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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
amazing & Very touching update feeling very bad 4 Ram & peehu hope priya get well soon waiting 4 nxt pls update soon 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Guys before ending this weekend, thought of giving you another update - Part 7

Precap: Ram, Pihu and Natasha reach hospital...

Part 7

Ram: (calling up Sudhir) Papa humlog hospital pahunch gaye hai...Priya ko kaunse room rakha hai?

Sudhir gives the details and Ram, Pihu, Natasha reach the room. Sudhir and Shipra are waiting eagerly outside Priya's room. Pihu goes and hugs Nani...

Pihu: Nani Mumma kahan hai???Mujhe unse milna hai...

Shipra: Bete Mumma ko na Doctor andar check kar rahe hain...ek bar woh bahar aa jayenge toh humlog Mumma se milenge...ok...(Pihu nods in yes)

Nutz: Mummyji sab thik ho jayega...

Ram: Papa ...aab kaisi hain Priya???Aur kya keh rahein hain Doctor??

Sudhir: Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hain..Uske tabiyat mein kal se Doctor ko koi sudhar nahi dikh raha...aaj savere Priya ko hum hospital lekar aaye...uske baad mein Doctors ne kuch test kiye hain...jinka result hamein shyam tak mil jayega...

Doctors come out...

Ram: Mein Priya ka husband...ab kaisi hain Priya...

Doctor: Unki tabiyat mein hum ne kal se koi improvement nahi dekhi hain...she is very weak as she has not eaten anything...and even her fever is not coming down...was there anything that was bothering her before yesterday or so...?? (Ram remember's the Guilt feeling, but how to tell the doctor and so nods in No)

Pihu: (Comes and clutches Ram's legs) Papa mujhe Mumma se milna hain...

Ram: (Picking Pihu up) Doctor can go inside and meet Priya..??

Doctor: Yes of course, she is so weak that she has been resting/sleeping since she landed in hospital...just make sure that if she wakes up let us know...and don't stress her by any chance...

Doctor goes from there...everyone goes inside Priya's room...

Priya is sleeping on the bed wearing a blue patient's gown...Her left hand has the needle pierced through which the saline drops are flowing...Her right hand has a sticking tape indicating that even there a needle was pierced... Her face is looking very weak...

Ram goes near Priya and places his palm on Priya's forehead to heck her fever...looking towards Sudhir

Ram: Papa ise toh bahot tej bukhar hain...(Sudhir and Shipra nod in yes)

Ram: (gets a chair near the bed) Pihu aap Mumma ke paas yahan bhaith jao, Papa ko Nanu aur nani se kuch baat karni hai...(and makes Pihu sit in the chair)

The room has 1 sofa set, Sudhir, Shipra, Ram and Nutz move away from the bed near the sofa set so that their talking does not disturb Priya and Pihu is not able to hear their talking it will bother her more...

Sudhir and Shipra tell Ram and Nutz everything from start when Priya came home...

Ram: (After hearing everything, in shock ...rubbing his sweat from his forehead...) Aapne mujhe pehle kyu nahi bataya jab uski tabiyat itni kharab thi..??

Sudhir: Bete hum khud itne pareshan they ki hum dono ko kuch soojh is nahi raha tha...

Ram: I am sorry...

Ram: (going near Pihu and caressing her hair...Pihu looks up with sad eyes)

Pihu: Papa mein Mumma ko bahot dukh raha hoga na???unke dono haathon mein injection hain hain...

Ram: (taking Pihu hand in his palm, slowly takes towards Priya right hand ...which does not have the saline going on currently...and let's Pihu's and his palm touch Priya's palm...they find her palm too hot and Pihu kisses Priya's palm...)

Pihu: Mumma aap jaldi se thik ho jaoge...don't worry...and keeping her head on the bed...tears start flowing from her eyes...

Ram: Rockstar...don't cry...and (gives Pihu a hug)

Pihu: (clinges on to Ram tightly and tears start flowing faster than before)

Ram: (Picking Pihu up..he signs Sudhir, Shipra and Nutz that he will handle Pihu...takes her out of the room)

Ram: aise nahi rote bachche ...aap toh Mumma aur Papa ki brave girl hain na????Aap toh Good Girl ho na???Toh Good Girl kabhi nahi rote????(taking our his handkerchief, he wipes off the tears...and slowly moves his hand over Pihu's back ..so that her worry for her Mother's health eases little bit...)

Ram gets Pihu inside the room...

Natasha through sign asks how is Pihu???

Ram: (signs... ab thik hain)

Ram: Papa...Aap sab log abhi ghar jakar thoda aaram kar lijeye...mein yahan par ruk raha hoon...

Natasha: Bhai let me wait with you...

Ram: Nutz tum ghar chale jao...and (also signs to take Pihu home)

Ram: Pihu ...Baby aap abhi school se aaye ho na...go home with Nana, Nanu and Nutz Bua...take a nap aur phir shyam ko wapas aa jana...shayad tab tak Mumma bhi jag jaye...

Ram: (Pihu nods in No)...

Pihu: Papa can I wait with you...I don't want to go home...I want to be with Mumma and You...

Ram: Pihu...you need some rest Baby...ok jao Nanu ke saath...

Ram: (he tries to give Pihu to Sudhir...Pihu again nods No and looks down. The tears that had stopped few minutes back surface again and this time they are more fast)

Ram: (seeing Pihu cry...he holds her very close to him) it's ok..ok...aap yahan Mumma and Papa ke saath raho...Papa is not sending you anywhere...and (slowly moves his hand across Pihu's back to calm her down)...

Nutz: (goes at Ram's back...and wipes Pihu's tears...and kisses her forehead)

Sudhir: Ram ...bete agar koi bhi baat ho toh turant phone kar lena...humlog aajayenge...

Saying bye to Pihu...Sudhir, Shipra and Natasha leave from there and go to their house...

Ram sits on the sofa and makes Pihu sit on his lap...

Ram: (kissing her forehead and taking her hand in his...) Pihu you know what...aap ekdum ziddi ho...apne Mumma aur Papa ki taraha...

Ram: (Pihu looks at Ram) ho na

Pihu: nods in yes...

Ram: oh...my Rockstar ...my Baby...

This gets a smile on Pihu's face after a very long time...


Precap: Ram, Pihu taking care of Priya...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
touching😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
love it let see how ram pihu take care of priya hope u update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Awww..!! That was a indeed very beautiful and cute update.. Both rockstar has steal the whole update.. Needless to say i loved it.. Waiting for the weekend and for ur updates..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Absolutely brilliant...
keep going liked it a lot...
thank u so much for the nice and descent pure love story...
:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
very heart touching update waiting 4 nxt pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
beautifully showed Ram-pihu bonding. get well soon priya waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
awww!, my poor baby, she must be suffering a lot, first it was kidnap and now Priya in hospital, uss choti si bachhi ke upar bohot kuch guzar raha hain, I love the way Ram handling her and making her comfortable, don't worry Peehu ur papa will not let happen anything to ur mumma, u made me a bit emotional, thank u for updating early will eagerly wait for next part, take care
Edited by jineejiggs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
i am loving the plot of the story very sensible plz cont

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