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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jayashs

How adorable! Lovely update... Thanks!

And yeah, the flashback was icing on the cake :)! Too cute PPR :):):)!



Thank you so much 😉 Glad that you liked it ..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fanraya

Awee such a cute update, love it..



Thank you so much 😉😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jatre

wow lovely update.plz continue soon😊👏😃



Thank you so much 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: daggarwal14

Nic update..ufff..its paining awsm..



Thank you so much 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sinalbest

hi di...

waiting for a long update bt its short...
bt a super duper blast... 😊
loved it...
plz update asap.. waiting very eagerly for next update... with a lengthy update 😉


Hey thank you so much dear ..The next one will be surely long one ..stay tuned will post soonish.,...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04

part 4
awesome update yaar... so happy Ram is angry still taking so gud care of Priya... awww she is feeling him all over again wowo i m loving this RaYaPee is getting so cute more n more... awww loved Priya's gifts for Ram it was not just gifts but love for Ram... wow her gift of video cd's one was the best i loved it awesome... yaar i just loved it n the way Ram seeing the all things n then he kept the pic in his pocket was the best part... now just moving to read next...



Haila girl ...waiting for your comment dear ..
Yah he is angry on her why she left him ..
but he still loves her from bottom of his heart ..Yah as you said those gifts were love for Ram ...
Thank you so much for your wonderful feed back...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04

part 5

short yet sweet Neel love the way Ram made secrates with his duaghter... n our rockstar knoqs everything abt loving RaYa hay chota packet bada dhamaka... she so reminds of Ram just like carban copy of him... awww way to big then her age...awesome update yaar n what a perfect end... waitong now for next do update soon...



Yah this is a bit of short .. coming one is long one stay tuned it ..
Peehu will bring them back .. She is exactly a carbon copy ...Thank you so much next one will be soonish ...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Oneandall

That was so nice. Loved how ram bit her cheeks. Lol...So adorable..
But one complaint why is it sooo short??
Next time i want it to be super long with lot of raya and peehu...
Btw i am asking i am demanding.. 😛



Hey sheethal ... 😆😆 I too loved that scene how Ram bit her cheeks ...
Hmm your complint forwarded and going toupdate long one ..
Hmm wether you are asking or demanding both are going to fulfill now ...
Stay tuned darling ..Thank youso much for the lovely feed back

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Posted: 12 years ago
The next update is after this post ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part-6



Thats why i want to feed you ..But madam dont want from my hand ...Feeding a spoon to her

Aisa nahi hai Mr.Kapoor ..wo mai chahithi ki aap bhi hamarae sath ...
Peehu held a spoon near to his mouth ..
Papa khao na ...Priya ,Ram eyes met with their Daughter's eyes ...
Happily threesome had a perfect dinner ..
Ram embraced peehu in his arms started to read a bed time story for her ..He so engorsed in the story ..startled when he heard peehu snoring..
She is lying down on his stomach ..while he is breathing peehu is also moving up & down ...
Ram gazed at her princess than at Priya ...They both looked so pretty to him ..
He place peehu beside priya ,,gave a kiss on peehu forhead ,aswellas Priya's forehead ..
He slowly moved from there after assuring Priya has fast asleep ...

He hide his excitement he so wanted to be with the beautiful memories of His princess and how Priya managed to give them in videos & pics..


He walked towards the closet ,opend the bag opened the 3rd number gift ...

He found a CD in there ...he followed to the adjacent room and kept it in the hometheater ..


Hiii Ram ...with a cheerful voice & angelic smile came infront of him ..That is nonother than priya ...

She looked at the screen [ i mean him ] ...Ram do you know she is 21 days old today ,daijaan told to keep her in cradle ...
Seee how the new cradle of our baby ..It is too small adjacent to Priya's bed ,She dressed peehu in a blue colour frock ...
Tears in her eyes ..Im so missing you Ram she unclasped a chain from her neck ,adorned the chain to peehu's neck ...
The camera moving too close up shot to the chain's locket ...Priya's tone sharpend "Hey raina what r u doing ..record properly i dont want miss any "
Raina: Oh priya aunti ..let me shoot this ...
Ohhh he was overhelmed seeing the locket ..That locket contained his photoframe endorned it ...
Ram was too astonished to speak up anything ...or act anything ..He was too overhelmed to react to ...
Rammm "her words brought back to this world "
Rammm you have to be there with her all the time..I know i cant provide her with your love but i know like this i can keep her contact with you ...
In the night she should not afraid of anything you will be there na Ram..caressing the locket with her hands she kissed it soon he caresesd his cheek with his hand that he felt that she was given to him at the moment ...
Peehu cried in high picth tone...
she looked at the camera ...Took peehu from the cradle you know Ram she is too hungry like you ...
She started give feeding to peehu..She closed her eyes Im missing you Ram..Plzzz forgive me for this ..Tears rolling down from her eyes ..
Raina": Priya aunty common cheer up ..she closed the video on her tears ...
He replayed it ..and paused at when priya kept peehu in cradle ..he caressed her lil pricess cheeks ...
I love you baby ..I love you soo much ...

Soon he pulled the number 4 gift packet ...
He found a CD in that too ...A high pitch cry surrounded in the room ..Peehu was crying priya was struggling to put her sleep ..He so wanted to take her in his arms to soothen up ...When she started feeding she stopped crying ...
Ohhh Ram ye bahuth jiddi hai aapke tarah ..I want to feed her this syrup but Ye toh your daughter hai na ...Not even tasting it ..
Kya karu baba ... Ye toh bilkul aapki tarah tears rolled down from her cheeks ..

Raina : aunty bolo na bolo na...

Shh priya made her sshhh ..Ram ye raina hai ...She is the cutest kid and she is the one who took the videos of mine to you ..

And she recoreded everything and today she learn to how to save it in CD and she saved it ,gave it to me ..
She is soon learing a good photograaphy hai na ...
Auntyyy Raina pouted ...
Ok ok baba Priya smiled broadly ...She got a prize in her school for the best photography and you know what was that ...
She showed a pic of Peehu when she is nibbling her thumb ...It was too cute and he apprciated in his heart ..'Raina you will become amazing photographer "
Thanks for the sweet gift ...
She made peehu lie down there and went from there ..Soon Peehu turned on her stomach and wherever priya is moving she is trying to move around her ...
He smiled broadly at her lil princess antics ..Peehu is trying to move forward fidjeting with the blanket to move forward when she fails she started crying...
Priya ran to her ..Ye dekho Ram ...she is not even wanting to move away from her ..She blushed a bit "Like YOU " ..
Im missing you Ram ..see her eyes she is 100% resembles you .. Raina shoot her eyes ..see Ram she is exactly like you ..
Mesmerizing looks ..Love you and love her alot ...
That video ended by Priya hugged peehu by side ,Ram's locket on Peehus chest ,and peehu smiling broadly ...



Oh he so wanted to be part of there ...Why you did this to me priya why ?? He collapsed in front of the screen ...

Admiring each scene of the beautiful moments ...

He hold up the Cds and placed it very careful and packed and kept at the same place ..


He came to their room .. He covered both of his angels with quilt properly ..

He was very angry on priya but while seeing her vulnerable state in the videos and right now ..He wants to love her at this time .. He controled his emotions leaned against her kissed her parted lips slowly ...She stirred in her sleep ..He wants to take her in his arms and let out all sorrows in her adorable hug ...

The clock strikes 6 '0 clock ...

Priya got up from her dreamy sleep ... He held her hand possesively which was lying on peehu's waist ..
She freed her arm from his tight grip ...She gave a kiss on peehu's cheeks ..She needs to go to wash room ..
She got up feels lil bit dizzy ..Soon she gathered strength walked few steps ..Her gait is wobbly ..
She know she has to wake him up she needs support ...
She flunged herself beside Ram .. He stirred in his sleep ...She lazily caressed on his face ...calling "Ram "
Ram opened her eyes lazily to look at whats on his stomach .. Priya fidgeting his kurtha button ..calling Ram in a feeble voice ..
He jerked .woke up from his cloudy sugary sleep ,Asked priya what happen ..do you need anything ..
Ram ...wo mai ..I want to go for washroom..
He slid his arms on her waist ,he supported her upto the washroom..
She freed herself from him ,Walks forward ...
2nd step she felt her knees shivered ...She cant call him inside ..
As she know she is not going to be that strength ..She struggled to go forward ...
5 mins passed ..He is waiting impatiently outside ...Soon he went inside his guess was correct she was leaning on the wall ..
Priya ..Priya he jerked her up... a feeble "mmm" came from her ...
He helped her to get her things down ..she protested him but he helped her ...[There are some adorable couples in the world thus line is especially for them , the husband will help in every need of her when she was vulnerable ]
She came outside telling him ..Im ..I cant walk ...Im feeling cold she strted shivering badly ..He lifted her up in his arms...
Placed in bed ..He moved peehu on oneside ..He gave medicine to her ,slid behind her ...
She was very well awake .He confused whether to hug her or not ...
She pleaded him..Plzzz ku..kuch kariye na ...

She held his arms in his hold ..He hugged her in no minute ...

Gave her warmthness she needed ...
Soon she found the warmth ness in his huge embrace ...
Rammm she looked up at him ..Plzz tears rolling down from her eyes as well as his eyes ..
why she betrayed him ???God how can one loves a person soo much ...
Ramm she hugged him more tightly ...Ram whatever you want to punish im ready to take it ..
But plzzz i cant take when you are cold to me ..Plzzz Ram i love you ..I really really do ..
Which i loved the most in this world that is you Ram ...
If that love only paining me how can i ..i ..be in peace Ram...
I know i did mistake noo blunder But what to do its just for your sake ..For your protection only ..
For you Ram whatevr i did its for your well being ..I love you ..I love you ..i love youu ...the voice slow down very very small peack ..she slipped of to sleep on his chest ..He hugged her tight very possesively ..




Hey some one plz create a siggie for this SS, Its my simple request to all of you ..
plz plz can anyone make a sigge ..I will be happy ..

Thank you very much for sapring your time to read this FF and make me feel happy with your commnets ... Thank you soo much ...
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🤗❤️🤗❤️🤗❤️God bless you all


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Edited by luvsakshi - 12 years ago

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