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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continued..

While bending back.. The lace of her dark gown get entangled with the button of his kurtha..
Priya thinking.. Wah kya mauka hai.. And smiles..
She bends down close to his face.. He is looking in her naughty eyes.. Her lusciois lips are so inviting.. He has practically stopped breathing.. She pulls one string.. slightly revealing her (you know).. He is being driven out of his senses.. He looks at her beautiful fingers playing with the strings near her chst.. She slowly untangles the string from his button.. She can feel his breath speeding up,. She looks at his eyes which refuse to take themselves off her lips now.. She slowly parts her lips an goes closer.. He want to kiss them.. The thirst of five years five cms away..
Priya: thinking.. Bas karo Priya.. And says..kya hua Mr. Kapoor..
Ram: stammerring.. Ky.. Kya hua..?
Priya: goes closer and says in a seductive voice.. Itna tand hai.. Aap lal kyu horahe ai?
Ram: He is lost.. Nahi.. Nahi toh..
Priya: smiles.. She moves back.. Turns her back to him and lies down..
Ram moves his hand towards her back and puts it on her shoulder..
Priya: Turns towards him and says.. Kuch chahiye kya..?
He nods and gets off the bed..
He goes to the washroom and splashes water on his face..
Thinking.. Yeh kya horaha hai mujhe.. Yeh priya bhi..Paanch saal baad bhi aisa kyu horaha hai.. Usne kuch kiya bhi nahi.. Soja Ram.. And wipes his face with a towel.. He looks at his hand.. They have turned red.. And his wound is hurting..

He comes and slips in.. His hand hurting..
Ram: Priya..
Priya: ji.. And turbs towards him.. She notices that his hurt hand has turned red.. Thinking.. Itna zor se quilt ko pakadliya.. Lagtha hai maine kuch zyada hi..
She takes his hand an asks him to turn towards her.. He obeys..
She puts his hand on top of a pillow..
Priya: Ab tik hai?
Ram: Bada takiya nahi hai?
She notices his discomfort.. She gets up and goes to the cupboard looking for a bigger pillow she doesnt find any.. She slips back into the bed comes closer abd puts his hand on her waist..
Priya: Ab tik hai..?
Ram just closes his eyes enjoying the proximity and says a hmm..
He immediately drifts off to sleep..

In KM:

Vik: Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai.
Neha: Haan bolo..
Vik: Chalo mere saath..
They go RAYA room and vik opens a drawer..
He shows the photos to Neha..
Neha: Yeh kya hai.. Worried.. Yeh sab jhoot hai.. Looking at photos wgich show Priya and Rajat tigether abd very close..
Vik: mujhe pata hai.. Lekin Ramne inki wajahse aise react kiya..
Neha: lekin yeh sab toh ghar me hua tha..
Vik: what!! ?
Neha: I mean Ayesha jab ayi thi.. She slipped and accidentally pushed priya joh Rajat pe gir gayi bas.. Lekin yeh kisne itne ajjeb positions pe photos keencha hai?
Both: Omg..
Vik: hume priya ko batana hoga..
Neha: Haan.. Ayesha itna gir sakthi hai.. Chi..
Vik: ek aur baat hai Neha..
Neha: Haab bolo..
Vik: Mein tijhe divorce nahi dena chahtha.. I didnt know ke tumhe pata nahi tha.. Neha with tears in her eyes just hugs him..
Vik: Neha why dont we go to NY.. Priya ko bhi batadenge.. And usko humaari zaroorat hai.. Aur waise bhi.. I think we need some time off responsibilities..

Nutz and Karthik who heard the convo..
Nutz: Bilkul.. With her signature smile.. Hum bacchon ko sambhaal leng aur khush kabri bhi dedenge.. Enjoy..
Karthik: Waise bhi Booking half an hour mein hojaayegi.. Toh aap packing karlijiye..

They pack their stuff..
Scene splits showing karthik and nutz leaving for Amritsar and Vikneha leaving for New York..



To be continued..

Steamier update coming tomorrow.. Well the precap is included in the next part..

Plz feel free to comment or criticize! Hope you enjoyed the update..

Love,
L.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
kitna tadparahi hain priya ram ko n u too jaldi update karo yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
😕Your Ff is neither Indian ishtyle nor American nor English style.pl it is Greek and latin to me.My tho gadha hoon.Sorry.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: sahana747

😕Your Ff is neither Indian ishtyle nor American nor English style.pl it is Greek and latin to me.My tho gadha hoon.Sorry.



Oh.. Kya hua? Kuc galat likha maine?
Could you plz specify so my next update will b better plz..
Abd sorry for the confusion..

Love,
L.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
an now when u update next plz soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Very nice Please update soon
sushfiza thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Abrupt interruption in seductive action

thanks...
keep it up priya...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
update kab doge??? eagerly waiting..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Sorry for the short update.. A little buzy.. Will put big updates from Monday..


Continued..

It about 9.00 am in NY..

Ram and Priya sleeping peacefully.. Suddenly Ram starts snoring.. And Priya opens her eyes, she looks at Ram and then the clock..
Priya thinking.. Are nao bajgaye aur abhi tak soyi hoon.. Kya Priya.. She tries to lift Rams hand to keep it on a pillow.. But Ram instinctively moves his head towards the crook of her neck snuggling closer.. Priya is completely thrown off guard.. Chills run through her body.. She shakes herself out thinking.. Are Priya agar tu yaha aur der keliye laiti rahi toh.. Vishwamitr, Menaka ka tapsa Bang karlenge..
She quickly slips off placing his hands on her pillow..

She goes to the wash room.. Freshens up, makes some coffee and starts thinks.. Aaj keliye toh kuch nahi hai karnekeliye..

In Amritsar:
Nutz while putting Pihu and Khush to sleep..
Nutz: Karthik Priya ko batadiya kya ki Vik Neha waha aarahe hai?
Karthik: Are mein toh bhul hi gaya.. Abhi phone kartha hoon.. And calls..

Karthik: Di good morning..
Priya: Good morning.. Pohonchgaye tum chaaro?
Karthik: Di woh kya hai na.. Vik Neha NY aarahe hai.. Aapko 12.00 bhaje unhe pick up karna hai..
Priya: Kya? Extremely happy.. Thinking Great! Ab toh we can to something to solve everything between them.. Haan tik hai.. Waha sab tik hai na? Aur Pihu?
Karthik: Woh sogayi hai.. Di woh yaha aap dono ko yaad bhi nahi karthi.. Saara din khel khud mein.. Chali jaathi hai.. Toh aap chinta mat kijiye..
Priya: Thanks Karthik.. Khayal rakhna..
Karthik: Bye di
Priya: Bye..

Tik hai toh mein ready hojaathi hu..
About 30 mins later ram gets up.. yawning.. Rubbing his eyes..
He finds that Priya is not there beside him.. Thinking.. nahaane gayi hogi..
Priya walks out of the bathroom in a Red saree.. with wet hai holding a towel in her hand.. She seems to be all ready.. A red bindi.. Some kaajal and maskara enhancing her eyes.. And for a change a slightly dark shade of Red lipstick.. uff! Looking hot after a steamy shower.. She slowly walks towards the dressing table..
Priya: Good morning.. Ab haat kaisa hai..
Ram: His jaws have dropped wide.. Thinking.. Aaj hi isko itna hot lagna tha.. Aur kya hai yaar.. low waist pehena hai.. Aur woh choli ki daaga aisi hi chodi hai..
Priya: Smiling.. Aaj bohot maza aagaya.. bina kuch kiye hi yeh haalat hai.. Says..Mr. Kapoor! Kaha khogaye..
Ram: Kamar..
Priya: Unable to control her laugh.. Manages to stop with a smile and gives a Kya? look.. Kya kaha aapne..
Ram: realizing what he had just said.. Nahi kuch nahi.. Good morning..
Priya: Smiling.. Jaake kaldi nahaalijiye.. Aapka breakfast aur medicines ka waqt hogaya.. Aur haan hume jaake Vik aur Neha ko pick up karna hai..
Ram: Kya.. Woh yaha.. kyu?
Priya: Pehele woh aajaaye phir poochlenge.. Aur haan abhi tak kisi ko nahi pata hai ki aap yaha hai..
Ram just nods and rushes to the baathroom.. He goes in to the shower and switches it on.. thinking.. Pehele Raath ko.. Ab din mein bhi.. Thankgod Vik Neha aarahe hai.. warna mein toh handle hi nahi karpaatha..
Priya gets breakfast ready and keeps it on the teepoy in the room..
Ram comes out and looks at kheer..
Ram: Kheer.. chi.. Yeh mein nahi khaunga..
Priya: Gives him a sherni look.. And says Kuch kaha aapne?
ram quietly goes and sits down.. And Picks up the spoon still angry with Priya for the kheer..
Ram.. Aaah.. As his hands hurt..
Priya: Worried Rushes to his side..Yeh.. Aap.. kya karrahe hai..
Ram: Still angry..Kya karraha hu..
Priya: Chodiye..
Ram: Nahi.. And pushes her hand..
Priya: Thinking aise nahi maanege.. faking.. ouch..
Ram: Sorry.. Gives the spoon to her..
Priya ab shuru.. Enjoy the punishment Mr. Kapoor.. whispers in his ears.. Its ok.. And gives a kiss on his earlobe..
ram feels like a 1000volts eletric pulse is passing through his body..
She comes back and feeds him.. He is unable to control himself.. With every spoon her smooth hands coming so close.. And yet he cant touch them..
He is so nervouse that he finshes breakfast in 5 mins..
Priya: Very good Mr. kapoor ap itna jaldi khaye..With a naughty smaile..
He nods..
Priya: Muh kholiye..
She takes the medicine and puts it in his mouth.. Purposely touch his lips and tracing her fingers till the end..
He feels like he's melting awayas he keeps looking at her lips which are held captive on side by her teeth... He gulps water.. And Priya gets up to leave..
He instinctivly holds her pallu.. And pulls them.. Priya turns looking at him naughtily.. He is lst in her eyes.. She Holds the pallu with one hand and comes closer.. She moves her head towards his jawline.. Nuzzling his neck.. He closes his eyes and lets go of the pallu..
Priya immeadiately steps back and says.. You are smelling nice today Mr. Kapoor..
Ram: snapping back to reality.. He is breathing heavily.. Her touch after five years.. Her scent.. her soft skin against his..
Priya: Mr. Kapoor I think we should leave.. We dont want to be late now..
Ram: Thinking.. Vik ab tuhi bachaa sakthahai.. Hann.. And springs out..
Priya.. walks to the kitchen..
Ram comes out ready in his signature attire..Priya looks at him and says nice.. He is overjoyed..
Ram: Thankyou.. Chale.?

They both leave to the airport..

To be continued..

Precap..

Ram is constantly disturbed by Priya's moves while driving..
Vik Neha are overjoyed to see Ram with Priya..

Lots of steam coming up between the couple..
My next update will be coming a little late.. Final submissions going on.. Sorry everyone..
Feel free to comment and criticize..

Love,
L.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
priya is so naughty
Edited by 123fiza1 - 12 years ago

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