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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 2

awesome update dear loved the supanse u kept threw out the update ... whoes voice Ram heard there was it of Rajat???? moving to read next let's see...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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par t 3
so i was right Rajat is there ohh god why he can't leave Mr. & Mrs. Kapoor alone but loved how Ram gets possesive for Priya seeing Rajat... awww chubby hubby... but later on all anger flowded on Priya so he want to take Pihu right away now with him... so unfair to small baby... hope everything goes welll as last part shows once anger brust out everything will be fine...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 4

awesome update yaar roaring tiger & tigress r ragging with pain & love... i just love it... it shows how much still they love each other n want each other to be next to them... suprab wrritenn moving to next to read...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
part 5

finally read every part but last part was most touching Ram reading Priya's diery mad me cry to how much she curved for Ram during thouse day were so thouching & then our Golu ready to face his sharni... woowowowow waiting for next do update sooon plzzz...zzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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leena dear, i enjoyed ur comment. u summed it up so well. TY all. means a lot. 😃
Edited by maliha.islam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...Api...Awesome update👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
You Rockk😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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eagerly waiting dear for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
The sun caved in the west horizon, & night proclaims its appearance! Before a while, there was sound of cloudburst, but now even the sky seems to be clammed up. Does this calmness convey the message of the approaching storm or something else? It looks like that the sky is griping an extreme pain, a secret in its treasury for years! Today it wants to blow out, but just waiting for something conspicuous to happen!

Priya @ the balcony

Looking at the sky, sighs breathe of relief! "Finally, ram u got the chance to cherish some lost moments of your daughter's childhood. This is the least way I could chasten your pain a little bit. I captured every moment of pihu there. I tried to keep them alive just for u, ram. But I couldn't gather the courage to show it to u. "

Ram in the hall room (in a gloomy mood)

"priya's eyes was confident enough. The way she looked at me, that surely expressed that she could guess that I read her diary. But why didn't she react? But in a sense, it's better for me that she didn't react! ""Am I missing her torture!? Am I sad that she didn't rebuke me for my mistake? Do I yarn for that? " he feels hurt !

{May be Ram is missing her torture as he is just looking like a teenager who had a fight with his most favorite friend, but can't go to her as it would harm his "image". But it's true that sometimes we do side line our ego for our near & dear one, because our "ego" is just as little as a word in front of our love. So every time ram just finds out a new way to talk to priya! }

@ The balcony

Ram enters there & finds priya standing in a detached way. There is a dewdrop of tear shining in the corner of priya's eyes, but not ready to flow yet! May be they too, are waiting for the right time to start raining!
R (starts the convo suddenly) – You were talking about something which you can do, btw I can't when I asked u to give back those lost five years of my daughter's childhood? You were talking about your diary, Right?
Priya gets awakened by his voice" Diary, which diary ram? "
R - That one which you preserved for me!
Now her tears have got the right opportunity to flow!
R – priya, I couldn't write diary that doesn't mean that I didn't miss u.. If u missed something, then I missed everything. U could pacify yourself as pihu was with u. may be I literally can't give those years back to u…but….the feeling is same priya.
R "U can't blame me that I can't give back those years. I too can, u can feel it if u go to your NGO. There u will find "a priya" in every orphan kid! I taught them those ways of living which u commended on me. "
P (thinking)- "This is the same kid who used to fight with me for every silly reason. Yes, ram you r right. We can't live those moments again which we lost. I m sorry ram, that I have hurt u so much. I wish I wouldn't leave u alone. At heart u r still the same as your 5 years daughter is!"
Ram gets angry as he finds that priya is not giving attention to what he is saying as she is lost in her own thought. Ram continues to talk about the diary!
R - (A little bit louder) "priya, are u listening to me?" "But still, if u think that I can't give back those days when u missed my company, I will start to write a dairy expressing my feelings that what did I miss!" "Through your diary I may get to feel those days, but can't live those lost moment".
Priya seems to forget all the bitter reality of her life & keeps staring at her ram. She gives him a naughty look which means "Golu ki golu hi rehe gaye!"
P - I didn't mean that, ram that u should write a diary! Every person has his own way to express himself. You don't need to do that at all.
Ram feels elated to see his naughty priya back! Ram remembers the holy scene, the supreme moment of their life when they were actually together.
R – So, madam, what did u mean?
P- As u said through my diary you can't live those moments, I agree! I know that I have deprived u from the amusement of being a father. And there is only one way to rectify for that! That's why I told that I can give u the pleasure to live those moments! I meant that we can recreate, we can experience the happiness, together again! But this time you are not able to do that!
Priya looks at him straightly! There is a mixed expression in her eyes! There is assurance in her eyes that she can do that but at the same time there is a hidden pain too, Looks like there is an impediment in their path which ram can't remove. Ram feels bewildered! What she is trying to say! He goes closer to her & holds her by her shoulder which aback priya to the reality.
R (feeling rejuvenated) touches her check "do u really think that I can't?"
P- Ram…just forget about that! At that moment I was not in my sense, that's why I articulated those rubbish!
R (holding her firmly) – no, answer me, priya! Why should forget? I haven't forgotten anything. It is you who is ignoring the fact.
P (screaming) - ram, u have another family now. M I ignoring the fact, How could I ignore that you are married now!
R (being dauntless) as far I know I have one family only. Yes, you are ignoring the fact that we are married! As far I know, I m married only to you priya!!!

There is an absurd silence in the room. But wind starts blowing outside. Soon it starts raining!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Can we get the CV's to understand the simple truth that when the first wife is alive there is no second wife
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Awesome update dear...so my honey bunny jaldi se update karo...waiting for ur update!!!

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