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deepa

@deepa1993

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Hi. Dont say sry... its awsm yr..

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deepa

@deepa1993

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

I like both r gud... u r a fabulous writter...

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haribol79

@haribol79

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

both versions were written superbly..
Thanks for taking my suggestion... and SWITCHING OFF PRIYA 'S MOBILE!!! LOL
KEEP ROCKING..: )

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

your writing has a tremendous way to soothe the emotion, very aesthetic yet utter romantic, no hurry no vulgarity, yet extremely passionate, I loved it, whenever I read ur FF, I feel very relaxed, it is pure and serene and in these updates too I find that, never loved so much any consummation scene in writing, keep up the good work and continue ASAP, love the way RaYa plan for their child

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jatre

@jatre

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

romantic update😳,u catch emotions so well and put them in right place.great writing.😃😳👏

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#356

can we have the next part please, am waiting impatiently

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Shikha

@shikha.8176

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#357

Neha, i really liked d Anklet scene...
The love in a relationship as well respect is very important, you have portraitd so Aesthetically, i am breathless.. Love ur narration Neha.

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Advitha

@Sakshiram

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Posted: 12 years ago

#358

hi neha di i m new to this forum, this is my second post , luv ur writing vry much continue soon

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Evan

@-evan-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#359

Wow, Neha, just read last three parts... I'm telling you, it is really the best consummation scene I've ever read on RaYa, kudos👍🏼 👍🏼

Now I'd like to read a pregnancy track and Ram taking care of his beloved ones...this is something I was crazily craving to see in the show, but I guess there is not even any possibility of that happening there 😔