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aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
its going good. Love the way u highlighted on other person, like om Vikram Neha then convo b/w KK and Natasha and then with Karthik, I loved ur way, continue ASAP

dear for liking it... i will try to update soon

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aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: aiyathasan
dear for liking it... i will try to update soon

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Eram

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

superb update but after long time plz update soon

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aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: viny_queen
superb update but after long time plz update soon

tnx di next time i will update soon...

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aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

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part 6

the moon is covered by the cloud... in the garden the butterflies are flying one flower to another flowers for searching their food... the water fall r making a magical sound... its a perfect night... the grass are wet... whenever the cloud move from the moon the water drop on the leaf glowing like a diamond... the birds are humming like a singer, sounds of the waterfall are hearing like a soft music bit...
ram shifts priya off his lap and helping her to sit on the bed... for a second they do not break their eye lock... he is wearing black suite, no tie, his white shirt open at he collar... his brown eyes are glowing... its impossible for priya to understand what is his eyes wanted to say... in his eyes there is so much pain, so much fear, so much concern... his hot gaze at her making her weak... she cant take her eyes from ram... he is looking so hot and irresistible...
priya moves from the bed and wanking towards the window... priya is gazing at the out side... she if feeling like a she comes a another world... a world which only belongs to ram and priya... ram and priya both names sounds so good into together... there are so much peace in this place... priya knows that this the place she belongs to... her and his man ram s world... one thing which makes priya more happy that this beautiful world is decorated by her love, her man... every corner in this house is witness of ram s presence... priya also knows that this the first time that ram brought any girl here... now she is feeling lucky that her man brought her here that means he cares about her...
i cant believe that i m standing in his private bed room... which is belongs only him... i dont know i m angry at ram or not... i feel happy when he touche me it feel like heaven... it feels that my dead skin got what it wants... i wants him... i wanted to love him... kiss him every inch in his body... he is mine only mine... i cant let him go... he is my breath my heartbeat my love... i know this is not the right decision to make love before marriage... i dont want to think about logic... if it is a crime to make love before marriage i will definitely happy to make this crime...
ram get up from bed and stepping towards the music player... he plays a soft romantic melody song... he switch off the all light... the moonlight make the room attractive... ram takes some slow steps and standing beside her... she is still lost in her thought... she does not realize that ram is standing beside her... ram gaze at her, her face glowing like a moon... the wind caressing her face... some amount of her hair fall onto her face... ram cant control himself anymore ... his finger make his way to her face.. at first it tugs her hair behind her ear... feeling his touch priya shut her eyes... and she is biting her lips... rams finger move from her ear to her cheek...his mouth touch her ear and he slowly whispers please dont bit your lip... immediately priya leave he lip...priya gaze up at him... ram s hand moves to her hair gently he pulls out each hairpin one at a time... you have a such a beautiful hair priya ...he murmurs, ... ram s mouth is close to her ear and piya feels his breath thought his lips doesnot touch her... when my hair is free of pins he runs his fingers thought it gently messaging her scalp.. priya close her eyes and savor this sensation... r u feeling relax now? he whisper in her ear... priya shyly nodded positively... can you dance with me? looking at her eyes ram asked this to priya... priya reply it in positive...
ram pulls priya in his arms, his one hand moving to her waist and hold it gently priya keep her one hands on his shoulder and another in his hand... ram firmly hold her waist and pulls her more closer to him... bg song ( jism to srif aak bahanaa hain ruh tak saath saath janana hain haath jabse hain hain teri haath mein phir haath mein zamanna hain) priya directly looks at his eyes, their eyes meet... without breaking the eye contact they are moving smoothly...(lo shuru aab chaahaton ka silsila ho raha hain... mit rahi hain duriyan aur faasla kho raha hain.. ho rahi hain baat kuch aisi jisme... ho rahi hain baat kuch aisi jisme shabd ghum hain ... arth matlab gum ho raha hain) they r still looking each other... ram scoops her up and spins her under his arms, and again start to move in a slow rhythm...they cant take their eyes from each other... they r feeling like that everything is standstill...ram takes his mouth near her ear and whisper do you know priya you have most beautiful eyes and skin that i ever seen and feel... bg song( ruth na pehle kabhi itni jawaan... thoda naya sa lagra hain yeh jahaan.. aayega aur bhi aisa hi samaa.. haan humesha do dilon ko pyaara sa jo raha hain) they are now stands with holding each other... lost in their eyes... priya moves his hands towards his neck to hair clutching his hair tightly she pulls him near her lips... their lips are apart in some inches... priya longingly looking at her eyes and lips ( dil yeh chaahe tutkar chaahoon tumhe... dedoo ijaazat tutne ki tum hamein) ram close his eyes priya brush her lips with ram and takes his upper lip in her mouth and suck it hardly then she slip her tongue in his mouth now they r both tasting each other... (chunke rakh lo chaahaton ke yeh lamhen ... yun sambhalkar thamlo lo pal dekho who kho raha hain) they r kissing each other like a mad... ram one hands is roaming back side body of priyas... and another hands holds priyas neck for supporting... (lo shuru aab chaahaton ka silsila ho raha hain... mit rahi hain duriyan aur faasla kho raha hain.. ho rahi hain baat kuch aisi jisme... ho rahi hain baat kuch aisi jisme shabd ghum hain ... arth matlab gum ho raha hain) they break the kiss for taking some air..ram puts his hand on her waist and pick up her in his arms priya puts her hands around his neck and entwine her fingers... ram leads to the bed... he gently put priya down and sits beside her... ram sweeps priya s hair over her shoulder and trails a finger across the top of her back from shoulder to shoulder... priya shiver in anticipation... ram plants a tender kiss on her back and trails his finger in her back his finger stop caressing when it touch the blouse hook... he round his finger around the hook and for a brief second ram open the blouse hook... priya close her eyes tightly and clutching rams coat... priya is feeling butterfly in her belly...she is feeling weak in her knees... ram peels her dress down from her arms... trailing kisses from the nape of her neck to the edge of her shoulder... between each kiss ram murmurs" i want you so much,i want to be inside you" each word is intoxicating for priya......

neha and vikram lying on the bed in each other arms... they are taking about their past their present and future... it is indeed a beautiful night for them... they do not get the time to spend each other... vikarm always busy with his worker and nehas time passed running behind their childern... after a long time they get the chance to spend some quality time with each other...
neha: vikram mujhe kiyu aisa lag rahi ha ki ram aur priya ki beaach aaj kuch hogi...
vik: tum pagol to nahi ho gaiye? tumhe pata hain na ram kis type ladki ke shate date pey jata hain? priya uss type ki bilkul nahi hain...
neva: mujhe pata hain fervi agger mein priya ki jaigai hoti tho mein uss moka ko jane nahi date...
vik: iska matlab kya huin a?
neha: mein jisse pyar karti huin o agger meyre pass ho aur uske saath mujhe akele ak room mein sone ko chance milato mein kabhi iss mokeyko janey nahi dungi...
vik: yaar kidding karna band karo... akk kam karte hain tum nuts ko phn karo aur kaho o avi bahar hamare shate chal paygi aiya nahi...
neha: itne raat ko hum kaha jara hain?
vik: ram ki farm house par...
neha: what? hum kiyu jaiange o ha pey?
vik: mein nahi chati ki ram aur priya ki beech abhi kuch ho... kiyu ki agar kuch ho agaito priya tut jaiyge...
neha: nuts ko leyne ki jorrurot nahi hain... am aur priya embarrass feel kare gi... pehely hum jake deykte hain ki un dono kiya kar rahi hain...
vik: not a bad idea baby...

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Edited by aiyathasan - 12 years ago

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cloud121

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Awesome update...Thanks for update...plz contonue soon!!! 🤗

Edited by Alya1991 - 12 years ago

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cloud121

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Edited by Alya1991 - 12 years ago

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Priya is so aggressive, I didn't think that, she is completely in love with Ram, but I fear if Ram don't reciprocate her feeling after this, for him love don't exist doesn't matter to him but Priya will be shattered if he left her, hope everything will be fine, will eagerly wait for next part, update ASAP