No Bachcha Party you have your food let me get fresh...

But Pihu forces Ram to have a bite from her hand..and is happy when he has it...

Ram: Thank you Baby...

Ram gets fresh...Kids have finished their food...and everyone are sitting in hall and talking

Neha, Rishima,Sammy sitting together on sofa ...Rahul on a chair...Priya and Pihu on opposite sofa...and Priya is caressing Pihu's hair...

Priya: chalo Baby it's bedtime...kal school bhi hain aap logon ka...

Ram comes and sits besides Priya...

Pihu: Mumma...Bed time story...

Priya and Neha point at Ram...

Ram tries to get up from there...Priya and Neha don't allow him...

Rahul: Pihu Ram Uncle ki kahaniya toh ekdum science fiction hoti hain...Ram Uncle aisi kahaniya sunate hain...ki tumhein neend hi nahin aayegi...Yaad hain Ram Uncle aapne mujhe,Ridhima aur Sammy ko bedtime story sunaye thi...humari toh neend hi bhaag gayi...phir Priya Aunty ne hamein ek achchi si story sunaye...

Ram: Haan...Tumhari Priya Aunty itni boring kahani...sunati hain ki kisiko bhi neend aa jayegi...us kahani ko sunkar mein khud bhi so gaya...

Pihu: Papa... Mumma ki kahaniya mujhe bahot achchi lagati hain...

Ram: oh...really...(tickling Pihu...)...

Neha: Dekha Ram...tab Priya akeli thi...aaj Pihu uski supporter hain...I am so happy for both of them...

Neha sees Pihu is feeling sleepy...

Neha: ok...bachcha party it's bed time...Priya Pihu ko sula do...mein Sammy aur riddhima ko sula kar aati hoon...

Ram carries Pihu inside...followed by Priya...and carefully makes Pihu sleep in the middle...covers her with duvet...Priya kisses Pihu's forehead...Ram also kisses Pihu's forehead...

Pihu: (catches Priya's hand...) Mumma Bed time story please...neend nahi aa rahi hain...

Priya: Haan Baby...Mr. Kapoor can you put on the dim lights, ...Ram switches on the dim lights...

Priya is telling a story and Ram is slowly tapping Pihu's forehead and putting her to sleep...

As usual...Ram also sleeps...

After ensuring Pihu has slept...Priya goes to Ram's side and slowly wakes him up...

They keep Happy and Tiger besides Pihu and also put cushions besides them for Pihu's protection against falling from bed...

Ram and Priya come out in the living room...Neha also comes out...bell rings...

Ram: mein dekhta hoon...

Ram opens the door...it's Vikram

Ram: Welcome home...Mr.Shergill...

Vikram: Arre wah..mere ghar mein mera hi swagat kiya jar aha hain...

Ram: Abe is waqt ghar ke andar kaun hain?

Vikram: Tu hain

Ram: Aur bahar kaun hain?

Vikram: Mein hoon

Ram: To..Ghar ke andarwala aadmi hi toh baharwale ka swagat karega na...

Vikram: Yaar ...tere baat mein dum hain...

Ram: ab bahar hi khada rahega ki aandar bhi aayega...

Neha and Priya come over there...

Neha: Kaun hain fatty...tum kisse baat kar rahein ho...

Ram: Tumhare...do shaadiyowale pati se...

Neha: oh...Vikram and hugs him...

Vikram: Doosri shaadi toh karwa di ...lekin 2^nd honeymoon karne nahi diya...(making puppy face...)

Neha Blushes...everyone has a hearty laugh...

All of them come in the living room...and talk for sometime...

Vikram gets fresh...All of them sit together and have dinner...

After dinner Vikram and Ram are chatting while Priya and Neha complete the cleanup work and join them in the living room...

Priya sits besides Ram on the sofa and Neha joins Vikram...

Vikram: Ram aage ka kya socha hain?

Ram: Soch raha hoon kisi tarha ek chota sa business start karlo par pata nahin kaha se shurwat karu...but now my first priority is Priya and Pihu...

Ram puts his palm over Priya's Palm

Vikram: Aur Priya ka kya opinion hain?

Priya: Mein chahti hoon ...ki Mr.Kapoor jo shuru karna chahte hain...karein...dusri taraf...mein koi teaching ka job shuru karoon taki...financially humlog thode se stable ho jaye...

Vikram: Priya tum ekdum sahi keh rahi ho...

Vikram: Ram hamari biwiya humlog jitna sochte hain usse kahin zyada supportive hain

Vikram and Neha: Ram aur Priya agar kisi bhi cheez ki kabhi bhi zaroorat pade tho bina kisi hichkichahat ke humein bata dena...

Priya: Humlogon ko yaha rehane den eke liye Thanks...

Neha: Ye hum logon ke beech Thanks kab se aaya...

Vikram: Aur tum dono ne milkar jo mujhe aur Neha ko 2^nd chance diya hain...yeh kya kam hain?

Ram: okay ...okay...thik hain...Thanks wapas le liya...aur hum aab...apna yaha ka stay extend kar denge ek mahine ke liye...

Priya: Mr.Kapoor aap bhi na...

Vikram: Yaar tu kaisi baatein kar raha hain...samjha kar na...meri shaadi hui hain...humlogon ko honeymoon pe kahi bahar jane nahi ho raha hain...to kam se kam ghar mein toh...

Neha: Blushes and keeps her palm on Vikram's mouth...

Neha: Tum fatty ko lekar sone jao...mein Vikram ko lekar jati hoon...nahi toh ye hum dono ko paagal kar denge...

All of them have hearty laugh...and go to sleep.

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Part 13 – Consignment Delivery...

Last week shown by CV's was good...Priya's Diary narration, Peehu's Birthday celebration planning and execution too good. My story would be on tracks of the CV's with some personal touch...

Ram's new company work is keeping him too busy and he comes home very late...On weekdays...Ram doesn't get to spend time with Pihu at all as when Pihu leaves for school Ram is sleeping and when Ram comes home Pihu has already gone to bed...Thanks to Priya who handles both of them successfully...Priya is also point of contact for Sharmas, Kapoors. So weekends are the only time when they spend Quality time together...

One Sunday morning...

Priya gets up early and gets ready as usual. After that she goes and sits besides Pihu on the bed...tries to wake up Pihu...

Priya: Baby...subah ho gayee...come on let's gets up...

Pihu: (slowly opening her eyes and looking at Priya...as kids normally do when they get up...) Mumma aaj toh sunday hain na...aaj to holiday hain na...

Priya: Haan Baby...

Pihu: Toh aaj toh sone dijiye na...

Priya: Baby every day you get up at 6 now it's 8 ...come on getup mera achcha bachcha...

Pihu goes close to Priya and keeps her head in Priya's lap...

Priya caresses her hair and pats her slowly... she let's Pihu sleep in her lap for some moretime...

Slowly she lays Pihu's head back on a cushion...and goes for waking up Ram

Priya arranges the curtains such that sunrays are coming in the room...

Goes and sits besides Ram's cushion...

Priya: (caressing his hair...) Good morning Mr. Kapoor...uthne ka time ho gaya hain...

Ram: (without opening his eyes...) Morn...

Priya: Uthiye...lazy bones...

(Keeping his head in Priya's lap...): Thodi...der aur...please...(and puts his one hand over Priya's waist)

Priya: ok mere Ramji... Priya let's Ram sleep in her lap and thoda Ram ke sir ko sehlati hain...

She slowly frees herself from Ram and goes to kitchen...

After sometime...

Priya: Kitnatime ho gaya..dono ko ab uthana hoga...

Priya goes back to Pihu's room and tries waking her up...

Priya: Pihu...Baby ...now get up...bahot der ho gayee... hain...

Pihu: Mumma aap Sunday kyu aata hain...

Priya: Taki log thoda rest karein...

Pihu: to phir aap mujhe rest karne do na...

Priya: (Priya gets angry) Pihu...Mumma do minute mein wapas aa rahi hain...I want you to get up and start brushing your teeth...

Pihu gets up and carries her duvet and goes to Ram's room...

Pihu: (in half sleep) Papa...

Ram: (hearing Pihu's voice but is still in sleep) ...Good Morning Rockstar ...

Pihu: mein aapke saath so jao...please mumma ko dekhiye na mujhe sone nahi de rahi mere room mein...

Ram: aa ja mera bachha...

Ram and Pihu both hug each other and sleep...

Priya: (after going to Pihu's room and not finding her ...she goes to her room)...

Seeing Ram and Pihu sleeping hugging together ...says Yeh kya ho gaya baap beti ko...koi uthne ko tayyar hi nahi...

Getting angry she goes to the room...

Priya: Mr.Kapoor ...Pihu...(hearing Priya both of them awake)...this is not done...mein kabse aap dono ko jaga rahi hoon...mein bhi to har din aap logon se pehle uthti hoon...phir Sunday ke din bhi kaam hota hain jaldi uthna padta hain...mera bhi to mann kata hain ki thoda aaram karoon Sunday ko...lekin aap dono to kuch samajh hi nahi rahein...

Priya: 20 minute...sirf 20 minute mein aap tayyar hokar dono jaldi se mujhe breakfast table par milenge... (and she goes from there)

Ram: Pihu...isse pehle ki Priya Sherni banjaye...utho bachche...and get ready...

Pihu: Papa..dekhiye aap ne Mumma ko gussa dila diya na...

Ram: ohhh...(tickling Pihu...) meine ...Mumma ko gussa dilaya???

Pihu: Haan...

Both Ram and Pihu get ready and go to breakfast table...They have their breakfast chup chap se without saying any word...

After that Priya is doing the weekend work...keeping clothes properly...etc...

Ram is reading paper and is watching Priya do all the work...Ram feels sorry for her...

Priya is tired and comes and sits on the couch and lets a sigh of relief closing her eyes...

Ram keeps the news paper aside and sits near to Priya

Putting a strand of hair that was on her face behind the ear...

Ram: Priya...

Priya: (her eyes are still closed) hmmm...

Ram: ek maid rakh lete hain...Pihu ka...Tumhare job ka..Mera...ghar ka itna sara kaam karke tum bahot thak jati hoon...

Priya: (keeping her eyes closed she speaks slowly)...abhi nahin Mr.Kapoor...hum afford nahi kar sakte...itne expenses pehle hi hain..phir maid ke expenses...aur mein apne ghar ke liye nahi karoongi toh aur kiske liye karoongi...

Ram: (putting his hand across Priya's shoulders) Priya tum itna kyu sochti hoon...(kisses on Priya's closed eye)...

Pihu comes over there...

Pihu: Papa aap yeh kya kar rahe hain...????

Ram & Priya shockingly look towards Pihu...

Ram: Arre Pihu...woh Mumma kea ankh mein mein kuch gaya than a toh Papa usse nikal rahein they...(looking towards Priya) Hain na Mumma????

Priya: Haan ...Haan...

They have their lunch, take some rest and go for shopping for Pihu's Birthday...

Pihu's Birthday is celebrated as displayed in the serial...

Ram gets call for a new contract as displayed in the serial...

Ram decides not to use the money they have saved for the rainy day so Priya gives the earrings that he had gifted by him and insists that Ram should use it for getting money...Ram was not ready earlier but after Priya's much insistence he agrees on it...

On next day morning when Priya is making Pihu ready for school, Ram gets a call for the new contract where the buyer tells him the delivery date is 1 week and not 1 month as mentioned earlier...

This shocks Ram...

Priya: Pihu jao aap...andar se apna bag lekar aao...

Pihu: haannn...

Priya can see Ram's tensed face. She goes near Ram and keeps her hand on Ram's shoulder: Is everything alright Mr.Kapoor????

Ram nods in no...and rubs his forehead sweat using his hand...

Priya: she tells Ram that she is going down for leaving Pihu till the school bus...mein bus Pihu ko bus mein bithakar ...jaldi wapa aa rahein hoon...

She come back and sees Ram still in some thoughts...

Priya: Mr. Kapoor kya hua aap itne tense kyu lag rahein hain...kiska phone tha???

Ram explains everything...and also tells it's is very difficult to complete the order of 1 month in 1 week...arranging for the funds...producing, packaging...etc...Quality and delivery date deadline are the 2 things the Customer are not going to compromise on...

Priya: Ram aapko kya lagta hain...aap ise kar payenge ???

Ram: Yeh bahot risky hain...lekin mujhe ise attempt karna hain...

Priya: toh phir zyada math sochiye...fayda ya nuksaan ke bare mein bilkul bhi math sochiye...apna best attempt dijiye...

Ram: Priya agar tum na hoti toh mera kya hota????

Priya: sab kuch thik hoha????achche logon ke saath hameshs achcha hi hota hain...

Priya word encourages Ram and gets back to his work...woh jeejaan lagakar kaam karta hain...

It's been 6 days that Ram has not been able to come to home due to work load...sometimes Priya herself takes his clothes and food to the office or sends it through some other office person... She tries to ensure that work load does not take toll on Ram's health...Pihu is not able to meet Ram often but Priya ensures that both Baap Beti...get to talk on the phone every day...

At the end of 6^th day all the goods are ready for delivery...Ram has some sense of satisfaction that now both the delivery and quality is not compromised...Ram and other factory staff lock the factory and reach home...

Door bell rings...seeing Ram...Pihu is overjoyed...she goes and hugs Ram tightly...

Pihu: Papa aap aa gaye...mein ne aur Mumma ne aapko bahot miss kiya...

Ram: Meine bhi...Rockstar...aap abhi tak soye nahin????

Priya: bus abhi sone ke liye ja rahi thi...

Ram: Priya am little tired...mein jakar shower leta hoon... can I get a cup of tea after that?????

Priya: haan main lati hoon...aap shower lijiye tab tak...

Priya makes Pihu sleep till that time...

After some time Ram calls Priya from bathroom...half opening the door...

Ram: Priya...

Priya: Haan Mr. Kapoor...

Ram: jaldi jaldi mein ..meine kapde nahi liye...mujhe please dogi...

Priya: Haan ek minute...

Priya takes out the baniyan, boxers, and kurta pyjama and hands it over to him...(remember the shot from the serial when after their marriage Ram had asked to search for the pen drive and Priya had accidently landed her hand in Ram's Boxers drawer..the hesitation they had that time was no more now...)

Ram comes out into the bedroom and is drying his hairs...

Priya: laiye...mein kar deti hoon...

Ram hands over the towel to her and she slowly dries his hair...

She gives him tea..and they both have dinner...

Suddenly it is raining and both of them go to balcony...

Priya: Kitna achcha lag raha hain na????

Ram: Haan...

They are talking about tomorrow's consignment delivery and how everything was going properly...

Suddenly Ram remembers something about factory...Ram calls up the factory supervisor...and asks him whether the factory ceiling shutter was closed or not...Supervisor was also doubtful...so he asks the supervisor to reach the factory immediately while he is also reaching...

Ram: Mujhe abhi factory jana hoga...factory ka ceiling shutter pata nahin hum logon ne band kiya ki nahi...

Priya: Mr.Kapoor sab thik hoga...don't worry...gadi aaram se chalaeyye...aur pahonchte hi much ek phone kariye...

Without responding Ram leaves from there in a hurry...

Supervisor reaches factory...Ram also reaches by the same time...they open the gates of the factory and rush inside...Seeing the view Ram is shocked... Factory ceiling shutter was open and due to this rain water made the complete consignment wet...boxes got ruined...Ram sits down on the floor...his hand on his temple...his breathing is high...ye sab kya hogaya????? The supervisor closes the ceiling shutter...

Priya is worried that is everything ok at Ram's end...why didn't he call back????he is also not picking up her phone...she tries last time and this time he picks up...

Priya: Kya hua Ram...aapne phone kyu nahi kiya????sab thik toh hain wahan???????

Ram is not able to speak...

Priya: boliye na Ram...aap chup kyu hain...

Ram: (saddened) Priya jiska darr tha wahi ho gaya...sara consignment bheeg gaya...

Priya: Ram aap...mein bus waha aa rahin hoon...

Priya tells the neighbour that Pihu is sleeping and there is some urgency so Priya is going to Ram's factory to take care of Pihu for sometime...

Priya reaches factory...and seeing the consignment wet she is deeply saddened...some workers are moving the boxes to a safer place ...her eyes search for Ram...but she does not find him...she asks the supervisor who tells he is in the cabin...

She hurries herself towards Ram's cabin...and opens the cabin's door...

Ram is sitting on that chair...both his hands are at his forehead...he does not notice Priya has come...

Priya: (calls) Ram...

Ram: (turns towards Priya and hugs her tightly)...and tears flow from his eyes...

They are in same position for 5 minutes...Priya tries to pacify Ram...makes him sit and gives him water to drink...

Ram: Priya...poora consignment bheeg gaya...ab main kya deliver karoonga kal...saare sapne toot gaye...humne kya socha tha aur kya ho gaya...

Priya slowly caressing his back...

Priya: Please aap mat royeye...aapne apko sambhaliye...(using her dupatta she wipes Ram's tears...)

In the meantime, the supervior comes and intimates...

Supervisor: Sir...humne goods ko plastic se wrpa kiya tha aur phir box mein rakha tha...box bheeg gaye hain par plastic ke aandar ke goos abhi bhi achche hain...

All 3 deicde what options are available at their end...such that can the consignment be delayed by a day or two... – No this can't be done as that was one of the things the Customer cannot compromise...so they decided to arrange for more boxes but where was the money going to come from...

Supervisor goes to check how many boxes do they have in stock...

Priya: Ram...humne jo paise rainy day ke liya jama kar rakhe they...aap usse use kariye...

Ram: aur agar hume kisi personal kaam ke liye un paiso ki zaroorat padi tho kahan se layenge...???

Priya: Ram yeh factory hamare liye ek income ka source nahin...yeh factory humara doosra bachcha hain...and she convinces Ram...

Ram: Priya agar kal sab kuch thik nahi hua to...

Priya: Mr.Kapoor...hum sirf ek achhi aur honest koshish kar sakte hain...aur achche logon ke saath hamesha achcha hi hota hain...

Next day Priya takes leave and joins Ram to deliver the consignment on time...Ram, Priya and whole factory joins hands together on war footing to complete the delivery of assignment and they do it successfully...