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aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Alya1991
Nice update...hey please jaldi s update krna...plz...plz...plz...

tnx dear... next part i will update soon...😊

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aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Raya_some
amazing update soon ... pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls its just magical

tnx dear...

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pinky2606

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

wonderful ff yar totally love it

lram ko kab hoga priya ki pyar ka ehsaas

next one jaldi update karo

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

wowoow story is taking really nice twist & turns it feels like something is really worse in Ram's past who made him what he is today... n waiting for story to get unfold... really nice start at least RaYa r together chahe kahin dur hi kyun na ho... really nice... waiting for next do update next soon...

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aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: pinky2606
wonderful ff yar totally love it
lram ko kab hoga priya ki pyar ka ehsaas
next one jaldi update karo

tnx dear... for liking it

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aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: leena04
wowoow story is taking really nice twist & turns it feels like something is really worse in Ram's past who made him what he is today... n waiting for story to get unfold... really nice start at least RaYa r together chahe kahin dur hi kyun na ho... really nice... waiting for next do update next soon...

hey di thank u so much for reading it again... ur comment means a lot to me...

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aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

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part 5

it is a cool moonlit night... the moon make the night more beautiful... priya is standing on the balcony... she had never seen such a beautiful place... she has always dreams a house like that... she closed her eyes for inhaling the fragrance of the flowers... life is seems so beautiful when i m with ram there is no pain no fear... but it is not the truth ram is not with me... i m alone as usual...he will never love me... he will never accept me in his life... why God doing all this to me.. he knows very well that i fell weak when i saw him i cant control myself... i cant ignore him... in my every breath i think about him... he is my hope my desire my everything... but i know i dont mean anything to him... i knows something had happened in his past thats why he is always behaving like this... who will tell me what happened in his past? i need someones help, but who will help me to find the truth? i cant see him like this... his eyes always shows his pain... i just wanted to take his all pain... make him a better man... a tear is trickling down her face, i cant go home today.. it is such a mental torture to spend a night with ram ,,,,,,, we can spend the night like a husband wife or boy friend or girl friend.. but i wanted to touch him feel him.. i just wanted to feel his lips... priya turns around and see ram is still siting on the bed and reading something... he is looking so adorable... oh god how someone look so cute... priya cant take her eyes from ram... ram feels that priya is staring him, now ram is feeling awkward he does not know why... this is not the first time that someone is staring at him but when girls staring at him he felt irritating but now he is feeling awkward and shy... he always thinks that priya is different from other girls she will never apply so much make up or try to make her ultra modern ... he always notice her for her simplicity... and today also when she bumped with him he became speechless that time she was looking so hot and inviting that he wanted to kiss her...he never seen any girl so beautiful in saree... priya looks his way and their eyes lock...priya is paralyzed staring at the impossible handsome man who gazes at her with some unfathomable emotion, his gaze hot burning into her.. and ram and priya are lost for a moment staring at each other... priya takes some steps and bolt the balcony door she is feeling cold... she walking near the bed and takes her sawl and wrapped it in her arms when she moves from there ram tugs her and and before she knows it she is on his lap... he has his arm around priya and his nose in her hair... priya wants to struggle out of his hold, to maintain some distance.. but ram arms are wrapped around her and he is pressing her to his chest... priya melts on this is where she wants to be she rests her head again him ... priya close her eyes to savor the moment... it is like her dreams come true... she is now in her man s arm... she does not want to think anything... she just wanted to feel the moment... she always dreams about this... ram hold her more tightly and kissing her hair repeatedly... ram does not know what happens him suddenly he does not know why he feeling so secure so relax... ram has never think that he will do something like that... he does not know what is priya thinking.. but now ram does not want to think anything... they both are lost in their arms...

vikram what r u doing yaar, u know one thing u r such a useless person... neha said all this in a angry voice
why r u saying all this to me baby, have i done anything wrong? vikram replied it in a low voice..
what was i told you? neha asked this to vikram..
you told me that we should do something so that we can make ram realize that priya is perfect for him.. vikram answer it...
so r u thinking any thing? neha asked
yaar thoda time to do mein tume soch ke bata dunga ... now just relax.. saying this vikram hug her and both of the fall on the bed... vikram is looking at her with so much love, neha u know , u r most beautiful women i have ever seen, u r sitll so young and sexy ... nobody have never believe that u have three children... one thing i also wanted to say that i love you so much... neha is feeling shy her face become red... hey why r u become so red this is not the first time that i m praising you... yes this not the first time but whenever u said all this i felt that i m the most beautiful woman ... thank you for making me feel always special and by the way i love you too...

kk is sitting on her bed and natasha is also there...
kk : when will u go again paris?
nutz: mom next week...
kk: does it know your brother.?
nuzt: yes mom bhai knows this... mom i wanted to tell you something..
kk: yes beta tell me whats the problem..
nuzt: mom i m in love... i dont know when i fall in love before coming there we r just friend but after coming her i realize that i love him mom and i cant live without him...
kk: who is this boy and what does he do?
nutz: his name is kartik sharma... i had met him in paris.. he is donig his graduation their.. mom he is very nice boy... i like him for his honesty... he has one sister and his parents and his sister live in here... his sister is still unmarried...
kk: does he knows that u love him?
nutz: no mom i do not tell him anything, i need your opinion ?
kk: beta this is your life and i know you r very sensible girl you will not do anything that will hurt me or your bhai... if u think he is perfect for you and he will make him happy then talk to him... i m with you and you know dear he can do anything for your happiness..
nutz; i love you mom... u r the best mom in this world but mom bhai you know he will never support this.. he hates love marriage... what i tell him? and i know if kartik find it that i love him he defiantly tells this to his sister... and he will send her sister to talk with bhai...
kk: dont worry beta everything will be fine... you know your bhai can do anything for your happiness... so dont worry about it... by the way where is your bhai?
nutz: he is in his farm house, sometimes ago bhai called me and said that he will not able to come home today...
kk: ok beta now go to your bed... its already to late...

nutz kiss her mother forehead and leave the room... going to her room she is calling to kartik after some rings kartik pick up the phone
nutz: kyse ho tum?
kartik: mein thik huin tum kaise ho?
nuzt: mein vhi acche huin... kartik mujhe tumse kuch kehena hain?
kartik: kya huina nuts r u ok?
nuzt: yes i m fine... but aaj k baat thik rahungi aur nahi aiya pata nahi..
kartik: matlab?
nutz: matlab aab sab kuch tumpar depend karta hain... kartik i just wanna to say that i love you nuts say all this in a one breath...'
kartik: what? kya kaha tumne?
nutz: i love you... i cant live without you...
kartik: i love you too nuts.. i cant tell you how much happy i m... i also wanted to tell this but i feeling nerves that u will reject me... i cant loss our friendship thats why i m waiting for a right opportunity...
nutz: how could u think so... you r my world kartik... i love you
kartik: what happened jaan why r u crying?
nutz; i m missing u soo much... i just wanna to hug you
kartik: hey sweetheart dont cry plz i cant see u crying i have a surprised for you, if u want ur surprise then plz dont cry and give a smile
nutzs mood light up hearing about the surprise.. ok no more tear...
kartik: good girl now go to bed i will talk to you tomorrow..
nutz: but kartik my surprise?
kartik: i will give it tomorrow... now take some rest... i love you
nuzt: love u too...

hey guyz plz click the like button and leave your valuble comment its encourage me to write further...

Edited by aiyathasan - 12 years ago

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Anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Sorry for being late to comment.
Part 3 = it was really a superb update .. Loved the convo btw raya.. Part 4 = wow..!! That was indeed a very beautiful part. A hint of suspense..? Lets see hw raya come close.. Part 5 = what can i say..? A total sweet and romantic update.. What is in the past..? Building suspense in ur story..? Nice . Hope nevik make some plan soon.. It was really beautiful.. Update soon..

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

its going good. Love the way u highlighted on other person, like om Vikram Neha then convo b/w KK and Natasha and then with Karthik, I loved ur way, continue ASAP

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aiyathasan

@aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Pinkjali
Sorry for being late to comment.
Part 3 = it was really a superb update .. Loved the convo btw raya.. Part 4 = wow..!! That was indeed a very beautiful part. A hint of suspense..? Lets see hw raya come close.. Part 5 = what can i say..? A total sweet and romantic update.. What is in the past..? Building suspense in ur story..? Nice . Hope nevik make some plan soon.. It was really beautiful.. Update soon..

its okay dear... its really nice of you that u read my ff and left your sweet comment

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