FF: After The Maha Episode THE END PG 22 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: leo4ever


chalo then update soon😆


Aap sab ka hukumn sarankoh par.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
hi sorry but i didnt like that slapping marathon🤢
n den u r making rajjo as hero n raya as immature
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: ramsakshiroxxx

hi sorry but i didnt like that slapping marathon🤢

n den u r making rajjo as hero n raya as immature


Not everything is what it seems.. Sorry everyone.. there are some hot updates comming from my side.. I cant afford to kill the fun by clearing the air through comments.. So vear with me..

Love,
L.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: nehaprasad1994


Not everything is what it seems.. Sorry everyone.. there are some hot updates comming from my side.. I cant afford to kill the fun by clearing the air through comments.. So vear with me..

Love,
L.

ya will wait its k no need to say sorry yar i actually cudnt digest or imagine dat part for raya
bhagwan kare we will neva such things on BALH
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Part 5: Not you.. Not me.. Just Us!

Ram enter a cab.. His hand is hurting.. He has to nurse it.. He is tiered and cold.. He looks at the starry night..

Priya looks closes the window and turns on the heater.. She remember how Ram had described this farm house..

Flashback.. A few days after the conssumation of their marriage..

Ram: Priya.. Maine humaareliye ek Farmhouse kharida hai..
Priya: In her usual.. Dont waste money dialog.. Iski kya zaroorat hai.. Itna bada ghar hai.. Aur aapke paas toh bohoth saare farm houses hai.. Anf goes on..
Ram: Pulling her close towards him.. Tum bolna band karogi ya..
Priya blushes..
Ram: holds her chin up and says.. Priya jab bhi hume zindagi mein.. Koi raasta na dikhe.. Toh hum NY mein joh Farmhouse kareeda hai.. Waha jaayenge.. Waha sirf humaari yaadein hai.. Meine us chote se ghar ko humaari chote chote yadoon ke tasveeron se sajaaya hai..
Priya: lost in his words.. Kya hum sab waha jaasakthe hai ?
Ram: laughing.. Nahi priya.. Woh ek bedroom ka chota ghar hai.. Agar sab aayenge toh unhe garden mein sona padega..
They laugh at Ram's stayement..
Ram: waise bhi.. Woh sirf humdono ka ghar hai Mrs. Kapoor..

Priya comes out of her thoughts.. An goes to make some tea.. She is not able to sleep due to jet lag..

The door bell rings..

Priya: is waqt kaun hosaktha hai..
Opens the door..
Priya: Aap..? Is startled to find Ram..
Ram: Tum.. ? Haan mein.. He starts rubbing his hands due to th chilly winds..
Priya: Andar aayiye.. She sees that he is unabl to pull the cabin baggage..and says.. Chodiye..
Ram lets go.. An softly asks woh House keeper kaha hai..
Priya: I gave her an off for christmas.. And take his luggage intocthe room..
While Ram goes to the kitchen..

Priya walks in.. Seeing that he is cold.. Pours the tea into two cups a little more for him..

Ram: Thankyou..

There is silence.. They have forgiven eachother.. But there i something lost..
They finish their tea and priya takes the dishes to the kitchen..
Ram goes to the room and sees that all his things have been neatly unpacked and kept in place.. He goes to the washroom to change..

Priya comes to the room.. Thinking to herself.. Yaha kya karrahe hai.. Joh bhi hai.. Apna khayal bilkul nahi rakthe.. Dressing bhi kitna karaab hai.. Haath tik kaise hogi..

Ram comes out of the washroom trying to button his kurta.. He flinches with pain as his han hurts..
Priya: Yeh aap kya karrahe hai.. Comes and takes his hand..
Asks him to go and sit on the bed.. He obeys.. She brings his kit from the cupboard and dresses his hand..
Ram is lost in her eyes.. Her silky hair let down.. He is not able to comprehend her actions.. She didnt shout or scream.. She just let him in.. And mow sh is sittin in front of him looking breath taking in a black gown..

He snaps out of his thoughts..
Priya: hogaya.. Takes the kit back and come near him.. Ab aap sojaayiye.. Thakgay honge.. And he obeys.. She pulls the quilt over him.. And says good night..

Ram: softly good night.. Thinking.. Yaha itna tand hai.. Kash Priya bhi.,
To his surprise she goes over to the other side and slips in.. Facing her back to him and closes the lights..

BG..

Hum tum kitn paas hai
Kitne door hai chand sitaare..
Sach pucho toh man ko laage
Ssaare yeh pal sapne..

Bade acche lagthe hai..
Yeh taare.. Nazaarein.. Yeh baatein aur tum..

Hope you all liked th only RAYA update..

Feel free to comment and criticize..

Precap:

Priya: Yeh.. Aap.. kya karrahe hai..
Ram: Kya karraha hu..
Priya: Chodiye..
Ram: Nahi..

Hope you will like the comin updates..

Love,
L.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Awesome ff..
Read ol d partzz...
Luved it...
Plz continue... eagerly waitin for RaYa romance...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Bade acche lagthe hai.. yeh updates but
Bade bad lagthe hai..yeh to be contiue😳😳😳😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Hi everyone! Glad you liked it..
My update will be delayed today.. Im sorry..
all suggestion comments an critiscism is well accepted.. Do let me know if you would like something to be a part of the story..
Love,
L.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
thnks but tell reaosn first i still cant digest what happened
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Reading the precap i m going mad update soon yaar

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