FF: After The Maha Episode THE END PG 22 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Awesomeee...
Luved Priya in dis naughty avatar ...
Plz plz continue sooon...
Eagerly waitin for ur next romantically hottt update... :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
hey y ram is controlling his emotions coz of his gulit???
but seriously this is truly torture for him😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Continued..

They Sit in the car.. Priya is driving of course.. And bechaara Ram is sitting beside her..
Priya starts the car and says: Ram.. Maine driving toh sikhli hai.. par yeh gears mein todi problem hoti hai (bluffing ofcourse).. So could you tell me when I should be changing?
Ram: Haan tik hai..
Ram tries to put his seat belt.. But is unable to.. So Priya bends over pulling his seat belt.. He stares at her face that is so close to his.. She then moves her hand under the belt and over his chest to straighten it.. Ram is lost in her touch.. And click.. She goes back.. Puts her belt an starts the car..
Priya has a nice time Ram instructing her..
They reach the airport.. Priya takes the car to the parking lot.. She pretend as if she is finding it hard to put the reverse gear..
Ram: Chodo.. And Puts his uninjured hand on the gear.. Immediately Priya puts her hand over his and conviniently changes the gear.. He is lost Her smooth hands doing wonders.. He looks at her.. She stops the car and removes the keys..
Priya: Aise kya dekh rahe hai?
Ram: Kuch nahi.. Chale..
Priya pushes the button and his seat belt is off.. She turns to open the door..
He holds her hand.. She smiles and without turning says kya hua..
Ram: Tumhaari dori ki daaga..
Priya knows and says hmm daaga kya?
Ram: Khula hai..
Priya: Smirks and pushes her shoulders back.. And moves her hair to her left with her left hand purposely touching her back..
Ram keeps looking at how she traces her finger accross..
Priya: Toh jaldi bandiye..
Ram moves his hand to take the thread and touches her back.. Priya arches her shoulders backwards..
This drives him crazy.. He ties the dori and moves his fingers down towards her hook.. She closes her eyes lost in his moves.. And blushes..
She knows what he is upto.. She puts her hair back and says.. Chale?
Ram: Thinking.. Wah.. Her skin is still so soft..
Priya waves her hand in front of his face and says.. Chale?
Ram: Coming back.. Nods in positive..

They get out of the car and walk towards the airport.. NehaVik are looking around.. Their eyes searching for Priya..
ram And Priya rush towards them..
Both Vik and Neha are shocked..

Vik: Staring at Priya.. Stammering Bha..Bhabi.. Aap itna hot lagrahi hai..
Neha: Priya.. WOW!! Ek min.. turns to Vik Kya Vikram tum bh.. Bhabi ko koi line maartha hai kya?
All 3 of them start laughing..
Ram: Thinking.. Vik ne bhi isko hot boldiya... Little jealous..
Vik Neha.. Noticing Ram.. ( Priya was looking so hot.. They hadnt bothered to see who was standing beside her.. ;) )
Vik: Ram tu yaha? Hugs him..
Neha: Fatty.. Wah.. Hugs him..
They all go to the car.. Vik offers to drive..
Ram and Priya sitting in the back seat.. Priya tells them how Ram is here..

Neha: Thinking.. Oh toh indono ke beech abhi sab tik nahi hai.. Ab mujhe aur Vikram ko kuch karna padega..
Ram tells Vikram that they are staying at their farm house and there is no place..
Vik: Toh tik hai na.. Hum dono hall mein sojaayenge.. priya aur Neha andar..
Ram thinking.. Yeh accha idea hai.. Thankgod.. And Smiles..
Priya: Thinking.. Agar indono ko milaana hai toh yeh nahi chalega.. Kya hai Yaar..
VikNeha start laughing..
Neha: Are dont worry.. Hum dono ke beech sila hogaya..
Ram and Priya are very happy..
Priya: Im so happy yaar.. I was just thinking how to get you both back together.. Ab toh.. No problem.. Congrats yaar..
Vik: Haan bhabi.. And woh kya hai na.. I was thinking We should have one last individual days out.. Yaani.. Aapdono aur mein aur Ram..
Priya: Thats a great idea.. as she wants to discuss with Neha..
Ram thinking.. Wah thankgod.. Vikram se baath hojaayega..

They reach the farmhouse.. And set out for a nice afternoon..

To be continued..

Precap: Some spicy disscussions b/w Ram and Vikram.. And Priya and Neha..

And ofcourse.. A steamy romantic night!

Love,
L.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Plz leave your comments everyone.. The next update will be on Monday.. You can put in what you want to read.. Have a great weekend..

Criticism and comments inspire my writing so dont hesitate..

Love,
L.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Superbbb Just waiting for Monday
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Aweesomeee...
Luved it ...
Plz plz update sooon...
Eagerly waitin for ur next romantic update... :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
u r too gud.. awesome dear.. plz plz plz continue asap..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Part 7: Love is in the air..

Ram and Vikram decide to go to the Bar..
They sit at table order for some whisky and some food..
Ram: Tum aur Neha.. I mean kaise sab solve hogaya yaar?
Vikram tells him everthing.. Continuing.. Usko pata bhi nahi tha yaar..
Ram: Hmm.. Accha hua ab sab tik hogaya..
They start talkin about buissness and some deals..

Meanwhile..
Neha and Priya go shopping.. They buy a lot of different thing for everyone in the family..

They come back home tired..
They put everything in place an sit on the couch..
Priya: Chai banaalu?
Neha: haan yaar.. Thak gayi hu..
Priya makes some tea.. An sits with neha..
Neha: Priya.. Tumne Saari legal formalities k baare mein sab bataaya.. Abd honestly.. Bohot accha kiya tune.. Lekin ek baat poochu?
Priya: Haan pucho na..
Neha: Ram itn khamosh kyu hai.. Kuch bol nahi raha tha.. And smiles..
Priya: Woh main..
Neha interrupts.. Haan lekin itna bhi kya yaar... And winks..
Priya: Tumhe kaise pata? A little confused..
Neha: Are look at you! You look like a bomb.. Aur Ram.. Uske aankein tumhaari aage peeche ghum rahi thi..
Priya tells her what shes been doing..
Neha's jaws drop.. Eyes wide open..
Neha: haaw Priya! Super yaar..
Priya: Its time to teach him a lesson..
Neha remembers something and says.. Ek min Priya..
She come with the photographs..
Neha: Yeh hume Ram ke cupboard mein mila..
Priya is shocked looking at them.. Thinking toh yeh photographa the..
Neha: Mujhe lagtha hai.. Ki..
Priya: Ayesha ne kiya hai..
Neha: haan..
Priya shows the email and recordings..
Neha is shocked..
Neha: Yeh toh bohot galat hai yaar.. Bechaare Ram ko kitna..
Priya interrupts.. Kya Neha unko mujpe itna bhi barosa nahi hai..
Neha: with naughtiness in he eyes.. Haan uskeliye sazaa bhi mil rahi hai na..
And both of them laugh..
Neha: waise bhi.. Tu accha kar rahi hai yaar.. Zyada bhav denge toh hum inke aadat banjaathe hai.. Lag raho!
Priya: Haan jab tak Ram mujpe apn hak nahi jamaayenge.. Tab tak.. And winks at Neha..
Neha: Lekin yeh haq waq.. Kya bol rahi ho Priya?
Priya: Abhi itne saal je baad mile hai.. Tik se mujhe patni nahi maanthe hai.. Toh unko dubaari mujse shaadi karni hogi!
Neha: Good idea yaar.. Mujhe aur Vikram ko bhixkarna chahiye.. Maza aayega..
Neha: Waise Priya mein tadpaaungi nahi vikram ko.. Toh aaj raat aap dono kamre ke baahar mat aana.. And winks at her..
They have fun talking about the family kids and before they know it its dinner time..

In th bar:

Vikram is a little surprised at how quite Ram has been.. Ram has not been drinking..
Vik: Ab bolega ki kya hua..
Ram: kuch nahi..
Vik: Yahi bolraha hai tab se..
Ram: Kya karu yaar Vikram.. Priya itni hot lagrahi hai kal raat se.. Aur mein use chu bhi nahi saktha..
Vik: Also in the same mood.. Haan yaar.. Neha ko chue bina nahi reh saktha ab toh 6 mahine hogaye hai..
Ram: kyu tadpaathe hai yaar itna..?
Vik: Neha zyada kuch nahi kahegi yaar.. Toh aaj tum dono room ke baahar mat aana..
Ram: Yeh kya hai yar Vikram? Mein kal raath se kitna mushkil se control karraha hu.. Mujhe laga ki tum dono aake kabab mein haddi banjaaoge aur mein aaraam se..
Vik: ek min ek min Ram.. Tu control kyu kar raha hai yaar? Woh teri biwi hai..
Ram: The scene where Priya tells him "You will never touch me!" comes in front of his eyes..
Tu nahi samjega yaar.. And gulps a glass of water!

At the FH:
Priya and Neha make dinner..
There is a knock on the door.. Priya opens the door and finds Vikram and Ram..
They come and have dinner.. Neha and Vikram are lost in eachothers eyes..
Ram has been looking at Priya with anger and loonging in his eyes.. Priya notices that.. Tginking.. Abhi tak aise ghir rahe hai..

Ram and Priya wish VikNeha good night and go to their room.. Priya walks with a glass of water for Rams medicines..
Priya: Change karlijiye... Aur dawai lijiye..
Ram changes and comes.. He is a little angry as he cannot touc his woman
But he quietly comes and sits on the bed..
Priya gives him the medicines.. He take them and pops them in his mouth and drinks the water..
She takes everything and keeps it neatly.. And brings his nursing kit.. She neatly dresses his hand.. He is staring into her dark eyes.. She notices that he i longing for her.. She move her fingers on hi jawline and then down his neck..
Ram closes he eyes in pleasure..
Priya: Smiling.. Aapne bohot kal se shave nahi kiya hai Mr. Kapoor abd walk to the wardrobe to keep the kit inside.. She closes the wardrobe door and turns around..
She looks at Ram who is in full rage trying to control himself.. She looks at him thinking.. Mein aapki hu Ram.. Haq jamaayiye mujpe..
Ram thinking.. Agar ek aur baar tune aisa kiya Priya toh mein apne aapko rokhunga nahi.. Aakir tumhaara pati hu. Haq hai apni biwi par..
Ram feels thirsty looking at Priya..
Ram thinking.. Are ab isko dekhkar pyaa kyi lagrahi hai..
Priya is drinking water and a little is left in the glass..
Ram: Priya mujhe pyaas lagi hai..
Priya looks at Ram knowing why hes feeling that way thinking.. Ab mujhe aur Behekaana padega..

To be continued..

How did you like this folks?
Feel free to comment or criticize!

Love,
L.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Thanks for awesome update..
I want exactly what you mentioned in last line of precap...RaYa night..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
😉😃😃😃yaar kuch zayda nahi horaha ram poor man😭

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