FF: After The Maha Episode THE END PG 22

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This is my first post hope you like it!

Anushka with rage in her eyes fires the gun.. Priya and Mona scream.. They are in a trance.. Ram is down, blood all over his blazer an hands.. Priya rushes to him.everyone is standing around in shock.. Tears are Rollin down their cheeks.. Is this a nightmare.. Rajat is unable to comprehend.. He picks up hi phone and calls do the ambulance..
If you find this interesting I shall write an ff..

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Love,
L.

Part 1 - Emotional Turmoil

Rajath asks Vineet if all the formalities have been completed.. Binders nods and leave to talk to the police.. Priya is not able to control her tears.. Mona is expressionless.. There is nothing in this world that could make either one of them come out of the trance..

Priya: Bringing herself together - Mona samhaalo apne aap ko.. Meri tarah dekho!
Mona: Looks at her with tears brimmibg her eyes.. Meri wajah se yeh sab hua hai Priya..
Priya: Nahi Mona.. Kismat ke aage hum kuch kar nahi sakthe.. Hume apne aap ko sambhaalna hoga.. Bachon ke liye.. Humaare parivaar ke liye..
Rajat: Mrs. Kapoor is right..
Just then There is a small pat on Mona's back.. Priya and Mona turn back.. Both their eyes apologizing..

Who is this?
Im not very good at writing.. But if yo guys think its ok.. Ill start writing seriously..

Thankyou.

Love,
L.

its nice but give a long one this is tooo short

lamba karu and raya pe fcus, pls dnt make rajat the mahan 🤢

Continued...

Very nice continue karo yaar

thra sa confusing hai liken contnue

You write very well... Plzz continue...

Part 2: A woman's rage.

Nutz rushes to the door while Vikram an Neha go to finish up their packing..

Nutz: Priya.. Aap yaha? Magar aap toh.. Bhai ko aapki zaroorath hai..
Priya: Ignores her question and asks her if she has got her laptop..
Nutz: Gives it to her knowing that Priya knows what she is doing.
Priya: Karthik ka flight kab hai?
Nutz: 3 ghaton mein.. Puzzled with Priya's behaviour.. Priya kya aap tik hai?
Priya: closes her eyes and calms herself.. Natasha im leaving to the US tomorrow afternoon.. Mujhse koi sawaal mat puchna.. Abhikeliye mujhe kapde chahiye.. Mein office jarahi hu..
Nutz: Thinking.. (Joh hua uske baad kisiko aapse kuch bhi kehene ki haq nahi hai) Ji Priya mein abhi laathi hu..

Nutz feels terrible and sorry for what happened before they left for the party and even worse the ambulance..

Neha and Vikram enter the living room..

Both: Priya.. Suno..

Priya looks at them with an empty smile..: Jab kisise pyar karthe ho toh uska izzath bhi karna seekho.. Pyaar karna kaafi nahi hota.. Use nibhaana bhi zarrori hota hai..
She leaves to the guest room picks up the Dark blue cotton saree kept and moveto the bathroom..

Vikram and Neha hug eachother..
Vik: Neha yeh sab kya hogaya.. Priya ke saath itna galath kaise hosaktha hai..
Neha: I cant even recognise her Vikram..
Vikram looks at her and says he'll get her some water..
Neha turns and with tears in her eyes she says : Im so sorry.. Kash mujhe pata hota ki Rehaan zinda hai.. Vikram kisi aur ki galthi hume kyu bhukathni padthi hai.. I wish I knew ke Rehaan zinda hai.. Toh aaj yeh naubath hi nahi aathi..

to be continued.. How is this? Do you think im going in the right track?

Thankyou.
Love,
L.

wow man this story is really nice & gripping... plz update next part soon plz plz plz ;-)