RaYa confrontation Updated @ PG 06 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww..Maliha...Awesome...just loved it!!👍🏼
plzzz update soon😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Welcome Maliha! What a fantastic start to your FF...the love, the longing that is signature of RaYa is all there making it all the more interesting😉. Really, want to know what's written it that letter😳. Pls update soon 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update dear... continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update.. plz continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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actually i wrote this FF before the custody drama unfolded in BALH. anyway here goes update!!

Part – 03

Ram - looking through the window. And then he looks at his watch. "It is only 5.34 pm. Then why the sky looks so dark? Do i share any relationship with the nature? "Yes, of course. I do share!! Those who know how to love can be in love with everything in the world! Priya, do you really know how to love? Is it possible that the pioneer gets lost in her own philosophy? Only the nature can answer this to me. "

The sky was about to answer him but that chafe sound again afflicts him!!

Rajat – priya, please try to understand.

Priya – sir, please you try to understand. You have to accept that…..suddenly her eyes gleams to see ram there. She walks toward ram with a concerned look. "Ram, are you OK? Why have you come here? You should have called me if you need something."

Now rajat's face looks cloudy!!! Ram gives a look to him. He nods his head in avoidance and says "Please, say hi to pihu. I will take your leave. I will make the arrangement then."

Ram – sorry to interrupt between business partners, but what you will arrange? Return ticket to Dubai? Don't you think Dubai is missing you? Should I help you or will you arrange it by yourself?

Rajat – thank you.

Ram – anything for you! Priya, can you please close the door or should I? Your neighbors may get irritated with the personal conversation between a husband and wife!

Priya – then, ok sir. I will say hi to pihu on behalf of you. Bye!

A few moment of silence & eye lock between RaYa.

Priya hesitates for a while then says– Mr. kapoor, aap batheiyena please.

Ram – I am not here to sit on your sofa. Where is my rock star? I am here to take my daughter to the place where she really belongs to.

Priya (in a bawling voice) – what are saying, mr kapoor? Aaj hi? She has gone to a birthday party with neha & ridima.

Ram – ok, then I will wait for her.

Priya- you can't do this to me! Please give me two days at least. I want to spend some time with her.

Ram (in agitation) – you have spent five long years with her! Now you want two more days? Then why have you sent that letter to me saying that you are ready to give pihu to me?

Priya – because I can do anything to make you happy.

Ram bursts in anger & says hah priya. I know that you can do anything for me! You can leave me for five long years; you can fake your death to make me happy! And now, why did you stay back here, priya? I didn't ask you to bring me to the hospital from that weeding hall? You could silently leave for dubai with your majnu.

Priya brusts into tear "Stop it Mr. kapoor. For god's sake, please stop it. "Why did you marry Ayesha, to make your dead wife happy?

precap - RaYa confrontation continues……

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesum maliha 👏
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Seems interesting... but wt is dis yar, dis is too short.. do cont with a longer update plz... And yeah, rename the title of the thread with page number ;))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice Update Maliha dear😊
Plz...continue😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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l 😆 Malihadi Why only trailer? When main picture will start?

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part – 04

Priya (in a grudge voice) Why did you marry Ayesha, RAM? Did you really feel that I will smile from the hell for your stupidity? Tears flow from her eyes. With every drop, all the complaints that she couldn't solicitant to anybody in the past two months are flowing today! Ram could smell her jealousy to the bit.

Ram (with the atonement of winning almost half of the battle!) so priya does it hurt, to see your lovable ones to dance in the arm of someone else's?

p- Yes. Mr. kapoor. It hurts. It really hearts. It vibes that someone is piercing a bullet in you!

Priya is likely to be broken down.

R – So the pain is same here too priya.

P (garishly) - pain is same means? Should I admonish you that it was you who is married?

R – ohhh. Come on priya. This is exactly what you wanted nah? You wanted me to move on, that's why I moved on!

P (Xerox like ram)- ohhh. Come on, ram! I was dead to you nah? Then how could you know that I wanted you to move on with my own sister?

Hah, ram I shouldn't stay here back. Actually I didn't want that too. How could I disturb your khushal married life? But in the weeding hall when you fainted, I couldn't bridle myself!

R – That means if you didn't slip, you would fly for Dubai with your majnu, right? I wonder that is he working as a morning guard here? That day he was here at 6 am. Did he work as a night guard in Dubai? This time ram doesn't even try to hide his feeling. Priya, your home deserves a better guard than him!

Ram's aching eyes could explore anytime! Before Ram could explore, priya bursts out!

P (jeering) - what's your problem ram? You always blame me that I imparted you from your daughter. Have you ever asked me that how did I give birth to her, how have I raised her? What was her first word? How she looked when took her first step? What I have told her about her father? Never ram. Instead of that you always bothered about rajat sir. Priya is not even able to talk properly because of her effluxes.

Ram in a conscience stricken state, cascading his head! He doesn't even know when tears started to flow from his eyes.

R - I was craving to know priya. But I thought that you don't consider me as a part of your life anymore. I wanted you to share every single thing but you didn't priya. Yes, I was angry. But I wanted you to cart off my anger. I wanted to see my old priya who confessed her love to me. Who had the Aptitude to make me listen to her every nonsense talk! But you didn't claim your right on me, because it was you who moved on leaving me behind. You didn't even look back for once.

P (continues) - I know ram that I have made a mistake, The grave one. I deprived you from the joy of being a father. But I had some foolish reasons ram! Priya breaks down on her knee. That time I couldn't find out any other option ram. Please forgive me for once.

Ram (feeling helpless) "does this lady own a magic wand? Her each & every movement still makes me love her more and more."

P (she is not in her control, does not bother anymore that what is she saying ) - if you can forgive Ayesha, who was responsible for sending me to jail, then why can't you forgive your own priya, ram?

This sentence drives him berserk! "I have forgiven Ayesha? You are the one who forgave her when you were in jail. That's why…just leave…you wont be able to understand it,"

I am ready to forgive you priya. But just give back me those lost five years back. Why should I ask you about my daughter's childhood? I want to be a part of it. I want to experience it; I want to live every single moment of it. He quivers priya by her shoulder & barks "can you? Answer me, priya?"

Priya amputates & takes a step back. There is an incredible glare in priya's eyes "I can ram. But you can't! "

Her behavior leaves ram addle.

Precap (next week) –something important regarding priya's past reveals

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